Marie Joa Summons Sasuke at the Beginning

Talking about the battle, and commenting normally, I think summoning Nazuo is really good, but the combat power is not satisfactory. I only give Nazuo four stars for his appearance, just for his appearance. You can talk about the setting, you can talk about the destructive power, and you can talk about the performance. I feel that it is still okay to summon someone who is not at the Six Paths level at the beginning, at least it will not collapse. The Six Paths will directly crush it, whether it is destructive power, setting, or performance. In terms of setting and elementalization, there are many ways to fight the Six Paths. The simplest way is to use the Dao Jade to directly attack the soul, or Naruto's Senju Shuriken to do some large-scale attacks.

It's very beautiful and has a good subject matter, but I feel like it's prone to collapse in the later stages.

The first masterpiece of One Piece, the character is well carved, the combat power is stable, and it fits the character design. It's wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! It makes me feel like drinking water late at night and escaping on a plane without an umbrella. After reading the author's article, I suddenly felt relieved.

The subject matter is really good, and the issue of combat power is well handled. It is definitely a top fanfic. It becomes more and more boring later on. The protagonist's strength and background are emphasized too much at the beginning, which leads to the things the protagonist does later that are completely inconsistent with the protagonist's strength and identity, and the sense of dissonance is too strong. Ps: For the first fifty chapters, it's a high-quality pirate fanfic, but then it goes downhill.

Very good! It's really cool to watch it in your leisure time. By the way, people in the organization gave me three pieces of Chojuro today. I was so happy that Chojuro was recruited directly.

I knew that those who came here were all Kagebuki. After reading the recent chapters of the One Piece manga, I really can't see how the Yonko is any worse than Rokudo? Even the Yonko's destructiveness is much more impressive than that of the Six Paths. At least Kaido's dragon breath can destroy countless mountains in an instant if it is not blocked. Who among the Hokages can do that? Garp can physically build a mountain with one punch, can 6 punches do that? At least I haven't seen it in the exaggerated Boruto movies.

A subversive piece of pirate fan fiction Unparalleled character design The plot is vivid and vivid [Like][Your taste][Sneaky smile]

Yes, but the male protagonist can be strengthened

Well, I feel pretty good now

So is there a female protagonist?

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Not enough, not enough at all

It's pretty, but it's too short.

It still looks great

Why would you introduce Naruto so much to a marine?

No, no, no, good, good, come on, come on

It's not intense enough, it should be stronger

Very good, good luck to the author of this novel

Good writing and great sense of humor