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Far ahead of its peers, there are almost no dialogues that are considered interesting and weird, and there is no inexplicable system. The logic is self-consistent, the plot has few poisonous points, and the rhythm is well grasped. It is on par with some excellent fans.

It's very, very good. I read it all in one go. I look forward to more from the author. O(￣▽￣)ｄ good

It's really exciting, with clear goals, and it's very smooth to become stronger and upgrade. It's not like the protagonist is fighting alone. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing. It's not popular. I think it's because there are too many choices in Tomato, so I don't have the patience to read on.

This rating is too low compared to the actual quality of the book. I really like the style of this book and hope the author can stick to it and finish it.

On the surface, it's a civilian counterattack, but in the end, we still have to play Eyes Legend! The third generation of being alone is very well written and very relaxing, especially the chapter about confronting Jiraiya. Two words describe it as "comfortable" [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [heartfelt] [like]

It's very interesting. The male protagonist has no external connections to change the ninja world on his own. The story is very readable. However, in more than 100 chapters, Tsunade gets drunk and has sex with the male protagonist. It's a bit too abrupt. Overall, the story is still very exciting.

If you perform it steadily, it will be a top-notch fanfic when it is finished. I suggest you get more achievements that other fans don't have, such as becoming a Hokage to unify the interstellar colonization of the five major countries.

It's rare to see Naruto fanfics like this. The author's writing style is very vivid. Holy Mother, give the author a bucket of instant noodles and keep at it [laughs]

Good-looking, no plug-ins, very successful in self-development, growth process, analysis of the psychological activities of each character

It's well written, focusing on a certain aspect and constantly developing it. It's much better than those that just come up with all kinds of big scenes and random enhancements that don't make sense.

The logic is clear. It is not carried away by the main line, but the details are completed and there is a set. No matter how you look at it, Japan's cultural system always seems to be a bit confusing, as if it is a specious and morbid cultural attribute. Excellent fan fiction must be able to reinterpret this underlying logic, change and guide it back to the roots of Chinese culture, which is mainly Confucian benevolence, justice, etiquette and wisdom.

How can I say this book [thinking] [thinking], it is not the kind that reaches the pinnacle, and it surpasses most fan fiction. I think the highlight is that the world view is very well written. The big boss is the Six Paths Immortal. The author explains that the reason why he is in the Pure Land is very good. The change of the big boss is also very reasonable [like] [like]. The author's outline is very good, but the writing style needs more practice, and there are some details that need to be handled carefully.

I think it's okay, the changes are not that outrageous. If there are no changes, why read the fanfic? Just read the original work. Pig's trotters can be considered rich by relying on technology, right? The pig's feet becoming invincible is not brainless, there are traces to follow. Although Pigfoot is not a eunuch, there is currently only one woman.

Generally speaking, it is a relatively good novel among Naruto fans. Although it has some minor shortcomings, such as the middle period being weak and the ending being rushed, I still think it is acceptable after reading it. There are quite a few private settings in the plot, but there are no obvious logical conflicts with the original work. The holes that were not filled in the original work basically give a more satisfactory explanation, that is, Obito is a bit too big, and Kamui is a bit too weak when it comes to the protagonist. The real immortal part is at the end. Although it is somewhat different from the title of the book, the logic of the protagonist becoming stronger is complete and reasonable. Yumi is a bit out of line, but it actually has no other effect except emotional value, so the impact is not very big.

You have the legacy of Wei Wu. It is basically a book that makes up for the regrets. It is very suitable for Naruto as a childhood reader. There is no character failure and the plot development is reasonable. I haven't seen such a novel in a long time. It gradually started to get boring in the later stages, which is probably a common problem with this kind of novel.

It's quite interesting, especially the story. I don't know if there are any set poison-making points, but for a popular Naruto viewer like me who has watched it once or twice, these don't matter as long as they are not too exaggerated and serve the story. In addition, the writing of this book is much smoother than other books. There are so many "Shen Nong" in the comment area. Some of them are fundamentalist Hokageists, and some may be malicious reviewers. They are not mainstream readers, so after receiving negative reviews, I found that the book is becoming more and more popular hahahaha Yes!

After reading the previous chapters, it is one of the few explanations of the Naruto world that best suits my understanding. I originally gave it a perfect rating, but it didn't last long. Not long after I read the second volume, I demolished her mother and Tsunade. For me, the well-established plot was completely ruined. My favorability plummeted from the least premium level. I pushed a female character down a notch. Now I don't want to continue reading.

It's very good-looking. I only saw it. I haven't been to the Pure Land in the first and second generations. Why is it only rated 8.3? In my opinion, it is better-looking than most of the movies that score 9 or above. The evaluation of Sage of Six Paths is in line with my expectations. Two people fighting with bare hands give each other weapons and say don't fight [laughs]

I have read so many Naruto fanfics, and this is the best one I have ever read. I have done a good job with Naruto as a whole. I have done in-depth research on the details and logic of all aspects, and it is very well done. The development and character of events are also in line with the normal three views. It does not have the feeling of directly following the original work to engage in two dimensions as soon as you enter it. It is very good, but it is not enough to watch, and it is waiting to be fattened up [smile]

It is one of the more reasonable and rigorous books written by Naruto.

The logic of world completion is convincing. The whole text is developed around this logic, giving people a wonderful feeling of foreshadowing everywhere. It's great [like]

It's really good, I want to read it. It's well written and has a good setting. However, there are some details in the back and there are some clouds, but the flaws are not concealed. It is a pity that it ended too early without traffic, but it is not unfinished, and it has a beginning and an end.

I have read several Naruto books. The routines are pretty much the same. They all take the same path. Sharingan, Hashirama cells, but there is nothing that can be done. This is the only way for Naruto to become stronger. But I still hope to get rid of this routine. So I gave it four stars.

Ah, scientific training. If you like it, you can take a look. Also, the protagonist actually took in the fragrant scale's mother Yumi, and then did the experiment and succeeded, and obtained the wood escape. I was a little speechless at the time. [Think]

The writing is clear and smooth, killing enemies is crisp and clear, the settings are just right, and the upgrades do not reduce the combat power. It's also friendly to people who don't understand the background of the plot, 5 stars Deducted one star. After the beginning, the book contains a lot of ink about scientific research, which is boring. As a result, after wasting so much pen and ink on scientific research for so long, he couldn't beat Obito.

I have read more than 200,000 words, which gives people the illusion of reading a meeting report. Stop reading it. Reading the meeting report gives me a headache.

It's worth reading, and the author's understanding and analysis of the original work is worth examining. However, many details are too self-rationalized. For the simplest example, it is easy to see that the reincarnation of the dirty earth is different from the living person. Many fans regard the dirty earth as too omnipotent and mythical. This book has not escaped this shortcoming. You can read the rest by yourself. By the way, this book is about civilian ninjas, but there is a problem. Although the lineage theory is disgusting, in reality, what makes them stronger than civilians is not only the blockade of knowledge, but also various secret techniques and foundations such as differences in physical ability and blood inheritance limits. This gap cannot be closed in a short time. It requires long-term efforts. The great ancestors understood this truth and would silently contribute and cultivate the younger generations. The fire of revolution needs to be persisted and passed on, and it requires the joint efforts of many people. Come on, author.

Very good, the plot is very logical and the author has great ideas

This is a good Naruto fanfic, but fans of the original work may be disappointed. It looks at the Naruto worldview from a darker perspective and also writes something of its own. Even though the ending is a bit rushed, the overall story is still excellent and the foreshadowing is well laid out. The protagonist explores the nature of the ninja world through constant analysis, and uses universal morality to deal with some unreasonable aspects of the original plot. At the same time, the foreshadowing is recycled well. If you have a certain understanding of Naruto (just know the names of the people in it), believe me, this is a fanfic worth reading.

The realistic Naruto is far ahead, and it also has humor. The career line and the emotional line are both rich and reasonable, basically in line with the most popular online novel genre, the Killing the Emperor faction, and the logical deconstruction is very clear, and the improvement in strength is not the result of pure expansion of the system.