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The heroine's character is arrogant and bad in the early stage, but in the later stage, she really turns around! The arrogance and badness in the early stage are not uncomfortable, at least within my comfort zone. Although there is no rating yet, it is really very good-looking. The heroine is very attractive, similar to a white paper that has been dyed with partial colors, but has not yet completely transformed into her. The plot is very attractive. Although it is labeled as a group favorite and the author also said it is very Mary Sue, the plot is not boring at all. This is a HP fanfic that is worth reading. The writing is great. The characters and personality descriptions are very delicate and natural. There are almost no typos. I like it very much.

Well, so far, it's pretty good. The heroine is very bad, and the character design is quite complicated. The original character will have OOC, but it's still acceptable. But I have a question, whether the ending is be or he. So far, it looks a bit like be.

Nice! ! ! A masterpiece! ! ! Come on! ! !

(I heard that fans can't give 5 stars, so I'll give it 4 stars [Adoration]~) Merlin! I swear, this is the most beautiful fanfic I have ever read. From more than 600 chapters to now, does it count as a development series [thinking]? In short, Shiloh is not as loving, innocent, and kind as others. She is selfish, and has some bad tastes like a little girl, but this is nothing. You cannot allow a Malfoy who is more Slytherin and more real to appear in the era when the heroine is true, kind, and beautiful. Of course, Shiloh is not blindly "bad". She cares about her family and will escape with her classmates when danger comes (for details, please go to the chapter about Shiloh's night trip and meeting Harry and the others), and there seems to be a big secret about Shiloh's identity [cool]! This book is being updated continuously~ Sweetheart is updating very frequently! Are you still wondering whether what I said is true or false? Still hesitating whether to watch it or not? Having said so much, are you excited? Action is worse than heartbeat, let's chase it [note]~ Really, this is the only time I have written so many reviews for a book, but it is really good! Shirlo, my dear, come and tease me! Please [cry] "A review from a Slytherin snake" (Maybe my language expression is not very good, and my logic is not very clear, but I still really hope that this book can be read by more people. Of course, if you don't like it, don't say bad things. Every sweetheart deserves to be treated sincerely. Even if she may not have life, she deserves better because of appreciation and care)

It looks good, but why not update it. Generally speaking, the heroine is from the Malfoy family, a heartthrob, and even Ron likes it. This book is not embarrassing to read, and the heroine is a tsundere type, but it does not make people feel artificial.

I really like the heroine!

Very nice! Big cheers for the author! I like Xixi very much!

I really know how to write, 🐮,,,,,,, come on, keep updating [love] [love] [love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's even, I like it very much! Adults are particularly good at writing🥺❤️

Very beautiful, recommended

It reads smoothly and the grasp is very good.