Uncle Nine*******

It's really good. In fact, the author can write and include a few women, just don't have too many scenes. Sometimes we don't say that we like not to see the harem, but we don't like that almost every chapter is about fighting with various women.

Cultivation can be improved faster, and the protagonist can't keep playing soy sauce. Brother, is it okay to replace the beef jerky with something else? Taoists don't eat beef, and turtles and fire dweller Taoists don't eat it either. It doesn't work well in the later part and most of them have gone away from the plot. The protagonist is also in the second level. I always feel that I don't have much fighting power and I keep messing around in the plot.

I've read about 30 chapters and it's pretty good so far. The content is reasonable and the plot is smooth. That's why not many people read it.

How will the plot go next? It's about changing the plot. Or the original road installation?

The writing is okay, why are there so few people?

All the stories are well integrated and worth reading.

Very nice, I like it

Not bad, come on, author

Very well written. Good luck, author.