Jin Mi******

There's too much nonsense. The author just wrote down what the characters were thinking and saying, and they were exactly the same. Is this just copying and pasting to make up the word count? It looks very tiring, and he is a god, even if he leads the entire flower world to surrender to the heaven, but why do I always feel that the flower god does not have the pride and magnanimity that a god should have, but is a timid person, just like a subordinate in front of the Emperor Runyu! Moreover, the relationship between Xuan Ye and Xuan Ye was also badly written. After giving birth to a child, he went out and committed suicide without asking any questions. He was so brainless. After returning to another world, he suddenly used his body to set up a diva and was burned. Is there any other way? Are all gods so brainless? Finally, because of the cooperation between the two worlds, they suddenly let go of their feelings for Xuan Ye, and then they were together! What exactly is this about? Since it is a new book, don't be too affected by the plot of the original work. You can write what you want to write. This is the plot you added according to the original work. The key is that it is not very reasonable. If Xuan Ye, the leader of the Shura clan, is not smart, he will almost cross the heaven. He loves the Flower God, so he has scruples. However, this love and mutual entanglement are not clearly written in the whole book, which makes people regretful! To sum up, there is no large part of the main character in the later period. The whole book is just description, and there is no sense of priority.

Very innovative! ! Super pretty! ! !

There's too much nonsense, it's just too many words.

Really super pretty

Looks so tired

After reading several chapters, it was difficult to get involved in the plot. Just as I was about to get involved, the drama suddenly broke out. Lots of thoughts after reading, high repetition rate The settings are okay. I haven't forgotten my father-in-law because of love.