You're Excited, Right?

There are no vulgar jokes and yellow waste, and the overall look is very warm. I won't say how good the writing is. I can only say that it is very comfortable to read. The whole story is very delicate. There is no skipping from one chapter to two, and there are no hidden things. The ideas are quite clear and the logic is strict. The description of the characters is also very three-dimensional. At least I have a good impression of the characters after reading it. Moreover, this subject matter is also very novel. I really like this kind of Western fantasy daily life novels. It is quite good.

(Previous summary, these are reviews of the first 69 chapters, and because they were written one day after reading, they may be a bit exaggerated, but since I have these impressions, the original text will definitely not be much different from what I said) Disadvantages: There didn't seem to be any shortcomings, and everything felt good. I just felt a little uncomfortable when I killed the wife of the leader of the demon clan. After all, they were also a devoted couple. Unfortunately, they were hostile to the male and female protagonists, and there was nothing wrong with what the male protagonist did. Also, there are too few chapters now, which is not enough to read. Advantages: 1: The male protagonist is invincible. He is really invincible. He almost chases other people, including other demons. He is only suppressed by the rules, but the rules have not succeeded in stopping the male protagonist. 2: The male and female protagonists are really sweet. In the early stage, the male protagonist seemed more arrogant (not like a defeated dog, and I wouldn't describe it, but he was pretty good anyway), and the female protagonist's communication with the male protagonist from the beginning was very direct, cute and touching. It was so sweet, and there were no female or male supporting characters to interfere with the male and female protagonists. Three: The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not procrastinating. It is completely different from some novels where the male and female protagonists are still testing each other after more than a hundred chapters or more. The female protagonist in this book is very straightforward. Summary: A very good novel, the plot of the male and female protagonists is very sweet and very good, but again, there is too little.

This book can be classified as average among the Tomato love novels I have read. Let me talk about the advantages first. The writing style is very fresh and smooth, and does not contain some obscene jokes (this should be a duty, but it has become a bonus in the current Tomato atmosphere). The creation and emotional description of the male protagonist in the book are still remarkable. In terms of the creation of supporting characters, it can only be said to be quite satisfactory. Next are the disadvantages. The first and most obvious thing is the shaping of the heroine. As a saint of light, the heroine has no resistance at all when facing the male protagonist, the devil. Although such silly and sweet free gifts in love novels can speed up the plot and increase the "sweetness" of the novel, it obviously weakens the story of the novel. Another common problem in romance novels is that the description of battles is vague. It would be a trivial matter in a novel where the battle is just passing by, but in this book, a worldview with racial power disputes has been proposed, and when this kind of problem occurs, it is a big loophole. Overall, this is a good novel. The above are just some of my opinions while reading it. I don't read many light novels, and even less about different worlds. So there may be some parts that are too subjective and may cause offense. I'll be humble first.

It's hard to find a well-written book on Tomato, and I'm even a little uncomfortable with it [face covering] I've read about 70 chapters so far, let me give you my evaluation. Let's talk about the advantages first. First, the author's description of the heroine is very delicate, as if she had drawn it from a picture. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very touching, and the emotions are very sincere. For people like me who can see the scenes in the novel, it is a great blessing [heartfelt] This is a new author, which is really commendable. Secondly, this article pays great attention to "coloring". The author uses a lot of techniques such as analogy, synaesthesia and metonymy (I feel like I am doing reading comprehension) to describe many scenes very vividly, and you can almost see the color from the gaps in the words (ω< )★ There are many advantages, which will be skipped here. Now let's talk about the shortcomings in my eyes. (It's just in my eyes, stack your armor to save your life🙏) The author doesn't seem to like writing periods [face covering] very much, but he divided it into paragraphs. I was a little uncomfortable with it in the early stage (it has been changed to [flying kiss] [flying kiss] starting from Chapter 63) To be honest, the perspective of the male protagonist introduced in this article can give me a rough idea of how I fell in love with the female protagonist. However, I don't quite understand why the female protagonist has such a high impression of the male protagonist from the beginning (although I quite like this). This makes the pace of the article a bit fast and it feels like it is not too long. 😢 So much for nitpicking. Overall, it is an excellent work, at least better than 90% of the same type of articles written by Tomatoes. Cheers to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง[ Send Hearts][ Send Hearts][ Send Hearts] (I am typing a bit fast, so I hesitate to write down what I want to say. , I don't know if I can express what I mean😖This is my first time writing such a long book review) There is another shortcoming, the update is too slow [angry][angry][angry][angry]

It's very comfortable to read so far, and there's nothing poisonous about it. Although it's not overwhelming, it gives people a sense of comfort. The relationship between the male and female protagonists may feel fast, but it's not too abrupt. The relationship between them is also sweet. It's not the kind of sweetness that makes people feel very comfortable, but sometimes the chapter titles are misleading and make me feel like I'm having a knife [cover my face]. Come on! I hope the updates will not be interrupted [laughing evilly] and I will update them as soon as possible.

It's a very good sweet story with a single female protagonist. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist develops very quickly. Some people think this is a shortcoming, but I think it is an advantage. At least it is much better than those that drag on and do not express their feelings. The male protagonist is invincible from the beginning and has not been beaten so far, which alone makes it worth watching.

Wu Dao: The male protagonist is very strong but is afraid of the female protagonist (the wife is strict, and preferences vary from person to person) Lack: The plot is a bit messy, the ending is a bit sudden (mainly due to the sudden setting of the characters later), there are few daily routines (but very sweet), and the sudden relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage Excellent. The writing is very good. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. The plot and world view are very good. The setting is very novel (the saint and the devil). There are no major poisonous points. It is a good book that can be read with your brain [Like] Overall it's worth reading. I read it in one sitting and it's one of the few books I really like. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better [sending heartfelt wishes]

From my personal point of view, this book is definitely above 9 points. It has a very typical Western fantasy background, and the cool points are also very clear. Although the writing style is relatively green, it is a rare novel that will have a picture in your mind when you see a certain paragraph of text. I worked all night to reach 66 chapters [OK]

The writing style is very good, but because the writing style is so good, the whole article is too full, and the reading is a bit tired. I suggest you pay more attention to the wonderful writing style of the novel. Overall, it is a good article and worth reading.

Generally speaking, love stories based on Western fantasy are quite novel, unconventional, and have a fresh aesthetic. The writing style in the early stage is quite interesting, with a lively and lively feel. This kind of writing style can only be written by teenagers. For novels with the theme of love, this is the preference of young people, so it is easier to resonate with it. The grand narrative depicted in the later period to promote the development of the plot weakened the daily love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. If the author can better weigh the advancement of the main plot, I think this love story will have better results (maybe mainly because I prefer love stories). The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

It's very interesting. Although the development of the male and female protagonists is a bit fast, and the female protagonist falls in love with the crow, it is indeed quite flawed. But that's all it is. The author's writing style is a bit too good, and many descriptions are like water. However, some descriptions are the finishing touch and are definitely worth reading.

This is my evaluation after reading the entire book. It has clear advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: ①The subject matter is novel, the devil and the saint are not common in other Western fantasy novels. ②The writing is smooth, there are not many abrupt transitions in the whole article, and the flow is more natural. ③The theme of Western fantasy is deeply portrayed, and the whole article has an obvious flavor of Western fantasy. It can be seen that the author has deeply read ancient books or novels about Western fantasy. Disadvantages: ① The main line advances too quickly and the development of the side lines is ignored. In the middle and late stages, the main line is basically advancing rapidly, but there are too few daily routines to match the early stage. My suggestion is that the main line is interspersed with daily life, not every chapter, but two or three chapters can be interspersed at once. ②The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is not delicate enough. Generally speaking, this is a novel with love as the main theme. However, the love period in the middle period has the feeling of an old married couple, and it is still out of touch in the later period. This is not easy to change. I hope Harki Cat can improve. (This is my own evaluation. If you have any true opinions, you can discuss it with me. Just discuss it, don't argue)

I like it, I like it very much. I have read more than 50 chapters and there are no problems. There are no poisonous points so far. I like it very much, but the feelings expressed in some places are a bit vague. But the author is a newbie and I can understand it. Come on, this is the best new work I have seen recently.

It's very interesting, and the character design satisfied my fantasy of the magical world, but the relationship progressed a bit too fast, and the heroine was a bit wasted. In the end, this book may be shorter, because there will probably be nothing left to write later, and it would be better if the progress is slower.

The writing is not that good. A large number of scene descriptions and side descriptions make the article full and gentle, giving people an immersive feeling. A masterpiece that satisfies Western fantasies. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's so sweet, so sweet, the emotional lines are great, and the writing is also very good. It's like watching a shoujo manga (bushi) (actually the heroine's personality is very similar to the shoujo manga protagonist), and the graphics are very strong.

The writing is very good and the descriptions are very artistic. The concept is also good. This is the first time I have seen this type of story. Come on, author [like][like][like] Don't stop updating [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

It's a well-written book. I've read the latest chapter now, but I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists warmed up too quickly. It can't be that the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist after calling her 16 times, and they got together within a few days of knowing each other? This is not a plus point for me. I prefer to read the kind of feeling that slowly warms up and develops over time. Sweetness is quite sweet, come on [Thinking]

The description of the environment is very good and the foundation is deep. However, if the environment is written too much, it will become cumbersome. The character creation is okay. The behavior and thoughts of the protagonist are explained and will not conflict with the character. There is a slight jump in the plot, but this book should be based on daily life. By the way, the emotional line is a bit fast, maybe it is to cater to today's fast-paced life. All in all, it is not bad.

The writing is super good, among the many books I have read, it is also the best [Adore][Adore][Adore] The interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very sweet, and the world view is also very good [Like] [Like] [Like] This book will definitely become a masterpiece with a rating of 9.3 Or above [Adore] I hope 🍅 it is best to give me some current affairs points [Angry] This book is really good! I was really surprised when I was in a book shortage [Admiration] The author is so awesome!

The story is very interesting, with a sense of classical English translation and a small literary feel in some local languages. The connection of character dialogue is also very smooth and smart. The story also uses analogies and other vivid forms to allow readers to understand more clearly, making the plot of the novel more interesting and successfully relieving readers' "fatigue" and providing further motivation.

Although as a new writer, there are still flaws in the background setting, logical character behavior, plot connection, etc., But the sweetness, the refreshing setting of the protagonist, the invincible demon, and the excellent psychological and scenery description make up for the flaws. If you are a reader who doesn't pay too much attention to details and just wants to relax your brain and feel the sweet love between the male and female protagonists, this book is highly recommended🤩

The author's writing is so good, the combat power is not broken, the sweetness is fully maximized, and the writing style is very good. This is simply a love letter in a dream. I am also very happy to see the author urging more and more updates. Such a good book should be read by more people. I hope the author will flourish with his wonderful writing and prosper. [Blowing kiss]

It is a relaxed and humorous Western alien style. The content of the story is relatively bland. The image of the heroine is relatively clear and well-drawn (probably because of the heroine's perspective). The character of the male protagonist seems a bit strange with his identity as a time traveler and a demon. He may have focused on being funny and chose to ignore this part. However, new authors still encourage and give an extra star.

A good pure love novel, "The Story of the Innocent and Lovely Saint of Light and the Demon God with Low Self-Esteem and Nihility" or "The Demon God Who Longs for Light Will Not Fall in Love with the Silly Sweet Saint" should be from the Middle Ages (the magical world of the West). Our Demon God (much like a boy in reality who has few friends and often stays at home without much social interaction) has found his "channel" Saint through repeated attempts for the beauty of reality. Falling in love with our saint (she is a bit silly but very consistent with my impression of the saint of light and represents the positive side of the Holy See). Under the guide given by the saint for almost nothing, even the male protagonist was arrogant because of his low self-esteem. (A bad example is a dark goblin who longs for the light but is afraid of harm. He wants to get close but dare not and can only protect himself.) So far, our saint has won and successfully defeated the evil demon. The saint seems to have been given away when I first saw the crow. Although it can quickly advance the plot, it gives me the feeling that she doesn't know anything about her and there is no guard. Then there is the issue of combat power. Just treat it as if it is not there. As long as you know that the protagonist is strong, it will be fine. Anyway, it is a pure love light novel.

Like (ω) Rarely read light novels like this? The writing style feels very gentle and lovely. I really fell in love with it right away. After reading 10 chapters, I put it on the bookshelf ++ [Like] I plan to read the new book slowly. I hope the author can maintain this feeling [Like] [Like]

The book is quite nice The only drawback is that it's too short! In the closing remarks, the author expresses his thoughts and writes wherever he thinks. In fact, there is really no need to finish it so quickly. Originally I was running for daily life, but later I could hardly see daily life anymore. In the end, there was no training or marriage proposal, which was actually quite disappointing. The author said that there is a high probability that there will be an extra story In his speech, he also said that the extra story might be gone, but it was so uncomfortable [almost crying] [covering face] Even if it doesn't end for the time being, it's okay to just live a daily life, with the male protagonist taking the female protagonist back to the previous world, traveling around the mountains and rivers, and watching the flowers bloom in spring! [Cover face] ————2025.4.1

I have read about half of it so far, and I have seen some of the books that are well-written. Moreover, they are not mixed with all kinds of hot jokes or vulgar jokes. Compared with novels that are a mixture of Internet memes and personal imagination, the reading experience is more like a "novel". It tells a story that makes people immersed in it. Of course, problems remain. Is the relationship between the heroine and the hero a little hasty, or is it that the feelings generated when they were in the crow's body came from unknown reasons? Maybe some plots or settings can be added to make the sparks of feelings more reasonable? Also, I don't think the author's description of the respective stories of various characters, whether they are "villains" or "allies", is completely useless. This can enrich the content of the novel and show the world more clearly. However, when it comes to the design of macroscopic content, such as the struggles of various creatures such as humans and demons, the stories of various ethnic groups, and the final effort of the male protagonist, nothing can stop it. This makes the core of the story still fall on the fight between four high-level creatures, while other settings are somewhat unclear. In any case, in this environment where writing novels seems impossible without incorporating some Internet hits and my own magical little ideas, I still feel very lucky that there are still such authors who are willing to tell good stories. Save Liu: There are some problems, but I think it's cool, so five stars

2025.7.24 The writing is very good, and it belongs to the style of writing that I personally prefer to describe in detail. However, it feels a bit lacking in terms of content. Many pitfalls have not been filled in, such as why the heroine fell in love with the crow she summoned so quickly. The final ending is also very vague, and the background of some stories has not been supplemented. Moreover, the ending seems to have a rushed feeling. It would be great if there can be a longer chapter to supplement the narrative. I look forward to the author's follow-up additions [eating melon]

There are shortcomings (the number of words is small and not enough to read). The writing style is delicate and bright, but it is not amazing. You can try to refine and refine the text, or you can play more with the technique of embedding emotions in the scenery (after all, this kind of novels still have a high pursuit of artistic conception). The score will be around 9.4, Which is considered a masterpiece [Blowing Kiss]