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I am the author, so five stars is not excessive [laughs][top post]

There are really few people. The author has always been in a difficult position. But I still hope that the author will not stop updating. After all, if you open 50 photos, you will see that the author's writing is a veteran. It's smooth, and the outline and branches are basically reasonable, as are the descriptions of supporting characters and the like. Very good. He is obviously a person with good foundation. Come on! Come on, come on, come on, come on! Come on, author!

A very good new book, keep up the good work! ! !

It's very nice, non-toxic, the logic is very comfortable, the supporting characters are also very vividly written, and judging from the current plot, it is not that the brainless male protagonist suppresses the female protagonist. However, I am still curious about how the female protagonist's yandere aspect will be solved in the future. Can the author tell me whether the female protagonist's yandere attribute will be washed away?

It's pretty good, but it's a bit sparse. It's already recommended, so the author doesn't think about updating it [eating melon]

The subject matter is novel, interesting, and fascinating. It is the first time I have read a novel that combines rebirth, online games, and yandere. I find it very interesting. It sets up suspense very well and arouses the interest in continuing reading. The online games are connected to reality in the content of the novel. The writing ideas are clear, and it also makes readers look forward to it. There may be very few people reading it now, and the ratings are not high, but I hope the author will continue to work hard. I believe gold will always shine, and more people will definitely like to read this book.

The readability is quite high, but this kind of online game must be longer to read. After all, the process of defeating monsters and upgrading is indeed a bit boring. The author's subject matter is quite novel and worth reading. It doesn't have any incredible talents and skills like most of Tomato's novels. You can try this kind of subject matter. It's okay, but now the length is too short and it's not enough to read. And I hope there are more authors. The upgrading process of fighting in this online game is originally boring. Even if the subsequent data is very good, people will be lost very quickly if the length is short. Many people will choose to skip the repetitive fighting in online games. They only watch a little bit of it every day. After a long time, it will be put on the bookshelf to gather dust.

Let me give the author a little motivation. Overall, the whole book is good, and the yandere writing is a bit on the cool side. But I think sometimes the panel can be saved. Generally, I will not read it carefully at the end, or I will not read it at all. If I don't read the book, I will lose interest in reading it because of the watery content (of course, it will be different if you read more than 10 chapters a day). This kind of novel generally has this shortcoming (for reference only, cheers for the author)

The rhythm is handled well, the character structure is also okay, and the various personalities are quite distinct. However, Qingmei's role is a bit small, so it is recommended that it be increased appropriately. Also, don't just level up and kill monsters. You can properly show off your holiness in front of others and act more awesome. This will be more enjoyable.

I am definitely qualified to comment [face covering]. I thought this book was average in the early stages, but I felt it after 30 chapters. . How to say it. . The plot is well written. . But the disadvantage is that there are some fights that could be written in more detail. . The author briefly mentions [face covering], and there are more emotional lines in the next 80 chapters. . That's why I didn't see the male and female protagonist handing out candy before. You can continue to see [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] later, the last shortcoming is. . Too little [grievance]

Great, it's a good book

Really good-looking, good-looking, good-looking,

It's pretty good, but it's too short and there are not many people.

It's good to watch, but the heroine's role is a bit lacking

To give a five-star rating, there are three points for me personally: A childhood sweetheart, hehe, the writing is quite good. Two twins are born, this one is also more novel and interesting. The description of the three yandere childhood sweethearts before they recognized each other was considered a passing test and then failed to show off. Thank you for writing such a book. I can't get enough of it.

Please support me brother.

Good looking and edible.

It's really good

It's just that the update is too slow. If you are so slow again, I will give you my heart and ask for it back [laughing] [laughing]

The online game Yandere is quite good, but it has been discontinued. It has twin male and female protagonists.

It's good-looking. Except for the awkward emotional line, everything else is pretty good.

A very interesting online game advent novel. The yandere + online game is a novelty. The emotional line is not procrastinating. It is worth reading if you are interested in both.

Although I've only read a little bit, I feel pretty good. Come on, author.

It looks great, I love reading it, so cheers for the author!

The new book is pretty good, keep it up

[Eating Melon] It's okay, I don't feel like it's bad at the moment [Thinking] I just don't know how long it will take to change jobs. Luochuan suddenly realized the problem. He had no choice but to become stupid and irritable once he dealt with this woman. [Awkward laugh] Another woman comes out. This one might be a harem novel. [I'm full] I see that this one is about a yandere childhood sweetheart with a single heroine. If it's written as a harem, it's useless.

Very good plot

I like it very much, cheers for the author! !

It looks good, but the score is a bit low. Come on [blow a kiss]

Come on! Author, I support you