[Original copy flow, survival, group portrait, yandere, no system, no plug-ins, biased towards wits.
When he woke up, Zhang Ming found that the roof, walls and even the floor of his shed were gone. All that was left was the bed suspended a hundred meters above him.
And countless people below who were equally terrified on the bed.
Before Zhang Ming could wake up from the shock, a voice appeared out of thin air.
"The copy has officially begun. Welcome everyone to the Paradise!"
Reader comments
It's particularly good-looking. It has the feeling of ending in ten days and the feeling of steady improvement. After meeting the second female lead, he quickly recruited the second female lead into his team without any delay. I hope this book will get better and better, no more eunuchs [blowing kisses]
I can only say that it's okay, but sometimes it just means forcibly reducing the points of the protagonist group, so you might as well just drop a big ice block and smash the protagonist group to death.
It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine is not a drag.
So far, it's generally good. However, one thing is that in a team situation, Xia Chan's role is much greater than that of the protagonist, and there is a lot of description space. Basically, many important points were brought up by Xia Chan. It seems that the protagonist is a bit dull. The performance of the protagonist in individual battles is also very good, but in team battles, I hope that all three can show themselves in the appropriate fields.
The current 200,000 words are well written and I look forward to the next plot.
What I am more concerned about right now is the issue of the female protagonist. These two are very well written so far. I don't really want to add more, but if the author is very confident in his ability and wants to write a few more, I suggest that the total number should not exceed five. Anyway, five is the limit I can bear. Although, the problem of the heroine still depends on the development of the plot later. The development of the plot later depends on how the author writes it.
What is worth mentioning later is that the protagonist's team is not one man leading a bunch of women through the level, but there are other men. I saw that other characters will be added to the tenth dungeon team. I just thought that if the next teammate to join was still a woman, then I would give up decisively until I read two chapters later. I was relieved to see that there would be three characters added to the dungeon this time, and there was a team in front that was not hostile to the protagonist group. After reading the latest chapter, just like what I thought, I had no choice but to continue to light up the shit-yellow button😁😁.
There are not many books that I can classify as good. They are worth reading. Female writers have different ideas than male writers. You can immediately feel it when reading. The writing is good, the ideas are good, there are not many words, and the rhythm is quite satisfactory. Keep up the good work.
This is my first time giving a gift in 🍅 [laughing]
The content of the book is really special and beautiful [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
The subject matter is very fresh
But I would rather read a harem story [laughing and crying]
I still like that little yellow guy and his wife
The storyline and everything are perfect and great. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง
Good. It started to have a bit of a "Trembling in the Sky" flavor, but later there were relatively new settings and combinations.
But too short
After watching it, I give it five stars. I can only say that it is really good to watch. Running a shelter and taking dungeon adventures are both interesting. The emotional scenes are also okay, at least not too toxic.
It turns out there is not a lot of heroine, she slipped away
Very innovative subject matter, good-looking, so good-looking [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]
I would like to ask, how many female protagonists are there in total?
The book is still well written, but it would be better if the plot was richer.
After reading this novel, I filled up all the spaces under the bed with all kinds of food, drink, clothing, and weapons. I also bought brackets online and a series of things that can be installed on the bed... [Shy]
Well-written and engaging
Five stars, must be five stars! ! ! !
The writing is good, but the author is so angry that he [eat melon] [eat melon] [smile]
Very good-looking, and the female lead is not a drag, the first female lead and the second female lead are both very well portrayed.
What can I say? It's very interesting and worth reading.
To be honest, it's pretty good. The regulatory copy is well written. Just like the conflicting heart of human beings, it is always full of scars.
Not bad, there are a few minor flaws but it doesn't affect reading. Overall it's great.
Ask if it is a harem
The plot is okay, but it's really not that good with two men, and is this a harem story?
Good looking, can be called a boutique product
Very pretty! ! Come on, author
It's too short. I don't mind watching it. Let me watch it alone [shy]
I thought it was going to be a harem, but now it seems like it will be a single female protagonist [eating melon]
It's okay, but it feels too hard
After eight months of interruption, I finally came back. I gave up because of the interruption.
Hey hey hey, the title of the book is completely consistent with the content of the book
It's particularly good-looking. It has the feeling of ending in ten days and the feeling of steady improvement. After meeting the second female lead, he quickly recruited the second female lead into his team without any delay. I hope this book will get better and better, no more eunuchs [blowing kisses]
I can only say that it's okay, but sometimes it just means forcibly reducing the points of the protagonist group, so you might as well just drop a big ice block and smash the protagonist group to death.
It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine is not a drag.
So far, it's generally good. However, one thing is that in a team situation, Xia Chan's role is much greater than that of the protagonist, and there is a lot of description space. Basically, many important points were brought up by Xia Chan. It seems that the protagonist is a bit dull. The performance of the protagonist in individual battles is also very good, but in team battles, I hope that all three can show themselves in the appropriate fields.
The current 200,000 words are well written and I look forward to the next plot. What I am more concerned about right now is the issue of the female protagonist. These two are very well written so far. I don't really want to add more, but if the author is very confident in his ability and wants to write a few more, I suggest that the total number should not exceed five. Anyway, five is the limit I can bear. Although, the problem of the heroine still depends on the development of the plot later. The development of the plot later depends on how the author writes it. What is worth mentioning later is that the protagonist's team is not one man leading a bunch of women through the level, but there are other men. I saw that other characters will be added to the tenth dungeon team. I just thought that if the next teammate to join was still a woman, then I would give up decisively until I read two chapters later. I was relieved to see that there would be three characters added to the dungeon this time, and there was a team in front that was not hostile to the protagonist group. After reading the latest chapter, just like what I thought, I had no choice but to continue to light up the shit-yellow button😁😁.
There are not many books that I can classify as good. They are worth reading. Female writers have different ideas than male writers. You can immediately feel it when reading. The writing is good, the ideas are good, there are not many words, and the rhythm is quite satisfactory. Keep up the good work. This is my first time giving a gift in 🍅 [laughing]
The content of the book is really special and beautiful [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] The subject matter is very fresh But I would rather read a harem story [laughing and crying]
I still like that little yellow guy and his wife
The storyline and everything are perfect and great. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง
Good. It started to have a bit of a "Trembling in the Sky" flavor, but later there were relatively new settings and combinations. But too short
After watching it, I give it five stars. I can only say that it is really good to watch. Running a shelter and taking dungeon adventures are both interesting. The emotional scenes are also okay, at least not too toxic. It turns out there is not a lot of heroine, she slipped away
Very innovative subject matter, good-looking, so good-looking [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]
I would like to ask, how many female protagonists are there in total?
The book is still well written, but it would be better if the plot was richer.
After reading this novel, I filled up all the spaces under the bed with all kinds of food, drink, clothing, and weapons. I also bought brackets online and a series of things that can be installed on the bed... [Shy]
Well-written and engaging
Five stars, must be five stars! ! ! !
The writing is good, but the author is so angry that he [eat melon] [eat melon] [smile]
Very good-looking, and the female lead is not a drag, the first female lead and the second female lead are both very well portrayed.
What can I say? It's very interesting and worth reading.
To be honest, it's pretty good. The regulatory copy is well written. Just like the conflicting heart of human beings, it is always full of scars.
Not bad, there are a few minor flaws but it doesn't affect reading. Overall it's great.
Ask if it is a harem The plot is okay, but it's really not that good with two men, and is this a harem story?
Good looking, can be called a boutique product
Very pretty! ! Come on, author
It's too short. I don't mind watching it. Let me watch it alone [shy]
I thought it was going to be a harem, but now it seems like it will be a single female protagonist [eating melon]
It's okay, but it feels too hard
After eight months of interruption, I finally came back. I gave up because of the interruption.
Hey hey hey, the title of the book is completely consistent with the content of the book