After Turning into a Zombie Lolita, She Was Abducted by the School Bully at the Beginning.

Give yourself a boost. It's not a change of marriage. I will accept corrections for negative reviews, but please don't start a fight with other readers. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage.

The current reading is quite good. In the early stage, it may be because the author's writing progress was a bit fast at the beginning, but it gradually slowed down after a dozen chapters. The characters are all pretty good, and they all have their own characteristics. So far, there are no plot points, and they are not very clichéd. They mainly focus on finding relatives. The plot is mixed with the end of the world and daily life, but it will probably be more depressing and tense in the later stages. Be careful not to change your marriage. If you don't like it, you can leave. Don't worry about the rhythm. Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating because of the lack of people, at least... Not like before...

It made me so angry when I saw it [laughing and crying]. The protagonist has a lot of bad attributes, such as cowardice, cowardice, daring not to admit his identity, evasion, etc. It is true that he has many bad qualities, and he didn't even realize it. But the plot is good and the author can let me see a full-fledged character.

Give me one more chapter, just one, I feel like there are ants crawling all over me now! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, please author, please update another chapter! Ahhhhhhhhh

As a southerner, I feel that the northern flavor is overflowing from the screen.

To me, the overall impression is good, but the pace is slow in the front and fast in the back, maybe because the author is impatient due to poor data. Overall, the plot is good, the characters are relatively clear, but it is too rushed and not all are expressed. But yes, novels that are about to be completed with more than 250 chapters generally don't have much character development, but this book does have a lot of supporting characters. Unlike those apocalyptic novels that destroy the three views, this one pays more attention to the brilliance of human nature. There is no narration in the text to describe the author's own point of view, and it relies entirely on the plot. However, the fact that the protagonist is a zombie is indeed a bit different. It may be a special zombie. After all, it is a transformation story. If it is ugly, no one will read it. However, it would be better if the author highlights the zombies more. Generally speaking, it is not a dark and enjoyable story that kills innocent people indiscriminately. It is relatively optimistic. Those 9:00-point novels are much more humane at every turn, but the author is a novice, and the writing style and plot need to be improved. I can only say that this is my opinion.

I finished reading it in one sitting, it's really beautiful! I was so emotional when I saw the ending.

I think it's quite interesting. I watched it in one go and the plot is quite good. I hope the author will update it soon [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is good and I can feel that it was written with care. It's just that the plot is a bit tiring to watch. One is that the pace is too fast and I don't feel the obvious plot divisions, which are a bit scattered. The second is that there are too many supporting characters, but none of them stand up completely. If there are too many supporting characters, you will forget them, but there are new supporting characters. The constant appearance of supporting characters has led to the supporting characters being a bit overshadowed in the portrayal of people. Especially in the later period, new supporting characters appeared and the old supporting characters were thrown into the warehouse. In addition to the two protagonists, there is a lack of a "big supporting character" who can have a relatively complete story and background. The most uncomfortable part is the part in the later period when Su Yuan is suffering. Admittedly, it makes sense to include such a part, and the character of Su Yuan will be more fleshed out. However, one is that this depressing plot is too long, and it is slightly inconsistent with the tone of the previous part, which makes me feel uncomfortable to watch. Then there is the plot advancement. Sometimes the system will suddenly add some settings, which are a bit abrupt without foreshadowing. Of course, this is harmless if you don't watch it with your brain.

Overall, it's a very good work~ It's obvious that the author has put a lot of effort into the character creation. It's very delicate. It's really very delicate. Has the author considered trying romance? He likes to see girls post pictures and drive cars when they have candy and knives. The time-travel setting is very exciting, the psychological shaping and conception are clever. You really need to use your brain to substitute for the characters. I wonder how many times the author has played re0 hahahahahahahaha There is nothing too bad about the world view, but there are relatively few dramatic conflicts and more in-depth settings, and the battle scenes are relatively monotonous (there are not enough exciting places), which is still very good for a short story. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very well written, but I don't know why I can't understand it. And I really like being the Riddler. I have a sense of order in chaos and a main trunk with lush branches. Sometimes the special relationship between the two heroines is also inserted. . The ending is HE, but it was a bit uncomfortable to watch. If you are confident in your brain, you can watch it. [Smile]

The end of the world, sickle, white hair, red eyes, inhuman little lolita VS spear, Yujie + Bai This kind of combination is very rare. Just with this setting, my score will not be low. From a true and objective evaluation, it can be seen that the writing style is limited, some emotional transitions are blunt, and the rendering of the apocalyptic background is shallow. What I find a little uncomfortable is, uh, personally I think the heroine knows the protagonist very well, knows his past life, knows that his past life is a man, and knows from the beginning that the protagonist is not a human being. Also, the foreshadowing bought earlier is too fast, the pace is a bit fast, it should be that the secrets of both the protagonists are revealed very quickly. There are still relatively few zombie stories with dual heroines, four stars, come on

There is still room for improvement in terms of writing, and some sentences are a little jerky to read, but overall the narrative is relatively smooth. The plot design is very novel, and the author's creativity can be seen, but occasionally some places are not logically coherent and need further adjustment. The writing style tends to be depressive and deep. In terms of setting, sometimes the details seem a bit confusing, and the combat power system is not clear enough.

Not bad. I feel that the world view should be quite large, and there are a lot of foreshadowings or suspense to attract interest. The only shortcoming is that the front is a bit messy and confusing, but the back is much better. (Feeling sorry for Sister Yuan [crying] I hope Xiaoxue can recall the past soon [sending my heart]) Great support to the author [sending my heart] (also praised for the fact that the author corrected the typo in a timely manner)

More! Why not update it! It's so good, why aren't there more chapters? [Manual dog head]

It's short and concise, and I finished it in 15 hours, but I felt that there was a lot of content, the characters were vividly created, the world view was large but not large, the story of Liu and Su was unforgettable, and the supporting characters along the way all had their own destiny. There is no plot in 308, which is a pity. There is no description of Liu's parents, their abilities and background, and their fate. Also, Liu Yuze's arrival was a bit sudden and not clearly written. I think she should be Liu Mengx's. My son (I forgot), after some things happened, he awakened from the system and traveled through time. He became stronger and changed his gender [laughing evilly]. I think I can publish a new book about this. I can penetrate Corredor with my soul. The world view of Zhan Shuang is not that big, although it is quite difficult to write. I am so kind to the author that I have even thought about this [shy] It would be great if I could be so inspired when writing articles. Not much to say, bye~ 10 hours. .

How can I put it this way? I still like it very much. The characters are well created. Although the knife made my eyes sore, but fortunately the ending is good. I like both Xiaoxue and Xiaoyuan very much. This book left a deep impression on me. When I miss them one day, I will come back and read it again.

It's really good, what do you think?

If you like it, let's start with the rats. Come on, rats! Scrat is awesome! Shushu must work hard to code, there are two updates a day, which is equivalent to fourteen updates a week! ! Three updates a day, a week is equivalent to twenty-one chapters! ! ! You understand what we mean! Shushu wants to be the ever-moving mouse of the hamster ball! ! Shushu must work hard, work hard, and work hard again! Code words, code words, code words again! ! ! Hey~

Although the plot is a bit complicated, it can be seen that the author wrote it sincerely. The content is very rich and beautiful. Of course, the writing style and overall plot design still need practice, and I look forward to better works.

Take a good look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, my God, hahahahahaha, I am not cool, understand, understand, understand, have you got off work? Oh my God, oh my God? . Thank you, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, thank you. Thank you. What are you talking about? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Every time I see Koyuki's abnormal changes, I think of Li Xiang in "The Magic Returns". Does the author have any concept drawings?

It's quite interesting. I read it all in one go. I hope the author will update it soon.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the writing of the heroine is a bit miserable, and the setting of the protagonist's parents is a bit uncomfortable, but it's still quite okay. The premise is that you have to read the back, the author and the teacher will give you a special blow, and then come back to it. 😘

It's pretty good at the moment [Chigua] Five-star support

There's no climax, it's just average. Generally speaking, it's OK. You can take a look at it.

The plot is pretty good. The logic and stuff are pretty good too. Well, the plot behind it is really interesting. Rarely seen on tomatoes, but still has its drawbacks. I won't go into details. The author's attitude is also very good and very supportive.

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Don't look! ! ! ! ! ! If you have a knife, if you have a knife, you can save everyone! ! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

Good-looking, very good-looking, very good-lookingヾ(≧▽≦*)o