Dragon Ball: This GT Vegeta Is Too Awesome!

GT Vegeta, who has experienced the baptism of time, has been calm and collected in situations after his rebirth, and treats others with gentleness and kindness. His strong strength makes him the leader of the earth, and there is still an unfinished mission waiting for him. There is no rebirth, it is just a fantasy before death.

Gt Wukong's soul comes to fuse and it really makes me cry

Come on, it's better than the previous two books.

I have finished reading it. Overall, the plot is very good and there is no problem with the logic. I have written my own thing based on the original work. I feel that if the anime follows your drawing, it will be more interesting than the current plot. It's just that the author has a bit of a bad grasp on the plot arrangement. Some places are too fast, and some places are too watery. Well, there are also some small problems with the writing style, but it does not affect reading, but poor writing style can easily drive away some readers~ That's it. The Dragon Ball fandom is already the best on Tomato. It's not OOC. It doesn't just fight to satisfy your own imagination. It also has some imagination. It's very good! Looking forward to your next work!

The writing style is acceptable, and there are similar books out there. Let's see if we can surpass it.

To be honest, future Bulma is worth it

Support me, if you want me to say it, Super Four takes the physical way, Super God takes the spiritual way. If the two paths go together, then 1+1 will not only equal two. It depends on what the author writes. This is my personal understanding from watching Dragon Ball till now, and I don't want to argue.

The plot is very interesting and does not blindly follow the original work. Vegeta is also very rational and combines GF time and space. The original plot is also very interesting and worth watching.

@ Hhh, make a pair

The narration of the inner drama of the fight, the inner drama of the audience, and the dialogue are too dramatic, not too exciting, and a bit long-winded. Others are okay, the plot is there, the writing is slowly improving, the character deviation is not big, it is not broken so far, and the combat power is not too high. It is a bit similar to another GT Wukong, and there is a gap. The details are described carefully and the appearance description is quite comprehensive. It is a good fanfic. From the above personal point of view, of course, the description of the story is to depict the world around the protagonist as a more real one, so that it can be more immersive, the characters will be full-bodied, and the quality is good. The author wrote it carefully and carefully. If things are done more neatly and neatly, the audience will be less dramatized and it will be more attractive! At present, this book is still very rigorous in some places, my personal opinion.

It can be seen that the author has done a good job of writing the book into the mind of Vegeta in his twilight years in GT. The writing is really good. Believe in yourself, this book has something to say, so. . . Write more every day

Very nice! The ending is just too fast [laughing and crying], but the outline is also very unique, with twists and turns, but I still look forward to trying to write it and publish a complete article. This is my favorite Vegeta, my favorite Dragon Ball!

It's more exciting than the previous two books, come on! ! !

Overall it's very interesting

Overall it's good

Actually, this scene also appeared in a certain fan work. Actually, this scene also appeared in a certain fan work. The author used settings from some fan works.

The plot is good and the ideas are novel, but I can't finish it all. I can only read the synopsis to satisfy my brain addiction.

It's good. Come on, it will be better if you don't add super six.

Well, this is very, very well written, not bad, not bad. The ending you wrote was too sloppy. , It feels like I heard the climax card halfway through reading and the ending came to an end all at once. Not buddy, you do this, you do this. Good.

It feels a bit exciting in the early stage. I don't really like to read mindless and pure plots. If you read more about this fanfic Dragon Ball, you will still have your own ideas later. And don't read too many chapters. Each chapter has a sufficient number of words. Basically, one chapter can be regarded as one and a half chapters of most Dragon Ball novels.

The writing is good, but there are still some shortcomings. When I read it, you only updated Chapter 61, which left me unfinished, so 4 stars.

Still pretty good-looking

This book is pretty good, why is it rated so low?

It's a little short, but it's okay

Not bad, come on

The characters are in line with the original settings, but the background is set too late. It is a pity that the best Z plot of Dragon Ball is not available.

The content is imaginative and the writing style is consistent with it, and a variety of different characters fight.

Give the author a five-star review and keep up the good work⛽

Not bad, this is good

Author, you know Kavin well