Dragon Ball: The Invincible One Under Heaven

The plot setting is not bad, but the character of the protagonist is not very likable, and the other characters have a vague feeling. By the way, there are some aspects of the plot that the author may think are very good, but you have to because today's readers are very sensitive. If you disagree even slightly, they will feel uncomfortable. In this case, you can change it if you can, and forget it if you can't. There are people watching it anyway, so there is no need to lick it.

Vegeta wished to make Space-Time Patroller Kakarot and Vegeta lose his memory, and then let Main Time-Space Kakarot and Patrol Team Vegeta permanently merge, and Sun Wukong with Gogeta's body and potential was born. Let Main Time Vegeta and Patrol Kakarot's earrings permanently merge, and Vegeta with Vegeta's body and potential was born. Make a wish to permanently fuse Gogeta's amnesia in other time and space, and then let Vegito and amnesia Gogeta merge permanently. Vegito, who has a permanent body and potential, was born. Let Bardock and the amnesiac Vegeta III permanently merge. (Badata/Bejik?)

I personally think the writing is very good, so please give it a thumbs up to the author.

It's not bad. The protagonist's character is crazy enough and has strength. Keep it up and look forward to the author's updates. I'm sorry, the plot in chapters 45 to 50 is ridiculous. It would be great if it could be changed.

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A rare good Dragon Ball book on Tomato

I feel like it's almost over, and I've been following it for a long time. It's pretty good among all the Dragon Ball fandoms. I can't watch Dragon Ball's combat power and so on. If I pursue the original work, it will fall apart when it comes to combat power and so on. Anyway, the creative ideas of this work are quite to my taste (maybe some people don't like harems). Isn't it enough to watch Toei every day? Once they're all on the same page, that's it. If the author still wants to write, he can travel to other anime time and space. Many interesting articles can rarely be continued forever. It is also possible to use 20 chapters of one world view as a side story without compromising the combat power. I hope it ends perfectly

When Mid-Autumn Festival meets National Day, it is referred to as "China". The moon shines brightly with the country, people reunite with their families, Only when there is a country can there be a family, and only when there is a family can we be reunited. Let's go to the appointment of the bright moon and celebrate the birth of our motherland. I wish our great country and our small family prosperity and happiness together. Happy National Day!

It's great. I just read it with the intention of giving it a try, but I was immersed in it before I read it for a while. It has more than 800,000 words and I finished it in less than a week. Don't think that writing about Dragon Ball is a brainless novel. The storyline of this book and the characterization of the characters are also very high. In the author's writing, we get to know many characters with rich personalities, such as Vegeta from the U13 universe. He was the one who was sent to the earth in the first place. It is very novel, and there are many more characters like this, which are worthy of our attention! I only evaluate a book after reading it, and this one really touched my heart. 👍❤️

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was fine and we were just friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment. Fortunately, we met at a milk tea shop, and we didn't choose to meet someone we knew somewhere else. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions. After all, there are many car rollovers online. But when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She looked much prettier in the photo, and she was my type. She also recognized me. I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and down. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process She was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.