[Multiple heroines + rush master + high martial arts]
Chu Ming, who traveled through the world of immortal martial arts, was stabbed in the back by the system and was sent back to the present world with a ticket.
I thought I would live an ordinary life like this, but something strange happened one day, and Blue Star established a connection with Xianwu.
The disciples who were in Xianwu actually appeared in the reports one after another and appeared in the real world...
Passerby: Rumor has it that Pei Xuelan, the Empress of Ming Yan, founded the Ming Cult and had countless followers!
Chu Ming: A little Heitan.
Passerby: Senior Zhu Xu, who has guarded Juque for hundreds of years, is the pillar of immortal martial arts!
Chu Ming: A crybaby.
Passerby: Xuan Hao Taoist Lord Luo Yao, who controls Yin and Yang, and whose cultivation reaches the heavens!
Chu Ming: Just a little black guy.
Passer-by: Senior Zhao Nian, with his skill of spear and divine ability, killed no one in the world who dared to call himself emperor!
Chu Ming: A tomboy.
Passer-by: Why are you so contradictory!
Chu Ming: I'm just stating the facts. How can these rebels be as good as you say?
Passerby:? ? ?
Reader comments
It looks good, but single heroine or multiple heroines? Are Pei and his sister a couple?
In fact, it is quite interesting. The story between the master and the apprentice. After returning to the world, the protagonist becomes more spontaneous (men, I understand everything [laughs evilly]), but the writing style is natural and conversational, making people not feel isolated when reading it. It is a good and sweet daily article about cultivating immortality. I hope that the relationship between the male and female protagonists can take a further step soon.
So are the elder sister and the eldest apprentice a couple? In the new chapter, is it the elder sister who is disguised as a woman?
It's just that Pei and Cao, after knowing each other, still miss the male protagonist, which is a bit
Although it is a bit poisonous, it is not impossible to watch.
Please support the author more, I hope it will get better and better
Except for the lily part, which made me a little uncomfortable, everything else was fine. Write less about lily, it makes me feel uncomfortable [face covering]
The senior sister recommends speeding up the progress, otherwise readers will always feel uncomfortable and uncomfortable. There is a very depressing feeling.
Leaving aside the topic of lilies, I think it's pretty good. Come on, author [blowing kiss]
Good book highly recommended
Personal feeling is good
Is this a lily novel or a harem novel?
Although it's a bit imitative, it's pretty good (the part about sending bamboos in the original text should be platycodon)
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I haven't seen the lily anymore, and I wanted to take a look🕶️
I give you 5 stars because I was confused when I just heard chapter 10. Not sure why. Nothing. Hope more people come to see it
I personally think it's pretty good-looking. The rating is so low, so I'll try my best to give it five stars.
The concept is very good, but if the protagonist can't practice it, he has to implement it. The invincible flow of every second is already bad.
It feels like it's going to be hot, so put an eye in it
I changed it after looking at it, I support it first hand
Don't stop, I want to see,
It's quite interesting, but the reason why the top disciple was abandoned is a bit abstract.
The writing is good, but brother, can you change some of the names a little bit, don't use them directly?
Come on, write it, even though it's a lot of poison
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
Brother, if you really can't write anymore, just send out the outline. I don't know the result and it's really hard for me [crying][crying][crying]
I don't know if the author followed someone else's template, otherwise, I would call it the strongest!
Overall, this book is okay and worth reading. I hope the author can update it more.
It's a bit toxic, but the plot is good. I still support new writers. I hope to write better in the future.
It looks good, but single heroine or multiple heroines? Are Pei and his sister a couple?
In fact, it is quite interesting. The story between the master and the apprentice. After returning to the world, the protagonist becomes more spontaneous (men, I understand everything [laughs evilly]), but the writing style is natural and conversational, making people not feel isolated when reading it. It is a good and sweet daily article about cultivating immortality. I hope that the relationship between the male and female protagonists can take a further step soon.
So are the elder sister and the eldest apprentice a couple? In the new chapter, is it the elder sister who is disguised as a woman?
It's just that Pei and Cao, after knowing each other, still miss the male protagonist, which is a bit
Although it is a bit poisonous, it is not impossible to watch. Please support the author more, I hope it will get better and better
Except for the lily part, which made me a little uncomfortable, everything else was fine. Write less about lily, it makes me feel uncomfortable [face covering]
The senior sister recommends speeding up the progress, otherwise readers will always feel uncomfortable and uncomfortable. There is a very depressing feeling.
Leaving aside the topic of lilies, I think it's pretty good. Come on, author [blowing kiss]
Good book highly recommended
Personal feeling is good
Is this a lily novel or a harem novel?
Although it's a bit imitative, it's pretty good (the part about sending bamboos in the original text should be platycodon)
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I haven't seen the lily anymore, and I wanted to take a look🕶️
I give you 5 stars because I was confused when I just heard chapter 10. Not sure why. Nothing. Hope more people come to see it
I personally think it's pretty good-looking. The rating is so low, so I'll try my best to give it five stars.
The concept is very good, but if the protagonist can't practice it, he has to implement it. The invincible flow of every second is already bad.
It feels like it's going to be hot, so put an eye in it
I changed it after looking at it, I support it first hand
Don't stop, I want to see,
It's quite interesting, but the reason why the top disciple was abandoned is a bit abstract.
The writing is good, but brother, can you change some of the names a little bit, don't use them directly?
Come on, write it, even though it's a lot of poison
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
Brother, if you really can't write anymore, just send out the outline. I don't know the result and it's really hard for me [crying][crying][crying]
I don't know if the author followed someone else's template, otherwise, I would call it the strongest!
Overall, this book is okay and worth reading. I hope the author can update it more.
It's a bit toxic, but the plot is good. I still support new writers. I hope to write better in the future.