The System Helps Me Create Worlds; I Cultivate in the Mortal Realm and Seek Eternal Life

This is Benxicao. Except for the relatively slow pace, it is quite good. You can continue to maintain the current level and pace🔥

There is no need to expose yourself in the early stage. You can just wait and see. When you become stronger, you can enter the game. Now you don't see how reality will help you, and you still put yourself in crisis.

It's okay. It's really good. It's worth encouraging. It's just too little. I finished it in one go.

This is a masterpiece. I was deceived by the name of these two masters before, and I have been reluctant to read it. I really just took a look at it. Ma Dan, I couldn't put it away after one glance. The characters, background, story, and IQ are all top-notch. It is absolutely a good book and worth reading.

Why are all the people coming out women?

When writing about cultivating immortality, don't use Japanese material. Overall it's okay, but I feel like it won't be long enough. In my opinion, the follow-up can only be about preaching or ascending the latitude in the real world, or developing various types of cultivation methods in the microscopic world. I think we can give the protagonist a new real world, or at least the ability to travel around the world, and learn from various forms of cultivation to improve the microscopic world. You can also let other time travelers come to the real world or the micro world to fight against the protagonist, or to engage in things like the fourth natural disaster. Of course it's best if the author has his own ideas

It's good-looking, and the content is quite novel. It creates a micro-world based on the system and develops world martial arts to assist the protagonist in creating martial arts in reality.

Give it 4 stars. Judging from the subject matter, it is actually very good and has become a popular trend in recent years. However, the author may want to write it more relaxedly. There are too many female protagonists and female supporting characters. In addition, the main setting is ancient times and the creation god flow is used, and the world connection is not very ideal. In fact, there are many advantages. Although the early transition to the miniature world is a little faster, the description is very good. Compared with the popular masterpieces in the past few years, which focus on describing the beginning of the miniature world, it is also a good choice to transition directly into the aura era quickly. Also, I personally feel that the author is not writing as his main business, and the update speed is not good. Now, if you want a book to become popular, you must first ensure the number of updates in a day. No one can become popular with the first book. I have written before, and it is not easy to write one chapter a day. If the idea is good, it is actually easy to write, and the water characters are actually good. The author has started to stop updating since April, so the reader retention rate is very low, let alone wanting to write. If you just love it or want to write it, please also ask the author to keep it updated, because you are not the only one who likes a book, and the book rating is indeed a bit low, but if you persist in writing, you will definitely gain a group of loyal readers after finishing it.

Come, author, please solemnly recite with me: From today on, I make a firm vow to never stop creating chapters. I will temporarily say goodbye to the temptation of dramas, put down my travel bags, stay healthy and stay away from illness. I will give up the joy of games and put an end to the perfunctory attitude of writing. I will use strict self-discipline to cherish every moment. I will persevere and strive to move forward. I will be unswerving in the pursuit of excellence and strive to create brilliant achievements. I am willing to take pleasure in writing, just like steel being tempered, so that I can live up to the expectations of every reader, the passion of my youth, and the promise of my vision for the future. As an author, I hereby solemnly declare that I firmly believe that I have the potential and determination to become an excellent author. Code writing is my mission. I have unlimited potential and am willing to work hard. I will devote myself to the world of words with incomparable diligence, like a brave man typing on the keyboard in the dark night, and like a loyal guardian on the Great Wall of Internet Literature. I am willing to devote all my life's enthusiasm to my coding career every day and every night.

I have a feeling after reading too many books. My feeling tells me that this book can be read. Of course, since it has merits, it also has its shortcomings. I hope the author can take the essence and remove the dross and improve his writing skills to a higher level.