Travel Through Time and Become Uncle Jiu's Disciple

This book is very well written! Don't know why the rating is so low! It should be 8.5 Or higher. It is the best Uncle Jiu fanfic I have ever read. Unlike some fanfics, which either cause internal strife or throw the uncle away after using him, relying on the system to do whatever he wants, frantically flirting with girls and collecting harems, or unable to walk when he sees a woman, as if he has not seen a woman in hundreds of years! So far, Chapter 137 does not have a female protagonist, and the protagonist does not deliberately seduce any woman. The protagonist practices very hard, respects his elders at first, loves his younger brothers and sisters at lower levels, and guides them to the right path and not to follow the outside path. He cleverly resolved the estrangement between King Thunder and Lightning and Uncle Jiu, allowing the brothers to get back together and increase Maoshan's combat power! It's not like some scraps that deliberately make people like Qiu Sheng Wencai and Shi Jian very evil, and they kill these people as soon as they come up.

It's a good read, but it's about pursuing a career and cultivating immortality. There are not so many messy emotional scenes without cp. In other books, I feel that no woman can live without talking about sex. The tone of the book is full of obscenity, and she always wants to tease someone. It's just the fantasy of an otaku. This book is very good. I feel that I respect every female character. I feel that the author will be a very good person in real life.

Uncle Jiu has read a lot of fanfics. Although this one is not the best, it is almost the same. Some of the first 40 chapters follow the original work with slight modifications. Of course, I accept it. It is also good to incorporate my own innovations in the later chapters. It reads smoothly and has no major flaws. The plot is also quite good. No. Regardless of the arrangement or the communication between the characters, it is more comfortable and not too special. Among the Tomato fanfiction Nine Uncles, it can score more than 90%. The character's personality and style are also in line with the settings in the book. The score should be mentioned again. It is much better than those who spend money to brush up the score. It is worth watching.

It's very interesting. This book didn't write Shi Jian bad, allowing Shi Jian and Uncle Jiu to get along well, and it didn't feel like Uncle Jiu was treated as an NPC and abandoned after completing the plot. The relationship between Uncle Jiu and the protagonist was very warm from beginning to end. The protagonist regarded Uncle Jiu as his father, and the writing was very warm. Although Taoist Master Four Eyes did not live in Maoshan like them and did not describe much, the protagonist never gave up on Uncle Jiu and continued to practice with Uncle Jiu. It was very good. There was a feeling that I raised you when you were young and you raised me when I was old. The first part of the book is really good. Although it is a bit indecisive in terms of relationships, I ignored the small flaw of having many suitors. Before it was updated, I kept reading the previous chapters repeatedly, listening to them, and reading them. After it was updated to about ten chapters, I read it again. I really loved the interaction between the protagonist and Uncle Jiu. The love between father and son, master and apprentice, but you write it down to the end, I think you might as well end it directly. To play this trick, you are not willing to let go of Honggu's death, so you should be with her as soon as possible, and then I abandon the book. It's unnecessary. She is dead, and you go to Naihe Bridge to find her and make her your underworld. It makes it seem like the two of you have lingering love. It's so disgusting to write like this. You might as well end it directly. You asked me to abandon the book at this time. I feel really disgusting. Otherwise, you can write about feelings openly and openly, and don't write in such a secretive way. It's disgusting. No matter what kind of relationship you are, brotherhood, friendship, if you write like this and don't write it well, it's really disgusting. Give up. Goodbye.

So far, this is the only fanfic of Uncle Jiu that I insist on reading. The author has written out the entire dimension of Uncle Jiu, and arranged everyone's identity in a reasonable and appropriate way, and also incorporated some characters and settings from the world of tomb robbers such as Lao Jiumen. There is no female protagonist, and even if there is no female protagonist, it can be regarded as respecting women and not making obscene remarks (emphasize that some losers should not write articles), and this book is also good for Uncle Jiu, unlike some fans who just use Uncle Jiu to make them disgusting. In this article, the male protagonist has always been thinking about Uncle Jiu's life-saving grace and his kindness in raising and teaching. There are good things and good deeds, and he always thinks about Uncle Jiu.

This article is so enjoyable to read, especially the protagonist who is so kind to Uncle Jiu! Furthermore, I hope I don't need CP in the future! ! ! !

Very good-looking, highly recommended by girls. There is no description that demeans or objectifies girls, and it is not a multi-female heroine who is engaged in a career. It ranks first in this genre [Attention] [Attention] [Attention] [Attention] [Attention] [Attention]

The rhythm is very good and the logic is clear. I hope to keep it up.

Personally, I think it is a very exciting novel in the Jiu Shu fan fiction. There is also a very good novel called "Zombie, Apprenticeship to Maoshan Jiu Shu" (completed). I hope that book friends who are in a book shortage will go and read it. I hope the author can also read it and be honest with each other [laughs]

It's very good-looking. The protagonist doesn't have a harem like other protagonists in Jiu Shu's novels. He has one main goal: to become an immortal. There is not so much pornographic content in the article. The protagonist himself is also very strong, does not forget his roots, and is very filial to Uncle Nine. Not bad

This is the only book that I read in the Nine-Book genre. There is no skipping a chapter, and time is reincarnated, but the chapters that belong to him are always so warm and bright, and unconsciously stir up people's emotions. This is a humane book, and it is worth recommending.

It's very well written. I've finished this book. I originally thought he was going to connect with One Man in the future, but I didn't expect it to rise straight up. To be honest, I didn't feel comfortable writing it. It was a bit uneasy in the middle and later stages, but there were no major problems.

This article is really beautiful! I also think it is the best one written by Uncle Jiu! The connection with Nuqing Xiangxi is also very smooth! Come on, author, you must finish it! So well written! [Like][Like][Like]

Excellent work, well written and interesting to watch

The writing is quite good and quite interesting. The first part of the chapter is consistent with the content in the movie. In fact, it is also a fanfic. It is just a review of the classics. It also has its own story, which doesn't just overlap with the movie. It has its own golden finger, but it doesn't show how awesome it is right from the beginning, and how awesome it is again and again. It will become boring after watching it too much. Become stronger little by little on the path that suits you, without any embarrassing emotional drama, stick to cultivation as the main focus, and have a father-son relationship with Uncle Jiu as master and disciple (I am very filial to Uncle Jiu, and I will never forget Uncle Jiu's share when there are good things. ), Qiu Shengwencai and his brothers set an example for the elder brother (stick plus sweet dates), and eased the conflict between Jiu Shu and Shi Jian (beat first and then reform). The top of the new generation of Zhengdao At present, it seems that you can keep working hard [laughing]

Okay, okay, the writing of Uncle Jiu's humanities is quite good. It would be fine if the ultimate story of soul ferrying and the frozen appointment with Laojiu Sect could be included [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's a pretty good story without a heroine and it's pretty fast.

Very beautiful, but also very reluctant to part with it. This book has the best ending I have seen about Uncle Nine. Both the protagonist and Uncle Nine have become immortals, and China is safe, peaceful and prosperous! The protagonist is able to get along everywhere, stealing elixirs and peaches, it's great!

I really like a single female protagonist Jiu Shu fanfic, which is very consistent with the happy ending I want to see. I originally read the novel to easily relieve the pressure of life. Why is it so depressing? This book is quite good.

Well, this book is well written. It doesn't say anything about the protagonist becoming stronger. I just throw it away after using it and then there will be no Uncle Jiu when the protagonist becomes stronger. Any good things are given to Uncle Jiu as soon as possible, and it also makes up for many regrets in the ending. Especially Uncle Jiu and Shi Jian reconciled and became good brothers again. But the only flaw is that there is no female protagonist, but it is also understandable. After all, people who practice Taoism cannot be tripped up by feelings.

It looks pretty good, I give you 5 stars. Stable updates! I don't know where the score of 7 points or more came from. It is indeed a good book [Chigua], author, keep up the good work!

Good, good, good, good book. I feel like I can write more after I become a fairy, but that would be a bit too much. The ending now is perfect. The author is very powerful, very high, really high. This book has only one word, absolutely. It is also the perfect book among all Jiu Shu.

The overall storyline flows smoothly. All the holes that should be filled have been filled. It's rare for a fanfic to be written so smoothly. It not only helps everyone recall the classic scenes of the book, but does not completely replicate it, it deserves the five stars. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

To be honest, the writing is very good, and it is considered very good among Jiu Shu fans. Compared with those cookie-cutter systems or other exaggerated articles, this book is considered a masterpiece. I don't know why the rating is so low.

A good book, one who is devoted to the Tao and is not trapped by worldly love. The only bad thing is that the author updates too slowly [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]. The author should work hard, update more, but don't stop.

Very good. Finally, it's not about the plot. It's better to go to the movies to follow the plot.

Well written, keep up the good work!

Personally I think it's better than other fanfics

It's a very interesting book about Uncle Jiu's world. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Very beautiful! ! ! I finished reading it before I knew it, and I'm looking forward to reading a new book as soon as possible! ! !