The Straight Man's Unlucky Time Travel Story

It's so well written, I really want to see the protagonist slap these people in the face and get revenge.

It's good-looking. There are no golden fingers. It relies on the right time, place and people. The relationship between the two male protagonists didn't start and I wasn't too anxious. The follow-up was quite bumpy (mainly due to different ideas and times). It was quite good to open up at the end. It's not the kind of two people who are together for the rest of their lives. Love is about mutual exploration. Shouya is not overly pretentious because of the role of a straight man, and his emotions are just right.

I was really annoyed to catch this shitty yellow button all at once👿, but the plot is really interesting!

Advantages: 1. It is a rare ancient chapter about long-term love. It can break through the limitations of the times and love only one person. It is quite good. 2. After clarifying the relationship, the emotional drama is okay 3. Overall, it's okay to read. Except for the logic that needs to be improved, there are no big surprises. Good and evil are repaid. Disadvantages: 1. The previous house fight is too long, and there is almost no emotional drama between attack and reception. 2. As a modern person, the protagonist, Shou, almost never puts forward any modern opinions in this article except for ideological concepts, which makes me sad. Let's not talk about things like soap, glass, and petroleum that require knowledge accumulation. It's okay to give your husband some advice and get a newspaper to enlighten people's wisdom. [Hold face] Heavy snow blocks roads and houses collapse. It shouldn't be too difficult to get concrete. [Hold face] Although what I want to read is ancient Danmei, not infrastructure literature, but they have all traveled through time, and they are very powerful. It is really unreasonable to not use modern knowledge to improve the quality of life. 3. You can't use your brain when reading the article. There are many logical problems. I saw that the sister who was affected was forced to trip and fainted at the door of the room.

Invincible is super good to read, although it's not as exciting. I was [angry] when I read it. The protagonist is also awesome. I felt like after reading dozens of chapters, hahaha... I should have persuaded me to quit the book when I saw the title, instead of reading it here. It's the same as that romance novel [laughs].

I can really calm down and read the beginning of the book. Everyone is ruthless. This book really breaks the bottom line of readers' tolerance. I think that after reading this book, I must have a strong psychological endurance. When I read it, I felt like the author was dancing on my head. . . . . . Ah AAAA makes me so angry! ! ! !

This novel is a slow-burning novel, and it is indeed difficult for some readers who like refreshing novels in the early stage. However, in a feudal background, a child is helpless, and it is difficult to fight back with his own strength when oppressed. Moreover, the protagonist is also a growth type, and will get better and better in the future. Regarding the emotional line, some people think the plot of King Jing's Chinese medicine is ridiculous, but later on, when it comes to King Jing's Chinese medicine, it is caused by many factors. I think it's normal that he didn't notice it for a while. Later, it was a self-guided strategy. Later, Zicheng gradually developed feelings for King Jing (maybe he didn't realize it himself?), And then there is the plot line. I think the further it gets, the more interesting it is🤔️. I really can't help but want to read the next chapter as soon as possible. Finally, the author! ! ! Quick! Renew! ! ! I am the one who is wronged! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's good to watch. It's a bit boring at the beginning. The protagonists meet a little late, but it starts to get interesting in the middle. Especially what happens after arriving in Beidu, when they face natural disasters together, and when they fight against the prince together in the end, they are all written in a way that makes people feel immersed in them. The most important thing is that they were together in ancient times, and they also met in modern times. The ending is very good.

As long as you can survive the front part, you can still read the back part. Many people read it for a while and then leave. There is nothing they can do about it. They don't have the patience to read this kind of slow-burning article. But the rating is low, and it really shouldn't be. You can't give it a low rating just because you can't stand the first bit. Overall, it's okay. There aren't that many powerful protagonists, and ordinary protagonists can also be worth watching.

Although this book is slow, I can't stop reading it. It's really good to read. I haven't seen such a long-lasting love in a long time. Both of them are good kids and will like each other. It's not as fast as most of the books nowadays, but it's slow and slow. The writing may not be very good, but I personally think that the description of the protagonist completely makes up for it. Both of them are good kids. I want to see them love each other until death.

I feel that it's okay. The main character Shou in the front is sometimes smart and sometimes stupid. It's just for the sake of the later plot. I don't like the suggestions. The emotional line is not that good. It comes out suddenly. It may be because Shou is staying by Gong's side, which makes Gong care about Shou. He thinks he is the only one who stays by his side. This should be the case. I hope the author's works will get better and better in the future. The storyline is quite good.

A life that is both real and unreal. I still have regrets (I don't have a car). It's not a magnificent one, but it's surprisingly comfortable. There's no obvious cheats. Anyway, it's good-looking. I love watching it.

The pace of the story is relatively slow, and the protagonist's emotions come naturally, and then the emotions heat up through the occurrence of some major events. This is one of my favorite stories. The overall storyline is not broken, and I personally think it is worth watching.

Great, great little story. I was drawn in from the beginning. The plot is very compact and the plot is very novel. There are always some unexpected situations along the way. The two protagonists are both unlucky and lucky. There is no golden finger or system in this book. The battles between princes are fought between you and me. This is right! They were all taught by the same father and from the same palace. If you study hard, how much difference can there be! I really like the part where farewell is the reunion at the end. It seems that Zizheng has memories when he travels to ancient times, but he doesn't have memories when he travels to modern times. However, Hua Chenchuan has memories, and they will live well in modern times!

This story is really worth reading. Although the first part is very frustrating, the second part is really good. It slowly penetrates and slowly makes the hostility collapse. Many people commented that the protagonist was stupid in the first part. I kept saying he was stupid when I was reading it, but it was excusable because although he knew who killed his mother, grandpa's family and grandma, he was too young at the time and needed to grow up. He had no one who could help him! Then when he grows up, he will get better, and slowly plan what he wants to do! Anyway, the back part is pretty good. I cried when I watched the back part [face covering] It's worth watching, so I gave it four stars. The remaining one is for the front part to encourage the author to make further progress [laughing] Hehe [laughing]

Wow, the author is so awesome! The ancient class interests and the protagonist's desire to survive are both written very well~ It's not the kind of time travel story.

It's really good-looking and the characters are vivid. When will the two male protagonists interact?

Recommended for immersive reading, especially beautiful The author will make you laugh in almost every chapter. The ignorant and naive house fights and palace fights, the novice-like Machiavellian tactics, and the empty-minded protagonist. Highly recommended.

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It's good to watch, but I was too frustrated watching it at the beginning. Although the writing is indeed very good, the emotional line between the two protagonists is also quite sweet. You can watch it if you are not afraid of being frustrated. It will feel better after you see it.

It's not a cool novel. The protagonists grow up slowly. I personally feel that the writing is very good and very real. No other novel gives me a feeling of too fast pace, as if it is an ordinary life in the midst of extraordinary. "What is unusual is their birth at the beginning. What is ordinary is that the protagonists do not have any golden fingers. They do everything by themselves and take the long-term plan." (God will not discuss it with you.) Whatever happens, not everything will suit you, and the world unfolds, not because he is the protagonist, so there will be other places to cater to the protagonist. There are no sudden opportunities, and there is nothing that does not fit the character.) There are not many emotional lines, career is the main focus, and it is very consistent with the dynasty and the identity of the protagonist in the book. Many things are not instantaneous, but proceed as they should be.

It's so good, it stands out among all the novels. I was so excited to read it last night that I watched it at 2am. It's so good! ! ! I'm really looking forward to the development of the story and how the emotional line will develop [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Wow, I haven't seen such an interesting plot in a long time. After reading the plot of the protagonist, I dug out "Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf" overnight to review it again - at least the Big Big Wolf knows how to make traps when catching sheep, and your protagonist will just wait for the opponent to fall to his death. I will also study your writing at home full-time. Your writing reminds me of the free soup in the university cafeteria - there is not much ingredients and the taste is bland.

The writing is very ups and downs, the writing style is very good, and the holes are filled in perfectly. This is the most beautiful one among the two male protagonists. I have never written such a long review, but this one is really beautiful.

It's so beautiful. It made my scalp tingle when I saw it. I couldn't read it alone. It's been a long time since I've seen such a tingling-haired little girl's writing. It's really great [smile][smile]

It's okay, but the middle part surprised me What I originally thought was that after the protagonist met the Sixth Prince on the battlefield, they fell in love for a long time. Who could have imagined that accident would happen? Author, please explain to me. How long has it been since I saw such a bloody plot? Of course, the author's writing style is pretty good, and it's acceptable for viewing. People who are accidentally suppressed by the male protagonist can read it. To be honest, this article is still very well written. If there was no such accident, I could give it five stars, and it would be perfect. Of course, I will still support it. If you can watch it, but you can't stand it, just skip it. Moreover, the author's writing is also very reasonable and truly describes what the struggle in the palace is like. There is no brain in the early stage, but there is brain in the later stage, let's put it this way. The early stage is all foreshadowing. It is recommended to skip and watch the second half directly. The second half is always good. So come on, author!

It's so beautiful. Anyone who has never been frustrated must watch it [smile]

I really like this kind of gradual relationship. It's not love at first sight, nor ups and downs, but as the two get along, time progresses, and they accumulate step by step, and finally achieve a lifelong bond.

There is no golden finger for time travel, and there is no extremely powerful prince. It is just natural to achieve the goal step by step, which is not bad.

I've read Chapter 70. It's so well written. Don't write it so realistically next time. It's really hard for these two poor little people without a backer to stand up. Everyone has their own position and only cooperates when they have the same interests. It's really very humane.