Paper Bride: From the Start, I Pick Up Nie Moli

The writing is very good, but I still hope that the protagonist will feel it every second after entering it.

It feels pretty good. I support it. After all, there are not many articles of this type. I hope the author will update it quickly! ! ! ! What are the follow-up plans? Will there be no updates? Or are you ready to settle down and polish the subsequent plot? Have you considered adding more horror game content? I hope for an accurate answer, but I am afraid that I only have a few pictures after a year. For readers, this is actually very painful.

So far, it has been pointed out that the author has some minor problems and the timeline is confusing. It would be okay if he simply moved the series of people from Mr. Zombie to modern society, but he arranged for Taoist Priest Four Eyes to tell the story about 30 oceans ago. This directly caused Taoist Priest Four Eyes to be around 150 years old. What is the other point? It's about Zang Laoliu, who died too hastily. He will be included in the third part, but mainly Nie Moli is OK. The third step is gone and she is just a simple stepmother. What about the fourth part? The fourth part was due to the Zang Lao Liu that Lao Zheng's family believed in, and then created the water god ritual, and then some water ghosts. In the fifth part, Zang Lao Liu was fully involved. It is true that the boy named Tu was his first choice, but he mainly relied on Zang Lao Liu, and the recent third Six movies have also come out. These all depend on the author's ability. Secondly, I think the writing in Paperman is very good, that is, Hong Kong Ghost Records. There are a little less. I look forward to the author writing more horror games in the future and integrating them very well. Very good, don't let Soul Ferryman come in later. I read what I wrote and basically the writing is not good. But if the author has this ability, it doesn't matter if you write. I will continue to support it. After all, this is a rare thing. I hope the author can keep writing. From now on, there are no language problems and the story arrangement is very reasonable. Although Tao Mengyan's story has nothing to do with the main plot of the second part and even the character is not consistent with it, but I still hope that the author can write better in the future.

There are not many people who write about this subject [face covering], the author should persevere, keep working hard [punch hard], I believe it will get better and better [learned]

Extremely rare horror game fanfic

I think this kind of subject matter is okay. It can be regarded as a new approach for the second middle school. First of all, full marks. I think the author did this to make up for the regrets that most players have for this character, and to fill in the things that this character has lost. Like first and then view

Fire, why not fire! [Anger]

Although the timeline is confusing, it does not hinder viewing. The writing is very good and everything is sewn together. Will the author write about Menggui Mansion later? That story is also quite exciting.

Since the female protagonist has been accepted, why not the female ghost bridge? Since we have opened a harem, we should accept them all

I hope the author keeps writing, it's great