Cultivation of immortality + originality + no system + the protagonist changes from good to evil + decisive killing
I had no intention of hurting anyone, but the world of immortality is cruel and bloody, and only emphasizes the law of the jungle. The protagonist has experienced hardships, lived in the secular world, and experienced the suffering of the people. When he entered the world of immortality again, his original intention was still the same, but he killed thousands...
Reader comments
Um! It's well written, but it's too retro, in the same mold as the Mortal Immortal from ten years ago, and the progress of the main plot in the early stages is too slow! I hope the follow-up will be as exciting as the previous books.
The folk description is quite appropriate. The male protagonist's character is a little weak for the time being. When will he awaken to become a Super Saiyan? He should be more decisive in killing. I look forward to the plot of the protagonist entering the world of immortality.
The wording is good, the plot is a bit bland, and the readability is okay. After reading the introduction, the protagonist is going to become darker, so you might as well not be cruel in the early stage. If you don't break it, you won't build it!
The taste is quite consistent, but the pace is a bit slow, the structure is quite rigorous, and there are few contradictions. I stayed in Novice Village for too long.
Um! It's well written, but it's too retro, in the same mold as the Mortal Immortal from ten years ago, and the progress of the main plot in the early stages is too slow! I hope the follow-up will be as exciting as the previous books.
The folk description is quite appropriate. The male protagonist's character is a little weak for the time being. When will he awaken to become a Super Saiyan? He should be more decisive in killing. I look forward to the plot of the protagonist entering the world of immortality.
The wording is good, the plot is a bit bland, and the readability is okay. After reading the introduction, the protagonist is going to become darker, so you might as well not be cruel in the early stage. If you don't break it, you won't build it!
The taste is quite consistent, but the pace is a bit slow, the structure is quite rigorous, and there are few contradictions. I stayed in Novice Village for too long.