[Funny and light-hearted two-male main text + playful jokes + double cleanliness + squeamish double-sided sesame dumplings + weirdness]
Song Mumu is dead. The good news is that he is alive again in another world. The bad news is that he has no friends and a lot of debts waiting to be repaid. He said that optimists have nothing to fear, but the reality is a little bad. Fortunately, okay, there is an enemy who often gives money, but somehow he gets closer and closer. What? ! Which one is it?
Paranoid boss: "Which fool is this?"
"Oh, my wife, my wife" (Chuang Fei other puppies, left hook, flying kick, came to the wife, super loud)
Campus academic god: "Where did this idiot come from? He can't even know such a simple question."
Oh, I can't do it! ! ! I want you to take care of my wife (equal to everyone at Chuangfei)
Later...
Love doesn't know where it started, but it goes deeper...
Mu Luo Huainan, you should be mine...
Reader comments
Pretty good, the character design is okay
I'm not very good at writing essays, but the first few chapters of this essay make me feel like this is my first time writing an essay [eating melon]
"At the same time, the Gu Group has no taller building in City A. Everyone in City A knows that there is Mr. Gu.
When he was young, he was ruthless and ruthless, and used thunderous means to bring the Gu Group back on track. A legend in the business world.
At first, some people provoked him and wanted to fight with him to dampen his spirit. Unexpectedly, King Tianliang broke through and finally left City A in despair. "
The above is the description of the first appearance of the confrontation in the article, which made me a little embarrassed [almost crying] (purely my own feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it)
This article was partly influenced by the conversation with the system and the conversation between Gong and his brother, which made me feel a little weird.
Let me read a few more chapters to review
—. Friends who like it suggest reading directly from Chapter 14.
The writing after chapter 14 is just okay.
2. A brief restatement of the contents of more than ten chapters ago:
1. The protagonist owed a debt of 100 million as soon as he appeared on the scene, and then he dressed up as a woman and made money through live streaming in order to pay off the debt. Then when the attacker came out, his men accidentally sent him the live broadcast link, and he clicked on it and saw it. Then he fell in love with Shou at first sight.
2. The protagonist responded to a nasty man who criticized women during the live broadcast. After quarreling back, he became popular after he wiped off his heavy makeup and revealed his cute and beautiful appearance.
3. The protagonist went to a bar to attend a banquet in order to follow the plot, but ended up getting into trouble. At the critical moment, he ran to another private room, which happened to be Gong Zai's private room (Gong and his brothers should be drinking). Gong recognized him and rescued him
There is no need to say anything next, everyone understands.
3. The plot at the beginning is strangely cliche, and the emotional lines are basically coincidences. This book is basically about writing style, or what new tricks he came up with.
[Love] I admire every author who has three views. No matter what, he has the patience to write his own works, which is great [Send heart]
No one is perfect, and it is normal to have some shortcomings when writing an article for the first time. Come on!
Hehe, I'm full of confidence. If you have any questions, you can ask. Let's go [love] [love]
Pretty good, the character design is okay I'm not very good at writing essays, but the first few chapters of this essay make me feel like this is my first time writing an essay [eating melon] "At the same time, the Gu Group has no taller building in City A. Everyone in City A knows that there is Mr. Gu. When he was young, he was ruthless and ruthless, and used thunderous means to bring the Gu Group back on track. A legend in the business world. At first, some people provoked him and wanted to fight with him to dampen his spirit. Unexpectedly, King Tianliang broke through and finally left City A in despair. " The above is the description of the first appearance of the confrontation in the article, which made me a little embarrassed [almost crying] (purely my own feelings, don't criticize if you don't like it) This article was partly influenced by the conversation with the system and the conversation between Gong and his brother, which made me feel a little weird. Let me read a few more chapters to review —. Friends who like it suggest reading directly from Chapter 14. The writing after chapter 14 is just okay. 2. A brief restatement of the contents of more than ten chapters ago: 1. The protagonist owed a debt of 100 million as soon as he appeared on the scene, and then he dressed up as a woman and made money through live streaming in order to pay off the debt. Then when the attacker came out, his men accidentally sent him the live broadcast link, and he clicked on it and saw it. Then he fell in love with Shou at first sight. 2. The protagonist responded to a nasty man who criticized women during the live broadcast. After quarreling back, he became popular after he wiped off his heavy makeup and revealed his cute and beautiful appearance. 3. The protagonist went to a bar to attend a banquet in order to follow the plot, but ended up getting into trouble. At the critical moment, he ran to another private room, which happened to be Gong Zai's private room (Gong and his brothers should be drinking). Gong recognized him and rescued him There is no need to say anything next, everyone understands. 3. The plot at the beginning is strangely cliche, and the emotional lines are basically coincidences. This book is basically about writing style, or what new tricks he came up with. [Love] I admire every author who has three views. No matter what, he has the patience to write his own works, which is great [Send heart] No one is perfect, and it is normal to have some shortcomings when writing an article for the first time. Come on!
Hehe, I'm full of confidence. If you have any questions, you can ask. Let's go [love] [love]