Scum*****

I've been in a bad mood recently and can't read any novels. I finally found one I like, but the first world was ended hastily and it's a bit unacceptable. I'll give it five stars. I hope the author can write another one similar to the first world? I really like this character, please [cry][cry][cry]

I still want to see the ending of the first world...

The rating is really super low, but don't stop reading because of the low rating. The reason for the low rating is that the first world is too sloppy. The author's writing style is really good. Although the author's writing style is a bit lacking, it is really super good-looking. I strongly recommend @ Yangfan Qihang to watch it! ! ! ! !

No, is this the end of the first world? I really like this young master's character. It didn't happen so suddenly. At least I finished writing the variety show. It's gone. It feels so bad. It feels like it's gone. ||Φ|(|T|Д|T|)|Φ||

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! !

The first world should be longer and more enjoyable. It ends too early.

There are very few protagonists with characters like this in fast travel stories. In the first world, the character design was very good at the beginning, but later on it felt like the character character of the protagonist fell apart and was a bit fragmented. Not only the character design in the plot world, but also the character description when it was first bound to the system is a bit inconsistent. It is too weak, giving people the appearance of a supporting role or that others can control the protagonist at will. However, while the characters are not broken, the author still writes very well. The characters in the small world are really touching and allow readers to immerse themselves in it, at least that's how I feel. In stories about quick travel masters, these characters are generally not given to the protagonists. They are basically given to the attackers. I hope that the protagonist's character at the end will not become as weak and squeamish as in many novels nowadays, and that it will give people the feeling that it is easy to control. Such a brilliant and exciting character has been set up, I hope the author can stabilize it well. Finally, I want to ask if the protagonist has CP? I selfishly hope not to do so. Sometimes one-on-one relationships always give people a sense of restraint, and they have to change themselves for CP or something. It is better for the protagonist to live a good life with his family after the mission is over. But have you considered the author's thoughts? I hope this article will get better and better.

I really like the first world. I don't know if it's because I have no inspiration or what. Anyway, I really hope that I can continue it or give it a spin-off. It's awesome. It's written very well to my liking. I really like it😭😭

Good looking! ! ! Damn it, why is Chapter 70 still under review, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh reason is of still Chapter 70 still undergoing review ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! It's so fast that it's not enough to watch! ! !

It's great to watch. I feel that the rating shouldn't be so low. The plot is very good and the characters are also great. It's said to be a slow time travel but in fact it's super fast when I'm watching it. It's not that you feel immersed in it because it's fast. It's really fast. I can't say it's sloppy. I just feel it's too little. I'm still thinking about what will happen next. He just completed the task of this world and left, but it's still very interesting to watch. After reading it, I feel that the low rating may be due to the first world. The writing may not be so smooth, but in fact, it will be a big surprise to watch the second world, and it is very enjoyable to watch. The author is very nice! I suddenly discovered that the reason for the low rating may be due to too many typos. The names of the two male protagonists are occasionally reversed. In some places, the preface and subtitles are inconsistent. It is clearly at the back of a hotel but now it feels like home.

It was so sudden that the first world ended ಥ_ಥ

Hahahaha, that's such a coincidence. The third world is what I hate the most. [Smile] I'm really at my wits' end. The third world is so shabby for me. Let's take a look. The beginning is that A was drugged by his parents and forcibly bound to and fucked by an E (which means he can mark A and make it his own O). The parents even used AE's and their genes to create two sons. Throughout the whole story, the parents said they felt sorry for A. , And then scolded his son for the sake of his precious grandson, saying that his son was irresponsible, and then e found out that a was the senior he had a crush on in college. At first, he asked for it but was not liked by a, and then it turned out that the two sons felt particularly sorry for their father e. Anyway, if you like this bite, you can eat it yourself. I withdraw. I really have no choice. I really feel sorry for Mu Leng. I feel that he has seriously lost his power in this world. I really feel that he is so miserable, so miserable, so miserable, so miserable. I really want to cry.

It's great to watch, but it feels like each plane ends very quickly, but the character of the protagonist is very well written, the author's big and small designs are very clever, and the interaction between the two protagonists is also very cute! The only fly in the ointment is that! How come there are so few! Big cheers for more updates!

It is strongly recommended that the first world be published as a separate book [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Can the author continue the ending of the first world? I really like this setting.

I really like it, it's so in line with my taste, I love it so much [adoration] [blowing kiss] Damn, you must be exhausted to update yourself [lick the screen][lick the screen][adoration]

The first world was full of excitement, but then it disappeared and it felt a bit rushed. [Almost crying]

It's very interesting. It would be better if the plot of the first world could be added and updated.

I love it so much, I love it so much! Jumping like crazy on my xp! ! ! [Adoration]

Chapter 18 of Cool Beauty is under review, let me see it quickly [laughing]

I quite like it! Come on! ^ω^[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's so beautiful. I just want to see more at once. I can't get enough [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good, but the updates are too slow. Thank you to the author. [Like][Shy]

I really like this type of article. I have been looking for it recently. I really like this kind of contrasting article. However, there are not many updates. Please work hard [please update more]!

This book by the author is also good-looking I didn't win. It can't be compared with the other one. This one is so disgusting.

It suits my taste so well. [Shy][shy][admiration]

I like it so much I like it so much🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥺🥺🥺🥺

There are too few, please give me more [cry][cry][cry][cry] It's really good-looking!!! It's just too little [crying]

Don't give up. I don't ask you to have 3 chapters a day, nor do I ask you to have 2 chapters a day. You can do just one chapter a day [crying] [crying] [crying] The winter vacation is about to take place. Shouldn't I tell you the truth? I want to update 1 chapter every day. Of course, the more the better (twisted crawling). Let's satisfy the child's wish [crying] [crying] [crying]

It looks good, but each world feels so short [crying]