After the Death Penalty, the Days of Being a Gangster in Canada

You can criticize, and I accept criticism. If you say something right, I will change it, but I don't accept nonsense. Newcomers, I just want to do my best to write well.

It's well written and innovative, but it's still unconventional. Nowadays, these are all one-of-a-kind versions. I hope there will be a breakthrough.

How can I say it? I like it very much. If it's not dead, I'll update it soon. There are a few chapters that describe human nature and people's hearts so well.

Not bad, the rhythm is steady,

Yes, but it is too detailed. Some of your clues can be written as the plot advances. For example, in Chapter 14, you did not advance the plot at all and analyzed the whole chapter. I came to read the novel, not your outline. In general, the writing was good at the beginning, with great potential. Four stars for the initial review is fine. I will see if I change it to five stars later.

The plot is quite appealing. It's not bad, but the update is too slow. Please wait for a few days.

I may not be the first one to watch it, but I will definitely not be the last one. Come on, teacher.

The book is closely connected from top to bottom, has a clear structure, clear patriotism and clear content, and is indeed very touching. The theme is clear.

Looking forward to your new book. Like Tang Yuan, I support you.

It's really good to watch and the plot is very attractive

Well written, very nice [like]

Thrilling plot with ups and downs

Novelty, a little different

Can we have two heroines?

Very real and wonderful

Dear author, I have begun to look forward to your work being made into a film and television series.

Very good writing

Good book, well written

Please try your best to write wonderfully.

Very excellent work

It's well written and worth reading.

A pretty good book

It's so exciting. I want to watch | a finish.

This is my favorite book. Thank you for your hard work [Love]

From this book, I was moved to see the fighting spirit of so many retired elites in a foreign country, fighting for life without forgetting the feelings of their homeland and nation. Just the ending... I hope there is a sequel.

Very beautiful, very exciting

\I hope to read it in one go

Very good, thank you to the author

The more you watch, the more interesting it becomes

Seeing that so far, overall it's pretty good, I'll give it 4 stars first.