Just Want**********

It's a pretty good book, and it's not too brainless. The protagonist's brain is still online, and the interaction with Tongzi is also very sweet. My rating is that it's a good book, but it's just too little. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more, and it won't collapse later. Why is no one reading it? It can only be said that no one appreciates good works.

I have long wanted to read a novel with a systematic heroine, but unfortunately the other novels are not to my taste. Now I have finally found it, and I hope the author will work hard! Don't stop updating!

Ahem, this book gave me a very novel feeling, like... Like, how should I put it, well, the above is all I have to say. I would also like to wish you all a happy new year in advance, and wish you all a smooth and happy new year. I also wish the author can continue to work hard, create more, and reach new heights.

It's good. The strategy system supersedes the system. The subject matter is good, but the world view is a bit lame. There are two systems in it, but even the male protagonist with a system can only engage in one and worship gods to gain power. However, this is also consistent with not being brainless. However, the male protagonist is quite timid, which reminds me of the domineering system and her spoiled wife male protagonist. All in all, Genshin Impact, start!

It's nice and pretty, too sweet, but I couldn't help but feel uncomfortable watching it.

It's really good-looking, not too brainless, not too invincible, and the sweet daily life between the protagonist and Tongzi is also good. In short, it's good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch, good to watch. I have to watch a few videos to give the author a gift~~~~~~~~~ And the author also interacts with each other, nice~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personally, I think this book is super good-looking, and the author's writing is also very interesting. There are some humorous parts in it, and the system is too protective! Who can not love the domineering sister of the system? I just want the author to give the system a nicer name! ! !

Five stars. The content is good, but there is no knife. I can give you a sugar knife. Give me a sugar knife. Give me a sugar knife. Give me a sugar knife... The protagonist doesn't know when he can overthrow the system...

Well, it's very broad~ It's just that the relationship between the protagonist and the system has developed a bit quickly₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Even if you write 100 words in 4 minutes, there are 1,500 words in one hour. Even if it takes you 14 hours to eat and sleep, there are still ten hours to write 15,000 words. Counting 3,000 words per update, there are still five updates. The author should leave it alone and hurry up and update our readers! !

Rare and wonderful novel It can be seen that there are a lot of foreshadowings, the content is very good, elements such as Nordic mythology, prehistoric times, gods, etc. Are all integrated into it. Not brainless, the characters are very vivid [Everyday life with the system wife is sweeter (*^ω^*)] I think it should have been above nine before, not so low (ŐдŐ๑)

Is there a knife in the back? I haven't seen it yet. I'll ask. I'll add the word count below. The cold wind blows in the valley of abjection, the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn, the young man returns, the stone man sheds tears deep in his soul, the fixed immortal wanders and the devil goes north, the thousands of immortals on the reverse river retreat, love is defeated by the persistence of tears, success is destined to fail, the immortal regrets it, but I don't regret it! The cold wind blows in the valley of abjection, the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn, the young man returns, the stone man sheds tears deep in his soul, the fixed immortal wanders and the devil goes north, the thousands of immortals on the reverse river retreat, love is defeated by the persistence of tears, success is destined to fail, the immortal regrets it, but I don't regret it! 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After reading the beginning, the book is good to read, but Ye Fan is too annoying to read. I just saw Ye Fan's sister appear, and I can't stand it anymore. I went to play a game to calm down the anger, and then continue reading another day.

Author, your writing is great, keep working hard, I believe in you. I hope your later words won't have a sad ending. I'm a soft-hearted person and can't stand it. I can recommend you to watch it. I definitely recommend you to watch it.

The love plot between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very good, but I personally feel that the portrayal of Ye Fan and Bai Jiong is not very good. There is a strange feeling, but I can't put it into words. Personally, I feel that the early stage is great, but in the middle and late stages, it is a bit messy. The world view is too grand, and it feels confusing. The early stage is about falling in love, and the middle and late stages are about taking over some of the early layout, which is a bit sad because the heroine dies and comes back to life. The author's writing style is also very good and gives people a strong sense of immersion. It is worth reading. "ψ(｀∇´)ψ (The above abbreviation represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

Sweet! In addition, the author doesn't use swords. I was killed by a sword while playing MiHoYo recently (not Genshin Impact) [crazy] [crazy]

It looks good, I just like to read this kind of system female protagonist [laughs evilly]

Author Jiang, now that we have read Chapter 74, I would like to ask, will the problems of those countries in the Mediterranean and the female mortal god be solved? The status of men is so low. The little boy and his son really feel a bit miserable.

Sorry for the author, I can't understand the style of this big world view, nor can I understand the personalities of each character, the background and other things. However, I can understand it a little bit but can't give good suggestions. I think it looks good, so I gave it a five-star rating. Now I see that the system tells a lot of character traits of the characters, and then the interaction between the protagonist and the system is very interesting and annoying (although they are already doing that) (quietly) So when will Ye Fan die? And the modern king

Okay, the early stage was quite to my liking, and the tsundere system was really good. But later on, the plot of the cyber-violent male protagonist turning black (let's put it that way) was a bit unacceptable. The character differences between Ma and Bai's characters were too big, and there was no foreshadowing at all. It felt like it was falling apart. You can bury some obvious enough foreshadowing during the meal in the early stage. Don't explain how scheming these people are outside the article. Good character creation can be completed within the article.

First of all, the introduction to the novel "You Nao Shuang" is very appropriate. All the characters are three-dimensional and vivid (which makes them appear somewhat real). There are still a lot of foreshadowings in the plot, and I think it's exciting enough. The layout of literary drama is better than martial drama. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, and later on it becomes more like an old husband and wife relationship. Finally, I once again emphasize that this article is thoughtful. If you feel uncomfortable, you should quit as soon as possible.

It feels like a pretty good book, with a daily style. The main character thinks very delicately. Anyway, it can think of many points that I couldn't think of. It's really good, but I just don't understand. Is there someone maliciously brushing up the ratings? Why is the rating so low? [What][What][What]

It's very good, but the people in the comment area are a little unfriendly. Now when I see the protagonist and the heroine setting a flag, I have to go into the group and take a look, for no other reason than to see if there are any knives. Every time I look, there are indeed some. Who made you do this? Is it MiHoYo?

After reading a few chapters, I realized that everyone has their own characteristics, their own shortcomings and advantages, and their own contradictions. There is no such thing as a completely bad person. I haven't seen a good and thorough guy, very real. Even Ye Fan in the control group has the contradiction between innovation and conservatism. This character has a profound impact on me. He has the loneliness of coming to a different world (it can be seen that he is always living in the past), and the desire to integrate into the other world. He has a weak heart, but he is also stupid and not afraid of death in society. This character has been created very successfully, and I feel like it can be transformed with just a little chance [laughter]

I personally think this is one of the better books written by the author. After all, not all authors are good at writing. This is understandable. I personally think that as long as the protagonist is not bullied [shy]

Yeah, it looks good, especially everyone in the group is very friendly.

The plot is very rich. As I said before, it's actually not very interesting. I can say that the more I read, the better it gets. Well, in the later stages of this book, it really felt like a cool novel but not quite the same. Anyway, it's quite enjoyable\(//∇//)\

It's quite interesting, but why is the rating a bit low? It's just a sweet article. As for the gods it writes about, maybe the author is not very good at writing these watery words in daily life (that's how I understand it)

Update soon, it's pretty good to say or not. But I guess there will be a knife later, I hope the author won't be too cruel. Otherwise, I might really not be able to hold back my tears. [Cover face]

This book is very good. I'll give it 5 stars first. If you have a knife, that's another matter.