The Bizarre Tale of a Villainous Tycoon and Me

In fact, overall this book is pretty good. Objectively speaking, I only watched half of it Let's talk about the shortcomings first 1. The background is a bit blurry. Things like the background should have been decided in advance. When I read the first ten chapters, I really didn't know the background clearly. Sometimes there is no system, sometimes there is a system, sometimes it is third person, and sometimes it is first person. This makes me feel very confused. It's a bit unclear, what does the author want to express? But I think it's almost the same after more than ten chapters. 2. The emotions between the protagonist and the opponent are as vague as a heartthrob, and I can't understand it. The main reason is that I don't know why the protagonist Gong suddenly fell in love with the protagonist Shou, like falling in love at first sight. Maybe it's because I'm used to seeing love flow slowly and steadily. This is my personal preference. Let's talk about it, it feels like a pretty good place 1. The author's writing is pretty good. I feel the same in the description of some scenes. Many authors are better than those I have read so many books (I have hundreds of books with dual male protagonists that have high ratings and some with low ratings. But the author's writing of this article is really in the top 50% of what I have read (some authors whose writing is at 9:00 or more are not as good as you based on writing alone)) 2. I feel that the author's character design of the protagonist is pretty good. At least his character is not broken. 🤔 However, I think the character design of the protagonist can still be improved, so that it can resonate more with readers. For example, the life background and the protagonist's attack have some overlap. Under the attraction of same-sex attraction, they gradually moved towards each other. 3. I also think the plot setting is a little better (maybe it's because I'm used to such bland stories, but I think it's pretty good. It's just that my eyes have seen too many things they shouldn't have seen. I didn't say anything about the author) 4 The book written by the author is really good. After all, the author insists on updating several other small books that I have followed, but I lost contact directly. I don't know if he died or something? (I'm kidding, I'm not cursing them.) To a certain extent, the author is considered very good. I stopped reading several other novels that I followed, and I don't know how many days ago. One of them stopped reading for about a year. Having said so much, here is a summary: 1. The background of about ten pictures is a bit blurry. 2. The emotions of the protagonist Gong Shou are a bit sudden. 1. The writing is very good (at least in my opinion, it is acceptable). 2. The characters of the two protagonists are also pretty good. 3. The plot is not particularly abrupt or anything? 4. Can the author keep it updated???

It's quite interesting. I haven't read a novel about cultivating immortals for a long time. This article has rekindled my desire to read about cultivating immortals. Recommended to watch. Of course, Ye has some bad points, such as the feeling of repetition before and after the plot. But it still looks great. Good reviews. Sisters who like to read stories about two male protagonists cultivating immortals can join