Genshin Impact: Forging the Sombra Mask at the Beginning

For a novice author, the writing style, plot, etc. Of this book are quite good. I hope you will continue to work hard and the following plots will still have quality assurance. Now that I have read it, I will keep watching until the end of this book (by the way, the quality of the books I read is very high, and some books are not rated high at the beginning. For example, the book "The Pharmacist's Marriage Proposal" was not rated at first, and then I pushed the book. Unexpectedly, the number of people I saved from the book shortage increased by tens of thousands [face covering], and then the book became popular)

@The overall writing is too hasty, but it could be written more delicately. For example, it can write about daily life, mood, and other things. You can also write about psychological thinking. Overall, the writing is too hasty, but it is still very good. It feels like it is too fast, just like pressing the accelerator button of the game. In fact, every time You can also intersperse some daily tasks between each task. Although you can do many tasks and play many plots in a day in the game, if you write a novel, it is equivalent to writing the novel into a world. After you finish this, you can do that. The time can be used to write a small daily routine, so that it will not give people the same feeling. It's too fast, and it allows people to calm down and take a look, and there are too few perspectives about the protagonist. The overall impression is that the world is not viewed from the perspective of the protagonist, but from the third person. According to what I read from other Genshin Impact fan novels, most of the time the author writes from the perspective of the majority of the protagonists, less Writing from a God's perspective often makes it difficult for people to get involved. However, it is the first time for the author to write a novel, so it is very good to write it this way. I just hope that it will not be interrupted, let alone unfinished. The author can slowly change it later, so that when he writes the second novel next time, he can write a high-scoring novel (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

For a newbie, the writing is pretty good. I hope your writing will be better

I liked watching it, although I don't know why, but in the end I didn't even let the Black Shadow Corps clear out the miscellaneous soldiers [Thinking]

It's very interesting, but the protagonist has no system.

After watching the virtual competition between Sky Battleship and Mondstadt Liyue, I was afraid that the protagonist would create a simulated universe on Sky Battleship later.

Come on and write! It's not very good in the early stage, but it's okay in the middle and early stages.

I just want to know what the protagonist's background is.

Does the arrow have a substitute messenger?

Write more carefully and add some daily life

The content is really good, but I personally don't think it's good enough.

After reading Chapter 39, the plot is still good, but the protagonist lacks emotion, and the reading feels very bland, with no emotional fluctuations in the few hands.

Not bad, very pretty

. Guardian Battle of Geta Tower

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, but the key quantity is a bit lacking.

How to say it? I was laughing so hard.

It's great. Keep up the good work, author!

The story is good and has a sense of humor. Come on! So far the writing is very good.