After Being Reborn, I Asked the Girl Behind Me to Be My Girlfriend

The first minor problem with this novel is the lack of description of the environment. If the author wants to write a better literary and artistic work, he can refer to Makoto Shinkai's original movie novel to improve it, making the work more graphic and scene-like, and avoiding an overly straightforward main line. Another thing is to pay attention to the details. Some unimportant words can be omitted and passed on in one stroke. A little trick is to use side description to express and symbolize, so as to achieve the goal, like a scene in "Five Centimeters per Second": the smoke from the rocket splits the sky into two parts, one half is a telephone pole, and the other half is a field. The setting sun is shining, half bright and half dark. (There is no way to accompany the picture, so I just rely on words, which is very uncomfortable) In addition, the author can set up more foreshadowing, suspense, foreshadowing, etc., Otherwise the article will be a bit dry and will not retain popularity (stimulate readers' interest in reading). The author is already great, I believe he can write even better in the future!

Dear readers, I want to start by thanking you for taking the time to read my first novel. This means a lot to me. It emerged from my persistence in wanting to write a novel of my own. In terms of language expression, I still lack something. In terms of detailed description, I also realized that there are still many areas that need to be learned and improved. But I believe that as long as I keep working hard, I will continue to make progress. I am so grateful for your support and encouragement. Every comment and suggestion makes me feel warm and motivated. Your feedback and the problems you pointed out in my writing not only help me grow, but also make me more determined to continue. Thank you again for your company and I look forward to sharing more stories with you.