Personally, I think the good setting is the highlight, and the plot is not very embarrassing. Although it feels like something is missing, maybe because the writing style is a bit immature, it does not affect the reading of the article. Overall, it is not bad. Finally, I hope that the protagonist will not be held back, such as being influenced by someone or something to control and help hold him back. This affects the perception and I am also disgusted by the plot. Come on, author, is there an outline for this article?
Okay, okay, the book that attracted me the most ended like this [awkward laugh]
This is the best novel I have ever read, I hope to continue reading more😻
But for the sake of other friends, I still want to say that this unfinished book contains more than 60 pictures. If you want to read it, just read it. Of course, the last chapter basically tells us the ending. In fact, overall, I still want to ask for a review for this book.
Only now did I realize that there have been no comments, but now it's too late to say anything. In fact, if I really want to say it, I think this article is good-looking. Although it is not as good as it is, it is really well-written. It's good that I didn't delete the book. At least it tells us that the ending will not be too unexpected.
Nice! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
It's the author, how could you fail to finish it? ! ! ! Didn't you say before that it would never be a mess again? ! ! ! Woo hoo... Sad
In fact, I have resentment in my heart. The first part I wrote is very, very good, but the second part is like this, which makes me feel so cold.
It looks good, I love watching it, this character is really loved [Send heart]
It looks good, but the author didn't write it anymore! ! [Almost crying] So sad
I really like this setting! [Send heart][Send heart]
The ending is sloppy, but the plot is good
This is the first time I've seen this setting. It's very novel, but it's too short and not interesting enough.
It's really beautiful, absolutely stunning
Weird story, novel and interesting
Wow, you are great
I've sunk into the bottom of the pit [smile]
So beautiful. Why did you leave early? [Heshan smile]
You are too 6! But it's pretty good-looking too
It's so beautiful. I can only say that Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. It's really very beautiful.
Very innovative, keep up the good work! Whether it's the second dimension or reality, stick to your own efforts.
Personally, I think the good setting is the highlight, and the plot is not very embarrassing. Although it feels like something is missing, maybe because the writing style is a bit immature, it does not affect the reading of the article. Overall, it is not bad. Finally, I hope that the protagonist will not be held back, such as being influenced by someone or something to control and help hold him back. This affects the perception and I am also disgusted by the plot. Come on, author, is there an outline for this article?
Okay, okay, the book that attracted me the most ended like this [awkward laugh]
This is the best novel I have ever read, I hope to continue reading more😻
But for the sake of other friends, I still want to say that this unfinished book contains more than 60 pictures. If you want to read it, just read it. Of course, the last chapter basically tells us the ending. In fact, overall, I still want to ask for a review for this book. Only now did I realize that there have been no comments, but now it's too late to say anything. In fact, if I really want to say it, I think this article is good-looking. Although it is not as good as it is, it is really well-written. It's good that I didn't delete the book. At least it tells us that the ending will not be too unexpected.
Nice! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ It's the author, how could you fail to finish it? ! ! ! Didn't you say before that it would never be a mess again? ! ! ! Woo hoo... Sad
In fact, I have resentment in my heart. The first part I wrote is very, very good, but the second part is like this, which makes me feel so cold.
It looks good, I love watching it, this character is really loved [Send heart]
It looks good, but the author didn't write it anymore! ! [Almost crying] So sad
I really like this setting! [Send heart][Send heart]
The ending is sloppy, but the plot is good
This is the first time I've seen this setting. It's very novel, but it's too short and not interesting enough.
It's really beautiful, absolutely stunning
Weird story, novel and interesting
Wow, you are great
I've sunk into the bottom of the pit [smile]
So beautiful. Why did you leave early? [Heshan smile]
You are too 6! But it's pretty good-looking too
It's so beautiful. I can only say that Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. It's really very beautiful.
Very innovative, keep up the good work! Whether it's the second dimension or reality, stick to your own efforts.
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