[Slow pace + no system + non-cool writing + traditional martial arts + group portraits + traitorous protagonist]
[I had a seizure in the early stage due to personal reasons. Chapter 64 started to turn into a martial arts historical article. It is written in a traditional dramatic way and contains a moderate amount of crazy jokes. Patience readers of Lao Bai Wen are welcome. Readers who only read pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles should be careful]
Yang Juchang, the iron-gallant god, succeeded the Gao family and became the prime minister of Dali. He spread his military power throughout the world and made great achievements for thousands of years, achieving the achievements of the Three Sovereigns and the Five Emperors.
Reader comments
Gua~ My friend has been blocked, it's so painful.
Rebirth: I am a Dian Lao in Tianlong, a story about an honest man (Dian Lao) who was unexpectedly reborn after being ultimately humiliated and began to rotate the magnetic field, conquering the world with his astonishing wisdom!
Wow, boss, I beg you to hurry up and add a few more chapters. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my mouth and teeth.
It's really cool to have fun writing Dentons and Dragons fans [Learned]
That's great, I still hope Shu Mu Wanqing, the character is quite likable
Fast forward to Mu Wanqing's journey against darkness, and the protagonist realizes the final state
"Dear Ju Chang, if you can feel how I feel about you now, if you can know how much I love you at this moment, you can understand why I do this. Dear Ju Chang, now I want to tell you that I love you the most. I hope this sentence will not be too late. My dear, please promise me to live well."
"Look, Wanqing, the reincarnation of Beiming has happened. You gave me this peerless power... But what's the use of having it? What's the point of having it? Wanqing!! Wow! Wanqing!"
Please watch the next episode - Kill the Author!
It's really good-looking. It has the feel of Jin Yong's martial arts. It's much better than the current system novels with martial arts skin.
Please update more, I feel like there are ants crawling all over me now
The author's other Pokémon book was halfway through and I didn't finish reading it. It's been a while and I can't remember why. But this book written by Tianlong is indeed in line with Dian Lao's taste. Unfortunately, the title and introduction are a little weak. According to my taste, the title of the book could probably be "Dragon: The Happy Demon" or "Dragon: The Iron-Gulled God Marquis". Anyway, the protagonist's experience of being raped can be regarded as the second Zhu Wuyi. Heaven will entrust great responsibilities to people, which means that only by going through hardships can people gain enlightenment and progress. The protagonist of this book had the painful experience of being devoured and wiped out in his previous life, and spent two years working at the bottom of the Tianlong world. After completing his magical skills, he had a great desire to change society, and he was able to work hard for it. Unfortunately, the experience in his previous life still turned into inner demons. But people's hearts are subtle and treacherous. In the previous life, his wife cheated on her and swallowed up the family property. Isn't there a risk of betrayal by the brothers in this life? Why can't we break the gender barrier? Dealing with men and women is nothing more than a difference in details. As long as the core interests are grasped, there is no difference. I believe that the main line of this book is closely related to the protagonist's journey of overcoming his inner demons. I have written more than 100 chapters, and finally urged the author to update quickly!
Author, you want to do great things, great things! There are so few updates, why do you want to do something big?
The author's books have never let me down
Although it's good-looking and quite funny, I felt a little bored when I read Chapter 111. Maybe it's because I'm a slow reader, but I just felt that it wasn't as good as Chi Ye's book. It wasn't strong enough, not powerful enough, and it always felt less interesting. I think I read Chi Ye's book for more than ten hours all night, and even read it. The other books all feel boring. Alas, even Chi Ye's book is sometimes too exciting. Sometimes it's too exciting and makes me feel uncomfortable. Later, it was blocked for a while and when I finished it, I also felt uncomfortable. I don't know if it's a pity or something bad, but I can't forget Chi Ye's book, and I feel uncomfortable no matter what (sad)
So, author, I beg you to come up with another book like Chi Ye. Your last book was originally planned to be added to the bookshelf when there were dozens of more chapters, but unexpectedly it was blocked directly. This is such a pity. It was gone before I even read it. You are really not good at reviewing. You asked me to read it first before blocking it.
He doesn't like women, he likes to do big things, he's quite subversive
The protagonist knows the true story of Blue Dream Company at first glance. It would be even more perfect if he lets the gay guy mess with other people's gays later.
It's really interesting that Tianlong writes so much. The writing style and content show that the author has a deep background and knows a lot about the relevant culture and history. It's very appetizing. In short, it's definitely full of 5 stars.
Do great things! Do something big! GO!
Strong and powerful! So powerful!
Power, power, power!
Hurry, hurry, hurry!
It's very interesting, it's a unique book among fan fictions, it's cool, and it's very enjoyable to write.
Tomato best book, best author
The author's writing style is sharp and well-founded, unlike those novice writers
Hero, we love you
Huge and beautiful teeth
Very creative fan
A very interesting fan asked, "I also made my own framework under the original Jin Yong system, and it can be connected together. The author really put his heart into it."
It's Chinese New Year, it's Chinese New Year!
So awesome, love it, love it
Hee hee hee hee hahaha, it's interesting, it's really 10 or even 9 points interesting.
Strength! Really good at talking! !
Can't get enough of it
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
So crazy! I am a person who demands no female protagonists every day. Suddenly I encountered a misogynistic protagonist, and I felt a little uncomfortable~
Immortal Lord, is that you? Immortal Lord, it's been so hard for me to wait for you.
It sucks, give it a bad review.
Gua~ My friend has been blocked, it's so painful.
Rebirth: I am a Dian Lao in Tianlong, a story about an honest man (Dian Lao) who was unexpectedly reborn after being ultimately humiliated and began to rotate the magnetic field, conquering the world with his astonishing wisdom!
Wow, boss, I beg you to hurry up and add a few more chapters. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my mouth and teeth.
It's really cool to have fun writing Dentons and Dragons fans [Learned]
That's great, I still hope Shu Mu Wanqing, the character is quite likable Fast forward to Mu Wanqing's journey against darkness, and the protagonist realizes the final state "Dear Ju Chang, if you can feel how I feel about you now, if you can know how much I love you at this moment, you can understand why I do this. Dear Ju Chang, now I want to tell you that I love you the most. I hope this sentence will not be too late. My dear, please promise me to live well." "Look, Wanqing, the reincarnation of Beiming has happened. You gave me this peerless power... But what's the use of having it? What's the point of having it? Wanqing!! Wow! Wanqing!" Please watch the next episode - Kill the Author! It's really good-looking. It has the feel of Jin Yong's martial arts. It's much better than the current system novels with martial arts skin. Please update more, I feel like there are ants crawling all over me now
The author's other Pokémon book was halfway through and I didn't finish reading it. It's been a while and I can't remember why. But this book written by Tianlong is indeed in line with Dian Lao's taste. Unfortunately, the title and introduction are a little weak. According to my taste, the title of the book could probably be "Dragon: The Happy Demon" or "Dragon: The Iron-Gulled God Marquis". Anyway, the protagonist's experience of being raped can be regarded as the second Zhu Wuyi. Heaven will entrust great responsibilities to people, which means that only by going through hardships can people gain enlightenment and progress. The protagonist of this book had the painful experience of being devoured and wiped out in his previous life, and spent two years working at the bottom of the Tianlong world. After completing his magical skills, he had a great desire to change society, and he was able to work hard for it. Unfortunately, the experience in his previous life still turned into inner demons. But people's hearts are subtle and treacherous. In the previous life, his wife cheated on her and swallowed up the family property. Isn't there a risk of betrayal by the brothers in this life? Why can't we break the gender barrier? Dealing with men and women is nothing more than a difference in details. As long as the core interests are grasped, there is no difference. I believe that the main line of this book is closely related to the protagonist's journey of overcoming his inner demons. I have written more than 100 chapters, and finally urged the author to update quickly!
Author, you want to do great things, great things! There are so few updates, why do you want to do something big?
The author's books have never let me down
Although it's good-looking and quite funny, I felt a little bored when I read Chapter 111. Maybe it's because I'm a slow reader, but I just felt that it wasn't as good as Chi Ye's book. It wasn't strong enough, not powerful enough, and it always felt less interesting. I think I read Chi Ye's book for more than ten hours all night, and even read it. The other books all feel boring. Alas, even Chi Ye's book is sometimes too exciting. Sometimes it's too exciting and makes me feel uncomfortable. Later, it was blocked for a while and when I finished it, I also felt uncomfortable. I don't know if it's a pity or something bad, but I can't forget Chi Ye's book, and I feel uncomfortable no matter what (sad) So, author, I beg you to come up with another book like Chi Ye. Your last book was originally planned to be added to the bookshelf when there were dozens of more chapters, but unexpectedly it was blocked directly. This is such a pity. It was gone before I even read it. You are really not good at reviewing. You asked me to read it first before blocking it.
He doesn't like women, he likes to do big things, he's quite subversive
The protagonist knows the true story of Blue Dream Company at first glance. It would be even more perfect if he lets the gay guy mess with other people's gays later.
It's really interesting that Tianlong writes so much. The writing style and content show that the author has a deep background and knows a lot about the relevant culture and history. It's very appetizing. In short, it's definitely full of 5 stars.
Do great things! Do something big! GO!
Strong and powerful! So powerful!
Power, power, power! Hurry, hurry, hurry!
It's very interesting, it's a unique book among fan fictions, it's cool, and it's very enjoyable to write.
Tomato best book, best author
The author's writing style is sharp and well-founded, unlike those novice writers
Hero, we love you
Huge and beautiful teeth
Very creative fan
A very interesting fan asked, "I also made my own framework under the original Jin Yong system, and it can be connected together. The author really put his heart into it."
It's Chinese New Year, it's Chinese New Year!
So awesome, love it, love it
Hee hee hee hee hahaha, it's interesting, it's really 10 or even 9 points interesting.
Strength! Really good at talking! !
Can't get enough of it
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
So crazy! I am a person who demands no female protagonists every day. Suddenly I encountered a misogynistic protagonist, and I felt a little uncomfortable~
Immortal Lord, is that you? Immortal Lord, it's been so hard for me to wait for you. It sucks, give it a bad review.