An old Taoist priest once said that you have to save three points when doing things, but I want to do that ten points.
Senior uncle said that he just wanted to beat his senior brothers and sisters in a certain place, but in the end he lost miserably.
The master said that he could be called the strongest in the world, but in the end he died without a complete body.
Jingqing didn't know what to say, so he simply stopped and blasted out the Five Thunder Curse.
The weather is turbulent, but my sun is prosperous
Reader comments
The subject matter of the story is good, but the writing style is not mature enough.
I saw Chapter 12 and all the dialogue has no quotation marks.
The subject matter of the story is good, but the writing style is not mature enough.
I saw Chapter 12 and all the dialogue has no quotation marks.
Not bad! Hope it doesn't go astray!