Start a Community and Build a Ghost Paradise

It's okay, the writing is a bit immature, but I still have some ideas, so I'll give it a try first.

The plot is not bad, and the mode is a bit like a horror house. The protagonist is obsessed with his family and has lost his memory. He inherits an abandoned community. By completing system tasks, he comes into contact with various ghosts and monsters, and then becomes a family member with them and experiences new ghost missions together. The plot is well written, and the side missions are better than the actual plot, especially the Cocoon organization can actually plant and raise ghosts. I wonder why there is no official corresponding organization?

The writing is okay, it is above average in Tomato, and the story is interesting. I update it twice a day, so I can improve it more. I hope that the author's writing will be improved to a higher level. The book will have readers, his career will be successful, and he will be happy every day. Of course, I also wish the handsome guy who reads my comments will give me a like [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's not finished, but I really like the plot and the characters in it. I like Xiaohu, Xiaohu's grandma, Su Zheyu, and Zhou Jin. So although it's a pity that I didn't get to see the real ending of this world, I still gave it five stars.

Not bad, I saw the latest

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I think it's very beautifully written. I won't write it anymore [crying]

🙃Those who do not love are free, but those who are loved are happy. This is a multiple-choice question in life. No matter which choice you make, you will have regrets.

The plot content is quite attractive, the author will update it soon!

Puppet man, if nothing happens, he is a death threat [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Come on, the author is great.

Pretty good, the content is good too

It's beautiful. Come on.

Not bad, the story is expressed smoothly

It's super pretty, but it's a little lacking.

Yeah, it's good. It's just that technology companies and the organization Cocoon appeared a few times in the past. It won't turn into science fiction later. If the protagonist is some kind of metaworld or something, I will run away.

Can the author create a follow-up? Or maybe open another book and rewrite it, for example, change the ending. The protagonist kept a trick on him.

The writing is okay and there's nothing wrong with it, but it's really hard to deal with it being cool and not dense in Tomato.

After reading it, some parts are not scary and have no sense of immersion.

It looks good, but why did it end like this? No! ! ! I finally found a good book, but I read it all at once [crying]

I hope the author will work hard. This book is really good. It may not be popular among new readers, but the author's writing style and logic will still be very good.

Although it always looks a bit visual, overall it's still good.