A Guide to Winning Over My Obsessive Disciple

The author is as thick-skinned as a city wall, but his writing is shabby and he likes to go crazy every day, hehehe~ If there are any shortcomings in writing, please forgive me~~ Hey, dear little cuties, you are reading~ If you have any questions, you can contact me through the comments, I am always here!! Ps: Reading instructions: (Highlight!) (Highlight!) (Highlight!) 1. The author is a newbie, and a lot of logic in the article is not handled well. 2. I mainly write about emotional flow, and I am about writing about cultivating immortality. If you have high requirements for plot and logic, please be careful. 3. Mainly writes about the daily life of cultivating immortals. They are all classic old routines. Those who cannot accept them should be careful. 4. If you feel any discomfort while reading, please stop your losses in time and hope for world peace. 5. If you have any questions, you can find me through comments, I am always here. 6. If you don't give up, you are welcome to correct me at any time. The author is not a blind person and can change after listening to advice, but I hope it can be given time to grow.

It's good-looking, the plot is tight, and the characters are distinct. In short, it's not a loss for me to invest in it. The author is also super cute (very active). I hope the author will update it soon [please update]. Finally, the New Year is coming soon. I wish the author a happy day and a happy New Year [laughs]

It's pretty good, slow-paced, and the descriptions are more delicate. It's just that the settings of this system feel like it has slightly lowered the viewing experience. There are too many system articles now, and adding them makes it seem a bit mediocre, and the presence in the article is average. I have thought about whether it can be removed or replaced with other things, such as products lost in time and space or in the gap between the worlds. The whole article is sweet and sharp, but relatively speaking, it is well-measured and has a good look and feel; the title can be short and more literary, and many article titles are very straightforward and can be used in one sentence. I can tell at a glance whether the general content meets my requirements, and the first few chapters are quite a test of ability. The quality of the entire article can be revealed in part by the author's writing style, which sometimes determines whether the reader will stay or not. When I was reading, I felt that about 8% to 12% of the descriptions were repeated. It was not because of repeated descriptions, but because of the sense of repetition that I felt, and the descriptions that could be removed would probably not affect it. I am still looking forward to the development of the subsequent plot, and I hope it will get better and better.

It's good to watch, but I personally feel that the plot develops a bit slowly, and it doesn't come together until about 100 chapters. But I still like the plot [you taste it carefully], the following crime is really interesting [admiration]

It looks good, it looks really good, please give it a try. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I read it in one sitting in one day. I have always been addicted to this type of writing and can't help myself. The writing style is quite satisfactory and the emotional description is very good! There are just a few pitfalls in the plot and the things that I care about a little bit. 1 I forgot about this after reading it. When I looked back, I realized that the appointment with the fox demon in Chapter 12 did not seem to be explained. Follow-up of 2 deputy CPs Wei Lingyu and Shen Qingyao The key role of the 3-point Divine Tree, what will happen after it becomes an artifact? 4The origin of Broken Sword Mingjue and why he entangled Gu Xi 5The ending of Miss Liu Er 6. Where did the Yuanchu in the previous life go and its relationship with the current Yuanchu? 7 The changes in Gu Xi's three friends after she left 8 And what I want to know is that the leader's time is running out, so what's the next step? 9The ending of the system and the 100 million it promised 😳 (There may be some things that I misread and the author filled in a lot but I didn't pay attention to)

It's very beautiful. I don't know how to describe this book. I can only say it's very beautiful. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer novels with two heroines. I feel that there are very few novels that are as beautiful as this one. I hope the author can stick to it😊😊

There are no comments yet? Ok The writing is online and the plot is the one I like. I hope the hole I dug now can be buried in the future, hehe 😜 Secondly, I really like to maintain the cool Master's persona on the outside, but on the inside... The character design of the little apprentice should be improved later Finally, is there a knife? 🤔

Active authors paired with good books 🤭🤭🤭 It's hard not to fall in love 🤭🤭🤭 Why is the rating so low? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Tomato, what are you doing? 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 Return my eight-point masterpiece 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺

Super super super super super super super beautiful (✧∇✧)