Let Me Add Some Strength to the World of Immortality

Comedies and shounen comics are funny and witty, but they don't lose their innocence. Reading novels and reading stories have ups and downs, but still maintain a rigorous world view. Use words and sentences to show your writing power. Between the lines, true feelings are revealed. Three or five friends formed a clique and practiced immortality and enlightenment for ten years.

Super pretty! ! Many of the settings are very novel and interesting. I have also seen the extent of the male channel's cultivating immortality and refreshing writing. It is really good-looking and does not have the emotional pull like the female channel, or the slander and suppression of the best relatives, etc. The male protagonist has been a good friend all his way to immortality. The process of reading the book is also very relaxing and does not require too much thinking. Following the perspective of the protagonist feels really safe. And the most important thing is that there is no emotional line! No harem either! ! The only one who has anything to do with the female disciple is the foot-picking senior sister. To be honest, I don't even know the name of that foot-picking master.

Rating(superior) Personal feelings: cool writing, neither typical nor poisonous, writing style is okay Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate by yourself 1. Internet article rating (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) (2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000 (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not suit your taste) (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features) (5) Middle-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience) (9) Inferior (novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation) 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Based on the evaluation of the first nine items, additional points may be deducted for other items. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: world background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm and overall description: relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design·Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growth and changes (9) Main line·Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...

(Note: Five stars encourage the author, the following is a personal judgment for reference) Picky ten-point scoring system (current progress: Chapter 283) Theme fit [8] Plot development [7] Character creation [8] Emotional resonance [9] Writing style [7] Overall score: 7.8 Points Recommendation: It's very funny and ends happily. I couldn't help but burst into laughter as I watched it. High marks for emotional resonance, and good character design. The plot is just average. It feels like a theater troupe walking down the street, all performing the same play, and you will get bored after watching it too much. However, I decided to abandon the book after reading Chapter 283, which is already pretty good. Come on, author✊

The appraisal is completed. It is a comedy novel. It is very funny. There is no frustrating plot that makes me disgusted. Good review!

A super nice book, but the rating is low! Everyone, come and take a look. My stomach aches from laughing so hard. After reading it, I felt very relaxed and relieved. The concept is unique and unconventional. Worth a look[snickering][smirking][smirking]

It's a very good funny (Lao Liu) article about the immortality system. The protagonist and supporting characters are very interesting, and the jokes and jokes are endless. It's very interesting to laugh while reading. There is still no female protagonist, but after 700 chapters, there is no need to worry about having a female protagonist. The male channel does not include emotional lines, which is particularly good and makes people feel comfortable to watch. The plot is not protracted, and the foreshadowing and foreshadowing are slowly filled in. I like the role of Li Zhengtong. He has been working hard through hard work (lol, but as a child of luck, Tongzi is still very lucky when he is lucky. The brotherhood with the protagonist Qin Yu is also very interesting. There shouldn't be any swordplay in the comedy - but I'm looking forward to Tongzi's growth, and whether Tongzi's IQ can be improved (? () Ahem, overall it's a good read. According to the progress, I can write a thousand chapters. I'll save the book first and come back to read it when it's finished💪 Five stars for you, let's run away

The protagonist is a sixth-former, who is very good at all kinds of operations. He is really a "talent". His golden finger is also good, and the others are also very out-of-the-box. Throughout the story, the writing style is relaxed, the painting style is fresh, the jokes are dense, and there are many jokes. It is very happy and funny.

It's very beautiful, there is no heroine, no harem, just a piece of green leek. There is no part where the protagonist has to swallow his anger all the time, and the audience feels comfortable watching it. There are basically no villains, and everyone is funny.

After looking for so many books, I finally found one that I like. There is no brainless female supporting character, and the protagonist does not have ambiguities with women. The supporting characters all have their own thoughts, and the protagonist's MLM skills are quite good🤣 There are a lot of transitions in the early stage, but it is also very interesting (I kept laughing). I look forward to the protagonist doing things in the later stage. Come on, the author! Not enough at all

It's a particularly wonderful book, but the pace is too slow. It's really not slow at all! The first real villain has just come out in so many months! And I haven't been in the sect since then. I went to Li's house to play for a long time.

This book is really funny, and I think the rating is a bit low (｀Δ´)! I think it should be at least 9:05 or above if you want to read an interesting book. Anyone who is short on books can read it. It is quite interesting when you read more than 20 chapters, but I think the progress is a bit slow. There are more than 200 chapters and I am still building the foundation. But it doesn't matter, as long as it is interesting.

It's funny and the plot is exciting. The most important thing is that there is no female protagonist. The only drawback is that Li Zhengtong's talent setting has been upgraded to Son of Luck. When Li Zhengtong is not the protagonist, the talent setting is Son of Luck. It is inappropriate. There is also the character Xiaozhi. The male protagonist and Li Zhengtong have always helped him. I don't see this role helping the male protagonist. It can be said that Li Zhengtong wins the whole process. I can understand helping the male protagonist test the medicine, and the buff that he will be blessed if he survives a disaster. The most important thing is that he can feel his sincerity to the male protagonist. He really treats the male protagonist as a life-or-death friend and will never betray him. However, the character of Xiaozhi feels very inconsistent. I can't tell the details. Generally speaking, as long as there is no female protagonist, these can be ignored. The author greatly requests updates😍😍 Not enough, not enough at all. I'm not greedy. I don't need to update a hundred chapters a day, just ten chapters a day😍😍😍 I forgot to mention the character Li Xiaojiao. She is just a naughty child. People who watch her want her to be offline or downplay her role. She has the best spiritual roots and doesn't want to practice. She also acts like a monster everywhere. It will be a failure to enter the Xuantian School. If you don't want to study yourself, don't interfere with others. What's the benefit of taking the lead in going against the master? If you hadn't had the best spiritual roots, and if your brother hadn't been in the protagonist group, how long do you think she could have lived? She would have been killed long ago. Not everyone has a good family background and inherited family property. Now you are leading them to have fun. What about the future? If you don't study now, you will cultivate later. Lian Neng is better than others. Will they regret it when they are left behind by their peers? Will they regret not studying hard when they go out on missions and experience being bullied by people from other sects? I hope that there will be no role for Li Xiaojiao in the subsequent plots.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this. The author is very confident in shaping the characters. It's funny, but it's not the kind of comedy that's made up of silly jokes. Love it! So much so that I open and listen to books whenever I have time after get off work every day! By the way, please let Li Zihao show up more! Also: : "Rest? Only authors who update frequently can rest! Nowadays, there is an update every day, and many readers are crying for food. This is the critical moment for authors like you who update rarely, so you deserve to rest?" The first sect in the world is recruiting!

The plot is funny and interesting. I hope the author will update it more and not abandon the book. Don't run out of inspiration. There are not many tomatoes for such interesting books.

I was tricked by Late Autumn, and the animation has to be completed [I almost cried] It's very interesting, funny, light-hearted, and full of positive reviews [because it's not finished yet] [laughing] The whole book feels like there's a lot of foreshadowing, and it will be triggered many times later. Dream Dog feels like a true god system, I like it very much. Cute and cute, powerful, almost omnipotent and can be controlled by just stinky tofu. The protagonist Lao Liu,

It's a very good book. The first 60 chapters are mainly funny, with some foreshadowing in the middle. Until about 100 chapters, the plot can be considered ups and downs, and the mind is quite online. I recommend it to those who can't think but want to use their brains ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱

The plot is novel and not cliche, and the main character has clever tricks to trick people. No matter what genre you like to read, you can almost read it. I generally don't comment on good books until I see them. By the way, when will the author release a physical book? I want to take a look when I want to catch a big fish [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss] The first sect in the world is recruiting! ! !

It's very funny. I think if you want to watch traditional immortality movies, you can go. It's mainly about funny immortality life and interesting stories. The author's conception of the world of immortality is very complete and detailed. Generally speaking, maybe because everyone is having fun, some people may think it's unreasonable, but after all, it's not a traditional immortality story. Well, and I think the Lezi people in it are the kind of interesting people who are unexpected and reasonable, not simply unreasonable. Many people like to watch all the Lezi people. There are many self-made jokes and interesting points. There is no plot that is brainless and pretentious.

The rating of this book is too low! I feel like I can definitely score 9.7! The content in it is very funny, the subject matter is also very fresh, and it feels very good to watch. I feel that the reason why it is not popular may be that the subject matter is relatively new, and there are no popular themes that follow the trend, so few people read it. If the author wants to make the book come alive, he can write something that girls can read. After all, many of the reasons why the book is brought to life are fan fiction and fan art written by girls. I really feel that this book is very good-looking. The protagonist is not invincible. He has his own industry and his own partners. I really recommend everyone to read this book because it is really good-looking. I have read so many books about cultivating immortals, and I feel that this one is the first one! !

The author is great. It's not about how strong the author's literary skills are, but that each character created by the author has its own unique personality, and each character has its own personality. However, the author can perfectly integrate the character's character and personality into the text. When reading, the character feels really alive, which makes the reading experience very good. There are very few authors who can bring characters to life to this extent, let alone so many characters. I can foresee that this book will become a classic of funny fairy tales, and I am looking forward to other works by the author in the future.

Watch it again, Qin Yu has a lot of ideas. Except for the middle part of Tongzi's return home, which is a bit boring, the other plots are fun and funny. It is not recommended to watch it at night, for fear that you will not be able to hold back your laughter and disturb the neighbors. There are no bad jokes, and the protagonist is affectionate and righteous, and some good brothers are also included. The non-protagonist has a sense of humor. Basically, the entire world of immortality is filled with fun-loving people. There are great elders who pretend to be saints in front of their lovers, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. There are also seniors who are very knowledgeable but have no wisdom. There are also sect beasts who love stinky tofu... And there are many, many, many interesting characters.

It's good-looking, and the plot is novel and unique. Every turning point and plot in the story is full of surprises and innovations, making it difficult to predict the next development. The protagonist's cunning ways are eye-catching, and each character has a unique personality. The author is very good at embodying the character between the lines. It's a very good book. If you are short on books, I recommend reading it.

Nice! Love watching! Want to see it! It fits my kind of funny! Although he is suspected of driving, he is not disgusted [shy] [angry][angry][angry][angry] So you should update it quickly! Oh~ Play hard to get! You are such a little devil! [Shy]

It's funny, but I feel like I haven't written much in the 300 chapters. Maybe it's because of the small number of words. Please update it soon. No heroine, no ambiguity. I just focus on making things funny and improving myself. It's very good. Author, you are really a breath of fresh air. Please keep it up. No heroine, no heroine, no emotional line.

This plot is quite novel. Although it is also a wall-mounted plot, there are not many external plug-ins. Most of them rely on the protagonist's own quick thinking, so that they are not all nonsense and reckless. There are not so many tragic and bloody Madonna plots. It is quite fun to watch. You can check it out. Come on, author.

It's quite funny, but it's almost 900 pictures, and after reading it for a long time, I feel tired of the book. I felt bored in many chapters and skipped through them. Also, the latest ones at the end of it, helping the killer do tasks and this killer game, felt too redundant. Wouldn't it be better to have some main plot? There are more than 30 chapters left that I haven't read yet. I plan to wait for the update and skip this killer game before reading. There is no need to unify the world of cultivation. It's good to continue to follow the main line and continue to be funny every day. The humor is light and funny but not so bloodthirsty.

It's okay, it's a funny story about cultivating immortals, and the writing style is okay. There are no flaws, but it's not attractive enough to keep you interested in watching it. Write more plot points that can advance the story. Don't work all the time, or you will get tired.

I highly recommend it. I have read 37 chapters so far and almost every chapter has a laugh. It has been hilarious in the past two days and there are so many talented commentators. I don't know what the plot behind it is, but it is very interesting to me at this stage. I have read the book for so many years and rarely write reviews, so I can't help but give the author a thumbs up 👍🏻

Excellent literary talent, fresh and refined. The last song of inspiration, the eloquent talk. The connection is natural and smooth, and the character sketches are high-definition and distinct. The writing style is leisurely and interesting. In fact, it is a clear stream that is out of the crowd. From the bells and cauldrons to the ordinary people in the market, they all like the clear, bright and elegant style of writing by ordinary people. (≧ｗ≦)