Please Recommend Huanbi's Writing, Which Can Be Used for Rebirth or Time Travel.
I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of Zhen Huan: Huan Bi's Daily Life-Changing Life". The male protagonist is King Guo. Huanbi doesn't take the initiative, and he doesn't imitate Zhen Huan. Masters, please recommend it. I've read all the tomatoes.
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The writing is very detailed, which is commendable. But the main character really has no sense of existence. I think we can weaken the large descriptions of other supporting characters in the original route. Sometimes the description is just one or two chapters that everyone knows, and the protagonist does not appear at all. Moreover, the plot has not changed much so far, making it feel like watching a TV series. This is not a big shortcoming, but the author can focus on the protagonist, what the protagonist did, or write some small daily development branches outside the main line, etc., Instead of always describing in detail the plot in the TV series that has happened and has not been changed by the protagonist. In fact, many people know what happened, and they will get tired after watching it for a long time. Anyway, I look forward to the author's progress! Will keep reading!
Does Huanbi have CP?
The writing is good, but there are too many typos [cry][cry][cry]
Good writing, but not too clever