HP: Why Did She Enter Slytherin?

It's very interesting and well-written👍🏻The heroine is still very young, and there is no hope of being able to interact with the professor, otherwise it would be Azkaban haha. The professor is still the stern, mean and affectionate professor, the unheralded messenger of darkness and undercover light in the original novel. Finally no more annihilation on the eve of dawn. Love Professor!

It's really good-looking, and I like it very much, but I suddenly felt a bit a little bit weird about it halfway through watching it. Maybe it's because of my personality. I just want the heroine to recover her past life memories of this series, and I just want her to know the plot directly, rather than in bits and pieces. I still like to know all the plot, then work hard for it, and then fall in love with Snape

The relationship between the heroine and the professor is in line with my understanding, and I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot [love] (There are so few stories that fit the character of Sri Lanka [I almost cried] I hope that the character design will not be broken in the subsequent plots like other stories [sending heart])

It is indeed as they said, it is indeed very good, but it is a bit lacking. The author can work harder. After all, more people will like the carefully polished works.

The love is written in a super delicate way. I think this is Snape's love. The relationship between Lost and Professor Snape is the kind of warmth that lasts a lifetime. They grow in love over time. The early school life is happy. Snape cares secretly and the heroine plays straight. I remember she would say thank you to Professor Snape for his protection. Her casual words are very touching. Touching, as the mystery of her life experience is solved, the heroine was born with a mission. She is a Krako, has an adventurous spirit, is not afraid of death, and can be said to yearn for an adventure that ends in death. Even if she falls in love with Snape, she will not stop the pace of adventure, and Snape will not stop her adventure. They are a perfect match. The details inside are super sweet, not industrial saccharine, you have to savor them carefully. The elf that the heroine brings Snape home to serve is an elf that the head of the house can order. When building a snowman, the snowman of the Sect is also more realistic. The patron saint of the heroine is also a highlight. Oh my God, it is all evidence of the Ais Cult. She has a clear preference for Snape, and the Sect also feeds back the same love to her. He leads the heroine back to the dormitory at the beginning, and will protect her secretly later, and will accompany her in the end. The friendship between the heroine and Draco is also great. Draco is not a Death Eater here. The heroine changed his destiny and saved everyone, including Yi Nanping. The later extras are also very interesting.

I like the heroine design very much. The writing is exquisite and the characters are non-ooc. The details of the plot and the characters are also great at heart. The only thing that makes me miserable is to follow the serialization! I can't wait to catch up with the author at his house and ask him for an update! ! !

The Snape in this book has changed from his previous image, and he is much more like a "strict teacher and loving father". Hehe, I am looking forward to the next plot. It's really good-looking, cheers for you [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's good to read, it's really good to read [Adoration] This book is not like other books that focus on the shortcomings of Sri Lankan religion. The description of Sri Lankan religion in this book is closer to the original work. Also, I really like Lost. No matter what, she has no reservations about her love for Si Jiao. Even after knowing Si Jiao's feelings for Lily, she still didn't stay away. (A little bit of rant: Sri Lankan teaching is a bit ungrateful.) The author, please give me a boost and look forward to the update.

This is the only Sri Lankan fanfic that I can read from beginning to end. It gives me a much more romantic feeling than most fanfics. It doesn't make me feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is awkward. It just goes with the flow. It's equal.

After reading the side story, although the author wrote about Lost's storyline, to me, this is still He. Lost is Lost. She lives a life of publicity and doesn't need to care about anything. Even the side story feels better to me than the main story. The author's character creation is so successful. I really like the character of Lost, no matter what Lost's choice is. What's sad is that the author doesn't write hp anymore. Woohoo, there really aren't many such good-looking CP Sri Lankan textbooks. It would be great if the author could open a new CP Sri Lankan textbook, but it should be very difficult. After all, I have to create a new heroine. I will definitely read more of Lost. Come on, author.

The character of Professor Snape is well written and very beautiful!

This is a HP novel with a poignant overall tone and a gray background. I didn't want to leave a book review at first, but the more I read about it, the more I felt that this book was worth it. The emotional line changes from respect to preference relatively quickly, but the heroine has a plot to go from preference to love. The arrangement is more reasonable, and it is not mainly about redemption. Snape's personality is complete. The inner analysis of the characters is very good. It may be a little emotional and OOC, but it can bring about the atmosphere and the writing is very good. The logic of the plot is quite smooth. Some of the plots that wander between black and white and some of the heroine's descriptions may be a bit "half-baked", but they are harmless and can boost the atmosphere. What finally made me want to leave a message is that this novel describes a lot about the villains, especially Voldemort. It highlights Voldemort's deceptiveness and danger as the "Dark Lord", his leadership style in his youth and his sense of oppression after his resurrection. The three-dimensional character makes him truly read as a "devil king". The Death Eaters Ribera Barty Anthony and others are also very interesting, in terms of madness. Narcissa may be a little OOC and a bit emotional, but there's nothing wrong with it in terms of putting the interests of the Malfoy family first, and the writing is good. The biographies and completions of the extra characters are also very interesting, including Lucy's struggles and selfishness, and the close "friendship" between Al and Riddle. All in all, this is a good HP fanfic, and I look forward to the author's next book.

The best thing about this article is that the author has always implemented the adventurous spirit of the Kraco family. I feel that the author's control of the entire article is quite good. Whether it is Lost's father or grandfather, their actions all reveal the adventurous spirit that is not afraid of death. It is completely flowing in their blood throughout the entire article, and our protagonist also embodies this spirit all the time. This is really a rare thing. And the emotional line is also handled very well. It does not describe the emotional line in too long or a large space. Instead, the emotional development is put into the protagonist's behavioral communication, which subtly reflects the changes in the relationship between the two people, and Snape's way of handling this relationship. , Which is a very good description of Lost's attitude towards adventure and freedom. Even though Snape had lost Lily, after meeting someone he loved again, he did not choose to tie her to him, but chose to respect her and let her fly freely. There is also the emotion between Voldemort and Al, which is a kind of complete trust and complete loyalty. For Voldemort, his emotional control is very accurate, and he does not write him as a person who very, very cherishes his good friends. Although he is absolutely loyal to himself and although they have very beautiful memories, he is still only thinking about his future in the end. This is very consistent with Voldemort's character. In the article, the things done by the three generations of Alkar and Lost have always implemented the adventurous spirit of their family. This is really wonderfully written! Finding their own beliefs and working hard for them throughout their lives makes them extremely charming. Maybe this article is evocative!

The heroine's portrayal is very wonderful. She should love a free life, but she encountered an arranged life, so in order to resist the established route, and for her unfettered and adventurous nature, she chose a different tightrope route. He is very cunning and good at exploiting loopholes. He loves life but does not cherish it. He is a bit anti-social and has high IQ and criminal traits. But he happened to fall in love with Snape, so he chose his camp. It feels like her whole family is a bit like highly intelligent criminals.

Absolutely amazing, I have never been able to find a story about CP Snape that suits my liking😭 This book completely moved my heart. It was a little bit cruel at the end, but the ending is good and it is really perfect! Support

This is really the best HP novel I have ever read. There are no bloody plots and there are not many so-called golden fingers. Not everyone likes the heroine Even if you and Snape are partners There is not too much description of their previous love. She is like a character that exists in her own right She was really involved in the story, nothing out of the ordinary I don't think the descriptions of other characters are OOC at all. I'm not very good at expressing myself and my Chinese is not very good. But it's really good-looking. It's not the kind of Mary Suwen. It's really a book worth reading slowly.

First! Boast! My wife's writing style! ! It's really written very delicately, and I can see that my wife is deliberately hiding the story and taking a hidden path (although I can't guess anything based on my IQ and the current progress of writing, but it shouldn't be a good direction [With a Knife]) Then! ! The undercurrent between Mei Bao and Teacher Si is surging, and the little secret thoughts between the two of them are killing me! ! ! I really like the restraint and sobriety of Teacher Vince in this article. I also like that the younger sister is sometimes confused and sometimes too rational. Maybe it is this same sense and restraint that makes the two people in this book work out naturally. The tension and pull between the two is really written in such an ambiguous way! ! Especially every time I express my feelings and analyze myself, I seem to have that kind of saxophone music flowing in my ears. It's so awesome that I'm blown away!

It's good to read. I haven't seen such a hp fanfic in a long time. The character of the protagonist is very interesting and the characteristics of the character are well grasped. The characters in the original work are not OOC. All in all, it is very interesting!

It's really super good-looking. I really like Snape. The author really writes it so well. Every character is written into my heart. There is no plot at all. It's just a plot that shouldn't be there. It makes people like it very much. It really makes me like it so much. I am poor in language, but I really like it. I just watched the Harry Potter movie a few weeks ago, and then I was addicted to it and couldn't extricate myself. But this novel is really good, even better than the movie.

[This review may contain spoilers, please be careful] I'm so touched. I watched the teacher's Shinmon after reading it for more than a week 🥺The writing is very good, and it's not OOC. The plot arrangement is so smooth and smooth. I enjoyed reading it. I came to comment after reading Lucy's personal biography. I will go back and continue reading. (Spoilers): Absolutely he, everything is fine except tr/lv Wow, the emotional line of this SSOC is so comfortable, and it is described lightly. The love between the lines is not very obvious, but it is very interesting to read carefully! As expected, it's the most enjoyable to do it by yourself🥺🥺🥺 It's been a long time since I've seen such a comfortable plot setting in this foreign persimmon. It's even very long. It feels like I'm back to the good old days of working with lof and ljj😇 I don't know if the teacher has other vests before. I really want to see others. This book does not discredit anyone. The author and the teacher are the Merlin level! The ADs written are also very tasteful and the LVs written are also very unique. The snakes, lions, badgers and eagles are all very unique. Everyone has their light and dark points, good and evil sides🤧I am very moved, and there is no malicious "black" with subjective consciousness. It seemed that it was a translation or some teacher wrote that Lucy (the heroine's mother) is very East Asian. It turns out that she is an unlucky person who traveled through time and East Asia is understandable. Every East Asian will be deeply engraved with this "stereotype". The heroine handled it very well and was very comfortable with the rejection. But in Lucy's Story, Miss Lucy, who was very happy to be rejected, is also very East Asian. Whether it is harsh words, status arrangements or other things, she will be relieved when she sees her child doing well. I wrote a bunch of inexplicable, smelly, and long words that no one will read. (.) Go back and continue reading the text😗 Oops, there's also GGAD in the extras😋The plot and extras after finishing LV made me feel so good. I also want to eat grilled black lake fish. Can I order some lychee flavor?

It's great. It's my first time writing an article so well. I envy the author's talent. In fact, I don't like the love line in this book. The opportunity to develop into love is too early, and the opportunity to express love is too early. The love between a thirty-four-year-old adult and a fourteen-year-old minor is weird no matter how you think about it. There can be an age difference of 20 years, it can be 18 and 38, it can be 20 and 40, but do you really not think there is anything wrong with 14 and 34? Judging from the previous article, during the summer vacation of the heroine's second year, the professor felt a little in love without knowing it. Would the professor fall in love with a child? Even though this child behaves like an adult. This setting is really difficult to ignore. Love is not the only salvation. Putting that aside, there are no other problems with the book as a whole. Thank you to the author for writing such a book, which really brings a happy ending to my unhappiness.

I think this is the last time I read a Si Jiao fanfic, and I'm not sure. After all, compared to Si Jiao who has an unpleasant personality, I prefer him who is loved vigorously by the heroine in other novels. In fact, he doesn't do this. He spends his life loving Lily quietly, and it is impossible to love others vigorously. Maybe the Si Jiao in this book is more like what he would do, but because it is too similar and consistent, it makes me feel that it is not enough. His first love made him silent for half his life. I prefer his second love to be frank and straightforward, known to everyone, and powerful, as if this can make up for his silent childhood and his bad past, but this is not Severus. When reading other novels, I often get excited by the interaction between the male and female protagonists, but I never imagined that a person like him would hold the heroine's hand and walk across the river. Parasitism would be angry because of other people's pursuit of the heroine. Perhaps when he did such a thing, he was no longer Severus, but another person with the name of Severus who appeared in the author's sweet novels. The person in the author's pen made me feel that he was definitely Severus. It was so accurate that I thought there would be no more realistic male protagonist than this one...

Although I will complain in short reviews on different chapters, it is just out of empathy for loving the heroine more. This book is one of the few good-looking books. Opening this book again, the biggest problem is that the heroine was originally the head of her own family. Why did she become the head of the family after she got together with SS... Outrageous... Five stars changed to three stars

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. I just felt like my heart was churning when I watched it. There is a feeling like a knife but not a knife but not clean. But the writing is really good, and the character of the heroine is also very complete. The professor doesn't have oo c either.

My wife's writing is very good! The heroine's character is so charming, but she has fallen after trying her best and being unable to resist... The plot is also very interesting, the rhythm is great, and you won't feel bored at all! It is recommended not to write short reviews when reading. There are spoilers, which will greatly affect the perception. The charm of foreshadowing is that you don't know it is foreshadowing at the beginning. After reading it, you realize that it is foreshadowing. That is the fun of it. I hope everyone knows this. It's really tasteless for people who have already seen the show to come forward and say that this is a foreshadowing of what will happen next.

After thinking about it, I decided to write a review. It is a very good book. It may be that I have read two works of the same style by the same author before, which caused me to have a stiff feeling when I read this article consecutively. Personally. There will be a lot of pitfalls and foreshadowings at the beginning, so I think patience is very important. The character creation of the protagonist is very profound and complete, and a basically consistent character image and psychology are maintained. It is very good to be able to maintain it throughout a long article. But after the later holes are filled in, there will be some reluctance. For example, the heroine's goal all along is to save everyone, and Lucy imposes her wish at this time, but if it relies solely on external means, it may be too... Additional for a strong heroine who can defeat the fragments of her inner soul? Maybe I didn't understand it properly, but when I watched the early stage, I was always troubled by this point, which felt inconsistent. There is also the importance of Si Jiao. I like the education of love very much, but in some places I always feel that Si Jiao is like a pendant for Xiao Luo, because her sometimes remarks make people feel that love is too unfettered for her. I also enjoy Si Jiao trying to make her stay for him, but Xiao Luo's subsequent remarks are contradictory after this goal is basically achieved. But all in all, the protagonists of this book, Harry and Draco, have very good characterizations. The whole text remains strong. They are on my personal HP must-read list. I look forward to the next work [Sending Hearts]

Lost really gave Snape the ultimate preference. Snape would point the wand at Lost's throat without flinching, but Lost resolutely approached, looking into those calm eyes with eyes full of trust and smile, tentatively touching the hand holding the wand until he grasped it, and Snape instantly surrendered. Although there are many comments about Snape doting on the heroine, I really think that Lost also dotes on Snape. He is absolutely loyal and partial. I was very relieved to see Snape being cured like this.

There is no OOC in the whole text, there are many original plots, who knows, I really like this kind of step-by-step relationship. The heroine is a very complex and contradictory girl. She loves adventure, but she also makes mistakes. There is darkness and light in her heart. The contradictory feelings make her more three-dimensional and vivid, and her gray Her childhood created her character. In the novel, I saw that many people hate her, but she is just a little girl who will make mistakes if she is not careful. Many people will forget her age because of her maturity, but she will also take responsibility for the things she does. She has a strong heart and is very kind.

I'm used to giving good reviews, although this is not my favorite type of HP fanfic. I was so tired after reading this book... I wanted to give up the article while reading... Finally, I stumbled to Chapter 226, and couldn't help but write a long review (I basically don't review novels). I personally feel that this book must be read by people who like HP fanfics and love Snape very much (although I am like this myself, but I can't stand it at one point) Let's talk about the parts I like first: The most important point is that this is he. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I know from the comments that this is he. This is the only point that supports me to continue reading; The author's writing style is very good. There is no doubt that if I only read the parts that can advance the plot, the writing is very good. By reading the article, I can generate a complete scene in the small theater in my mind; There is no big knife, just small broken glass shards. There is sugar in the glass shards. All the sugar has the warm and moist feeling that I like. I have reached the age where I can't stand the super big knife. Now let's talk about the part that I can't watch (spoilers included): There are too many inner dramas of the heroine, too many, which make my eyes tired from reading them, but I don't like to skip the text, so I can only read while suffering. It is really a lot of repetitive and useless character creation. When a character creation is successful enough, you only need to maintain the character to the end, and don't strengthen it over and over again... There are many flaws in the plot. After Lao Fu's resurrection, Sifu should start a fearful life as a double agent, right? But this book doesn't convey the feeling of walking on thin ice between black and white at all. It feels like Lao Fu has become gentler inexplicably? He is the kind of person who is not only gentle to the heroine but also gentle to everyone. Currently, except for the Triwizard Tournament when he drilled the heroine and Harry, he doesn't bite anyone at all other times. He is a super invincible OOC... In my opinion, Lao Fu didn't even drill Sif after his resurrection. Sif has lived under the noses of Hogwarts and Dumbledore for so long. Did Lao Fu not suspect anything at all? I know the plot of the original book and understand that Lao Fu is the last terrible boss, but this book so far has not described what is scary or cruel about Lao Fu. Even though he was trying to seduce the heroine for so long in the competition, now it seems that it was more of a show to make the heroine appear more "innocent" on Dumbledore's side (because Lao Fu firmly believes that the heroine is from his side) There are a lot of places that I don't understand. The front part is okay, but there are a lot of places in the back that I can't understand. But because there are too many inner dramas, I'm used to reading them all in this book, so I skipped over the parts that I didn't understand. But I really don't like this. The author said that this was her first time writing a novel. Maybe this is the reason. She wanted to write it as perfect as possible, but the writing was not enough, so she couldn't clearly and accurately describe what the author wanted to write. I should probably finish reading this book. Maybe there will be a follow-up review after reading it? (I'm not sure either) I don't know if my current impression can be changed after reading it… I still jumped to read the book. Overall, it is a good story and the plot is really good, but the writing style is not my favorite. I still feel that the writing is too cumbersome. I jumped from 239 to 269, but I really couldn't understand what I wanted to write... Anyway, it was the story of Xiao Luo becoming an undercover agent, so I skipped to the end of the war with confidence, because I just wanted to see Xi Fu's stable life after he got what he wanted. The extra story talks about Si Fu and Xiao Luo's granddaughter, which is very good, and they are both grandparents. Our Si Fu's married life will definitely be harmonious and beautiful! The if in the extra chapter is "be" so I didn't watch it. Apart from this, I like all the plots in the extra chapter, so I will continue to praise it! I hope Severus in every world has a happy ending

All I can say about this is that it looks great, and you won't lose money if you invest in it!