Demon Slayer*******

This is the time I deduced when nine pillars became pillars. It should be more reasonable. Kamado Tannoro: 16 years old, appeared at 13 years old Nezuko Kamado: 14 years old, appeared 11 My wife Zenitsu: 16 years old Inosuke Kubihira: 15 years old Li Hua Luoxiang Nahu: 16 years old Immortal Kawa Genya: 16 years old Water column: 21 years old, third place Insect pillar: 18 years old, fifth place, lost his family at the age of ten, lost his sister at fourteen, became pillar at fifteen, three years younger than his sister Sound column: 23 years old, second place Yanzhu: 20 years old, sixth place Fengzhu: 21 years old, fourth place Love Pillar: 19 years old, eighth place Snake Pillar: 21 years old, seventh place Xiazhu: 14 years old, ninth place Rock Pillar: 27 years old, first place Style: 17 years old (should be the third or fourth to become a column)

I am actually a person who is used to reading a book before reviewing it, but because I really like Demon Slayer and it is a new book, I will write down my feelings. First of all, let me say something on behalf of the author. Some people think that this book is very similar to Miju's book. I don't think it is to that extent. As a fan fiction, it is normal for some plots to be similar. In addition, I think it is a little disrespectful to the author's hard work to describe this book under one book as another, although I think the author has indeed read Miju's book. Next, let's talk about my personal opinion As a fanfic, I think the pace of this book is good. It does not blindly pile up the plot of the original work. The parts that should be fast are quickly covered. The rhythm is good. It can also be seen that the author has some ideas of his own, and the characters are well established. Next are the shortcomings that I think, which can also be regarded as nitpicking on my part. I do read a lot of books and follow books on various websites. For me, there are too many wrong words and multiple words, which greatly affects my perception. I don't know if the author has made corrections or if he has the habit of re-arranging the chapters after writing them. In addition, the author's own literary skills and language logic are not good. Many mistakes appear in basic related words, word order, and titles. It is recommended that the author practice more. If you want to be a bowl of rice in the future, you must correct your mistakes. If you cannot write basic sentences fluently, you will not be able to become a best-selling author. But if you are just generating electricity for love, I also hope that you can take your own work seriously. If you don't take it seriously, why should readers like it? In fact, according to my habits, I would give it three stars at most, but as a new author, and because I am a fan of Demon Slayer (looking at some of the author's replies, I think he is still a student in college), it is his first time creating, so it still deserves encouragement. So I gave it four stars. I don't know what the future will be like, but for now, I will wait and see. The summary is that among the Demon Slayer fandoms on 🍅, it cannot be said to be top-notch, but it is passable and can still be watched.

The plot setting is great. I am looking forward to the plot of rescuing Kanae.

It's pretty good-looking, single girl or multiple girls?

I haven't seen such a high-quality book for a long time. The author must work hard to update it.

Overall, it's a good read. If you like it, come and watch it more. [I understand] Author, after the main plot is completed, can you add more daily-flavored extras? And does the author's sequence of winding the strings conform to the original work? Looking forward to the subsequent development of the story [Like] It's so fast. The main plot is almost over. I want to tell you, the author, if you would like to consider writing some extras or something like that.

Learn to call out the sun with one hand, and the sun will shine in circles

Come on, don't break, don't die

I feel that the previous writing is a bit like rice pillars, but the writing is not bad.

Can. Awesome, awesome, awesome! ! ! !

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

It's a little bit like a rice pillar, but it's still pretty good. Come on

Compared with the Demon Slayer fanfics I have seen in the past, this step is the best. It's a reasonable way to make up for regrets

I can only say that this book is very good

The fighting scenes are well depicted, but the death of Tong Mo is not clear. Tong Mo will not fight seriously, but he will not seek death either. Kanae and Usui should not be able to defeat him. In the original work, they fell into the butterfly's trick and died, so there is a slight loophole here.

I personally think this book is very good. Although the content is different from the original version, it makes up for a lot of regrets and is more smoothly connected with the original version. The battle details are also very good. It is one of the better ones I have read so far. There could also be more daily life with the butterfly ninja, but it still feels a little flawed. Let's comment on these.

Very nice new book, I feel good about it

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Very nice support

I have a heart that I want to fill, because the author is too short. Can you please write 100,000 words a day?

I think it's pretty good. It's one of the few that I can wait for the update to finish chapter by chapter. I would like to call this book, Fanzhu and Tianzhu collectively the Three Heroes of Demon Slayer [OK]

The only demon slayer novel I've ever read, it's so good. Although the protagonist has a golden finger, he's not overly powerful. The plot is coherent, and it's hard not to like Hikari's character. Bai Yueguang is powerful, gentle and well-rounded, and the ending is quite happy. It made me cry.

Everyone, please speak more and make it more lively.

It's so beautiful, I finished reading it in one sitting [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Although I haven't read the latest chapter, I still want to comment first because this novel is really cool! I just don't know why the rating is so low, and then the pace is too fast. Then, although a single heroine is acceptable, the sister and Miss Tamashi are still a bit...

How can I put it this way? I personally like this book very much. After reading this Demon Slayer fanfic, I felt that other books were not very interesting. I just like this kind of unsystematic and not invincible literature. I hope that Kanae can also be used as the heroine. If not, it will be fine. This kind of writing has just caught my appetite. Come on, author! Very well written. It's best to let Kanae be the heroine, hehe😬

Another masterpiece after Rice Pillar

2024.6.8 (End) It's a very good book, cheers to the author [like][like][like]

Let me tell you, this writing is already comparable to many of Tomato's demon slayer novels, but it's a bit slower [face covering]

The writing is very good, please keep up the good work. The author's writing is really beautiful and very detailed, describing the shapes of the figures. The plot is also very reasonable. A young man is very mysterious. I really give everyone a glimpse of it. This book is the most beautiful one I have read so far, and it is also very good in the Demon Slayer series. There is no point in doing anything, go and see it