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Although the writing is generally very unpopular, I think the inner portrayal of the characters and the character creation are really, really, really good, and the angle is very unique. It is definitely a fanfic worth collecting. Don't tell me, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I just hope you don't stop updating.

It's very beautiful, delicate, and has a novel perspective. Old Tom has always been said to be bad when it comes to him. Very few people can see things from his perspective, especially the girl in the valley, which is very close to reality.

It should be regarded as the daily life that unfolds around the heroine Melis after she adopts the old Voldemort. It can barely be regarded as a group portrait of the ancestral era. The first half of the story was more exciting and relaxed when Fu was not in school, like the cute little Abu and little Tom running to the main plot to have adventures (although it laid a lot of foreshadowing for the regrets later), but the tone of the second half is slightly darker and realistic, showing that the world is impermanent and life is likely to be unsatisfactory. Just like the relationship between Irene and Abu, if one step is wrong, they will never be able to go back to the original. Rudolf and Fu's drifting apart and breaking up are not a happy ending. Later, when the heroine's daughter was born and Eileen went astray, I was jumping to watch it. The main reason was to see if there was a possibility of coming back. After all, little Abu was such a lively and bright child in the early stage, and Eileen finally grew up in a healthy environment. She also expected that Father Lu and the professor would become brothers. After all, they had such a good relationship in the original main plot, but the poor professor still took the original birth route [almost crying]. I was really upset. Also, the part where Lao Fu suddenly kills this world is really obscure [laughing] Although there is some foreshadowing, I really didn't see it. I feel like a lot of settings were not written out and I relied on guessing to complete the reading. There is also the part where Lao Fu and Xiaotang merged. Looking back, the rounding means that the heroine even slept with Lao Fu in her arms. It really filled me with an explosive feeling🧠 Ah, I can't do it anymore, the stamina is too great, I just lie down, and whenever I think of Abu and Irene I have to sit up and say to the author, "Are you sick?" So I changed the review again. It just feels like the route from GGAD and Xiaotang to the parent generation has finally been completed after a lot of effort. The heroine's daughter Ming Ming, who was born in the ancestor generation, went together with the parent generation. Is the point of it just to have a few more familiar names? The love line between the heroine and Lao Tang, emmm, is all exciting in the writing. The meaning of the extra story, emmm, is that the heroine travels through time and saves the male elder who is about to be abducted. It is impossible to stay with the young man but still win her heart, emmm. It is even better than the heroine in the parallel world to do these things directly to open up another possibility without regrets. The silence was literally deafening. You said the author doesn't know how to write about love. She wrote the relationship between Blake and the heroine very well, and she also wrote about Abu and Irene very well. Although, they were all regrets that they were once amazing but couldn't get together in the end. You said that she wrote a good heroine and Lao Tang about romance, and several other romantic lines with CPs that seemed to be just for fun. None of the high points were right.

It is an unpopular setting but a very delicious article. The CP line and the family line are both delicious. The heroine is a rare gentle and intelligent type, the kind that makes people want to call her mommy. She has a strong sexual tension with Old Tom and has her own personality. It's great to see Lord Voldemort in Ravenclaw, and I can't wait to see Little Tang enter the school. The overall writing style is quite warm and healing, but it's a pity that it is still relatively thin in its unfinished state. Madam, please don't be fooled, and bye bye, you must continue to write more. After the middle period, the development of the plot took a turn for the worse. I felt that it did not meet my expectations, and the direct relationship between the characters also became strange.

It's super beautiful, and the author's writing is good. The story is told in a natural and smooth way, without any drama. Although the cp is very unpopular, it is Old Tom, and the angle of telling the story is also very special, but it is very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ In fact, I have always hoped that if Tom was loved since he was a child and someone taught him what love is, he would still do those things. The author's writing angle is very good, and I look forward to the future content.

In fact, I like it very much as a family story. The original female protagonist is very good. She is really a very loving person. It gives me the feeling that she is really self-sufficient and has a perfect nature. She loves herself and spreads love. Only in this way can Magic Tom really feel the love and accept the bond. I just feel that my relationship with Muggle Tom is a bit inexplicable. It's not that I don't believe in love at first sight, but I personally believe that the natural attraction of love at first sight generally has a subconscious influence. Maybe you don't react intellectually, but your inner consciousness remembers it and your body responds. Big Tom does have his own advantages here, but relatively speaking, I feel it is a bit bland. I feel that because of Little Tom, his father is set as the male protagonist, so the female protagonist is unforgettable about him. This balance is a bit uncomfortable. It was pretty good in the early stages, but it became a bit hard to accept later on. At first, I just thought that the heroine could adopt little Tom on her own, but I didn't like the forced CP. But then it became more and more strange. After reading other comments, it really felt like a group portrait later on. In fact, there isn't that much interaction with little Tom anymore. It feels like I might as well have grown up with little Tom alone.

The first original book + big soup, so great (I like small soup! Haha! So cute! Kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss (it's time for the sugar from the big soup, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat)

This book is actually very novel. The setting of falling in love with Old Tom is like Tomato or the only book on the Internet. The previous ones have always been very good, but the part where the male and female protagonists break up and reconcile is a little strange. The female protagonist did not do anything wrong when they broke up. It was because the male protagonist could not accept that she was a wizard, and the male protagonist still managed to survive the breakup. Yes, as soon as the male protagonist said he was getting back together, the female protagonist agreed, and then looked very touched, and was completely led by the male protagonist. I feel that this part can actually be stretched a little, because it is a bit awkward to look at it like this now, but the author has done a great job of generating electricity for love. Come on [Like] [Like] [Learned] [Learned]

It's quite beautiful. It's really miserable for the big Tom. He was controlled by a witch with a love potion and had a child. He has a psychological shadow. The heroine is a little angel. The super warm little sun heals the two Toms [Like] [Like]

What a great book! It is rare to see someone focusing on Old Tom, who has been ignored, but in fact, in a sense, his life has been a life of being eaten up and wiped out since he met Miss Gaunt. The heroine is really great, gentle and kind, and full of radiant humanity. Little Tom is cute too. If Tom had been guided correctly and loved when he was young, he would really have a good future.

It's quite good-looking. The author's writing style is very good. The subject matter is explosive but unexpectedly attractive. The cover is also very beautiful. But... Well, after reading the comments in the comment area, I was a little panicked about the later part of this novel. I will stop my memory at the good-looking "end" and stop my losses in time. [Cover face][cover face][cover face] Facts have proved that it is good to stop losses in time...[Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The subject matter is very novel, I love the character of the heroine very much, Zundu feels like the lover of my dreams! Xiaotang is also so cute, but I don't know why I even knock the heroine and Phoenix... Maybe I still think that Datang and Xiaotang are not suitable to form a family (although I know that Xiaotang is innocent, but seeing him reminds me of Datang's pain, forgive me (｡•́•̀｡)

It's worth a read. The introduction has already attracted me. It's the first time I've watched this kind of setting of the original heroine of Lao Tang Ⅹ. I'm so moved by the heroine's maternal love for little Tom. He doesn't have maternal love for little Tom because of his feelings for Lao Tang, but he has maternal love first. I just got together with Lao Tang, which is worthy of praise. I just don't know if such a cute little Tom will turn into Voldemort. Don't do it. Voldemort is so ugly. I have caught up with the latest. Can the author give more updates [crying] [crying]

It's a very good article. It's great to have a love relationship with Old Tom. That kind of thing is not what he wants, but the author's description makes me want her to be with Blake. Even though Blake is very childish sometimes, he is also very good to little Tom. After what happened to Old Tom, he should not get involved with the heroine who is a wizard... It's really uncomfortable to watch, and he's even more addicted to Blake, and Blake also said that he admits that little Tom is their son. In this way, little Tom also has a pure-blooded birth. I don't mean to say that Old Tom is bad. The author writes very well. However, when two people get together and get back together, I feel that the heroine is just the one who passively accepts it. When Old Tom says we are together, we stay together, and when he tells the heroine to leave, he leaves. When he says welcome back to my life, the heroine is moved. It feels a bit like it is just for the plot. The heroine has no temper at all. Should it be said that she is a love brain? But the author's writing style is still very good. I feel really distressed when I read little Tom through the author's writing style. He is really a very well-behaved child. If I could, I would like to wear a suit and kiss and hug little Tom and live together forever. I also feel that there is no need for a father. It is best for two people to depend on each other. My poor little Tom, the author's description is so good, I like it so much.

It's great to watch. The emotional scenes in the early stage were so great👏I shed tears The late author boldly challenges adolescent literature... I can't stand it. Go first, my dears. I couldn't accept that Xiaotang, a petty and grumpy person, was surrounded by idiots, and then Xiaotang also turned into an idiot. I felt angry and sad. I don't know how to put it. Maybe it's because the previous story about Big Tang is so good and Xiaomei is so good that she doesn't want to make Xiao Tang's life unhappy again, so that she can't accept the hardships and setbacks that could have been accepted. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that the author didn't convince me. But in short, I didn't like the group portraits in the second half. I walked with Xiaomei all the way. When I went to school, I only cared about Xiaotang's family. The author tried to make me care about Alice and the others, but I actually didn't care at all. I was only worried that these people would bring trouble and distress to Xiaotang, so I couldn't watch it anymore, sorry. The early stage is very good. I still give you full marks, my favorite Xiaomei family.

This is a really good HP fanfic. She not only saved Voldemort, but also brought him out of the orphanage and made him know love (although she hates to say it, she did heal the cub). And she also saved another Tom Riddle, a poor unlucky guy who will be ignored and forgotten by most Harry fans. Every object here has its own experience and emotions. It also intersperses Tom's fantastic adventures (meeting McLeod), which is quite thrilling. The emotions are very delicately written, highly recommended! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's super good-looking. Don't stop updating it. It's really novel. However, the life of the Muggle male protagonist will be much shorter than that of the female protagonist. It's a bit regretful.

Summary: No loss in investment It's the kind of story that makes people want to read and can't stop, but it's not overly exciting, it's just a plain story. It feels like it's told to you slowly, including the emotional descriptions of Old Tom and Melis. It's very natural and in line with my image of foreigners and foreign literature's attitude towards emotions. The same goes for Little Tom. In the past, when reading novels, I would worry about writing Little Tom well. After all, sometimes it may appear that he will become good if he has love. On the contrary, the character is very full, the plot is not procrastinating, and he is very good at describing food.

The writing style is very warm, the plot is smooth, the settings of the male and female protagonists are reasonable and touching, and they are not brainless. It is rare to see a protagonist story that perfectly integrates the initial settings of HP and is no longer the same. Thank you for meeting me, and I will always support the author! The magical world is not just for the protagonists. The author's ideas are novel and rich, and the entry points are clever. Every character who has a sporadic ink in the original work is vivid. I am very happy that the author has brought happiness to their lives. Everyone who likes every part of the story, please continue writing according to your inner thoughts! 🫶🏻

A very, very good novel with a very novel subject matter. This is the first time I have seen a novel about Old Tom 🥺

For the sake of the unpopular CP, please support him. At first, he said that he loved little Tom and argued with old Tom. Later, when the relationship between the two warmed up, he felt that he didn't care about little Tom anymore. The heroine thought that Malfoy was not a good person and did not interfere with the friendship between little Tom and Malfoy. Phineas Black has been living in the heroine's house. I don't know what role this character has. The secondary characters take up a bit too much space. The heroine knew about Little Tom's existence because of Old Tom, and then adopted Little Tom. She should love Old Tom even more. She originally knew about Old Tom's scar, and said that he could deny Little Tom, but she would definitely raise Little Tom. Wasn't this forcing Old Tom to accept the child she was forced to give birth to? The heroine sometimes acts like a love brain

Be big be Many of the sub-CPs in the middle have been removed. I just like peace and love. The author is too sharp. I like Abu and Irene very much. Sif and Lucius can be the same person [crying][crying] (I just feel a little confused after reading it, and the voice is a bit crazy, please don't complain)

The author's writing is very good, and the story has a strong sense of immersion. I really like the heroine's deep love for Tom and his son. Give 5 stars, cheers for the author! Just add a few more chapters every day, it's not enough.

It's so good-looking, isn't it? Hahahaha, Tom of Harrawinclaw is really fun, I'm starting to look forward to it

The author is so great. This book is super beautiful, the characters are well created, and the plot is understandable. The heroine can do it, the male protagonist can do it, and Little Tom can do it. They are all super good people, each with their own personality. The author has to work hard!

The writing is very good, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the plot is in line with the development pattern, but it is too relevant and real, and it feels a bit depressing. Not suitable for people like me who read novels to relax. I really think it's awesome, but I won't continue watching it. I feel uncomfortable after watching it. I support you in spirit! I hope to see more relaxed articles in the future. I will check out the author column.

It's really very beautiful. This is the most beautiful article I've ever read on Tomato. It's really delicious. I love Dad, and I love Mommy and Kiss. I felt like what I was eating was like a state banquet level dish😍😍😍😍😍😍

After reading the previous page, I found that the heroine is very charming, and she interacts with little Tom very lovingly. I really like the characterization of the heroine and little Tom. But curious, does the author really like Big Tom? Why from the perspective of the heroine, the protagonist who likes Big Tom, still can't feel the advantages/what's worth liking about Big Tom? I can only see that Big Tom is quite pitiful.

It's the first time I've read a story about great-grandparents. It's the first time I've read a cp story about Big Tom. It's the first time I've read a story about a heroine adopting Little Tom (Voldemort) and marrying his father. It's very well written. In fact, there are still regrets: Irene, I thought she would change her destiny, but it ended up going in circles, alas, but it is better than the original ending, and little Sif is better than before... And Abu, it is really suffocating to watch...

Come on, come on, it's written in big letters [send heart][send heart][send heart] I feel that this angle is very novel. The title of the book didn't attract me at first, but once I got into it, it was really worth it. It's just too little. I'm still reading it.