Immortality

Breaking the rules, the process is completely different from any longevity novel I have read before. It is no longer a running account mode plot, or the background is too complicated and the description of the characters is ignored. It shows us the exploration, growth, sadness or joy of the world of immortality from the perspective of the protagonist. I am in a confused period of life, and it gave me some inspiration. A thousand people can see a thousand Hamlets. Just read it, maybe you will also have strange ideas!

The highlight is that the protagonist is very human-like, which I think is a very attractive point in the AI ​​era. The male protagonist is not Long Aotian, who is decisive in killing, nor is he an intellectual type who can make plans without leaving any trace, nor is he a tyrant who bears a blood-stained hatred, nor is he a treacherous and evil demon. He just doesn't have a high sense of morality by nature. He takes advantage and kicks away obstacles that stand in his way. As a result, he does a lot of bad things. The author has no intention of clearing the protagonist's name, which often makes him miserable. When I see the protagonist, I think of my bad friends and my own shortcomings and selfishness. Because the protagonist is such a low-spirited god, some cold humorous plots often occur, which are quite funny. This article is recommended to old bookworms who can accept slow-burning but not cool writing.

I think the writing is very good, the writing style is superb, not far-fetched, and seamlessly connected. The description of various situations in the world is very immersive and has no sense of violation. Five-star praise

No long-winded white text, simple and clear logic of the world of immortality , this is the real world of cultivating immortals, not the routine of Long Aotian and family bitterness and hatred. Everyone is cultivating immortals. It's time to let go. It's so cool.

This book is really good. All the other immortality novels start with immortality and have the worst qualifications (actually the most bullish). The protagonist of this book is not qualified to cultivate immortality [face covering], and although the protagonist is miserable, he is not the kind of author who deliberately disgusts the readers and abuses the protagonist. The writing is really amazing, sometimes very funny, sometimes very sad. It has written a story about a little arrogant, yet cautious little person who becomes immortal and struggles to become an immortal. I can't stop reading [Adored] [Adored]

I regret finding it too late It looks good, 100 points out of 100 [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Unlike today's template articles, you still have to read old books [laughing][laughing][laughing] good looking good looking [Grgrievance] [Grief] [Grief] [Grief] At chapter 456, I really can't stand it anymore. It's all about describing women. Women have to be described at least ten times in one chapter. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I don't understand. There's really no need for so much space.

The writing style of the first few chapters seemed to me to be very novice-style, and the subject matter was good. As I continued reading, the content gradually got better. Personally, I think that in addition to the main plot of seeking immortality, there can also be some foreshadowing. After all, the protagonist lives forever, so we can take advantage of this trend! The one like the little snake is very good. It could use some writing later. And since it is a female snake demon, the author must have written it intentionally. I looked back at the first few chapters and felt that the writing style at the beginning needs to be changed. It is not very attractive. The rest of the book is still good, but if you want to attract new readers, you still need to start well. I think there is no need to change it. If you like this style of writing, you will like it. If you don't like it, you won't like it. It's a kind of filtering. After all, the whole article is in this style.

It's very good. Although sometimes the protagonist is deliberately deflated and makes people uncomfortable to watch, I think this is the way the novel is. But as long as the author is more tactful, the book can be read. But it's okay to endure the discomfort at the beginning. The author is still the same. It's interesting, but it's really boring to eat it!

The characters are well created, but some readers may not be able to accept the male protagonist's personality, and the plot is a bit stiff, but it is still fascinating and novel. Overall, this is a book that deserves a rating of nine I estimate that this book is going to be unfinished. The author doesn't have time to write it, and the protagonist has only just lived in the base realm to participate in things between powerful people. Based on my experience in reading so many novels, I wrote this book. If the author doesn't grasp it well, it will basically end up being unfinished, and the possibility of it being unfinished is very high.

After reading Chapter 87, the author has a bit of a dry sense of humor, so I would like to leave a book review. In addition, this book is written in a very interesting way, a bit like a short video commentary. Maybe it's the beginning of a new genre.

The protagonist is not like an ordinary immortal-style protagonist, but more like the wandering weirdo in the weird world of immortality. He exists forever, always pursuing immortality, and bringing all kinds of disasters and opportunities to the world. I like the power system of Yuan Gu very much. It is much more interesting than the simple martial arts and immortal cultivation systems.

The creativity is very good, but I feel that the writing style and your expression of the subtleties are not enough, and the background is too blurry.

The slow-burning type is much better looking than the system text. The plot has ups and downs. Russell broke through the predicament of having no spiritual roots and found his own path to immortality from a weak mortal. Then he was bound to a dangerous path because of an opportunity. Along the way, he gained too much and lost even more. He can always avert danger by chance. (The author's divine power) Because a powerful commission forced Russell to go into danger that he did not want to go, fate and cause and effect intertwined with him to create a different picture.

The writing is a bit dull, but the story is exciting. It's rare that it's not a formula-updated fairy tale, and there's nothing dramatic about it. It's a pity that the public is a little too poisonous, so it doesn't feel like it will be too popular.

Come on, author! The plot and rhythm of the story are very good. It is a high-quality longevity novel. Not only that, it has also constructed a very large world view and interesting training system, and the writing style has also been significantly improved in the later chapters. It is considered a rare Tomato novel that can be read! It's a pity that very few people read it, but you, the author, have to believe in yourself, you can do it!

For me, the book is very good in every aspect. I admire the author's perseverance in constantly updating. In the early days of the novel, the main plot was to work hard to awaken the spiritual roots. Later, we worked hard to find various methods and systems. However, most systems require spiritual roots, and the protagonist does not have spiritual roots. This is very rare in most novels. The original Gu system is also eye-catching. According to the various abilities of the original Gu have been explained many times, it feels like the abilities of each original Gu have been connected to the essence of the great road. This is especially true for the following true scriptures, especially the explanations and definitions of true scriptures and false scriptures, which are even more mind-expanding. Not only that, the protagonist participates in various major events. The first time I came to the battle for Taoist weapons, it led to some foreshadowing and opponents. The second time, the character "Tang Monk" led to the second main line of searching for destiny gold coins (the first main line of searching for spiritual roots, of course, will not be included later). The third incident of the Ancient Man led to the big boss behind the scenes who was in charge of the avenue. The fourth time should be the chapter of destiny. By the fourth time, the spiritual root was swallowed by the light Gu, one of the original Gu. Leading to the end of the first main line. The plot is also very imaginative, and often some inadvertent actions change the direction of the world, and people around him start to express their incomprehension about his actions, so they will make up their own minds and then successfully come up with the correct answer. Most of the foreshadowing in the play has been filled in, and I tend not to write about the rest. The advancement of the main line is very stable. The plot innovation in the play is very good, and there is always something different from traditional immortality novels, which is also reflected in the play many times. In the early stage, the protagonist was weak because he had no spiritual roots, so he relied on the Classic of Mountains and Seas in the Scripture and the original Gu ability. This led him to embark on the path of spiritual practice. However, because he had no spiritual roots, his cultivation remained in the foundation-building stage for a long time. Later, in the era of corpse repair, the situation improved. The era of corpse repair is also quite interesting.

It gave me a feeling of "Mushishi", as if it were a road show and I was watching the protagonist's life while walking. Teacher Luosuo is a true cultivator of immortality. His perseverance over a hundred thousand years is unmatched. His character has always been that of a small citizen, lecherous, arrogant and somewhat persistent. Whether it is such a long struggle or such a wretched protagonist, it is a story rarely seen in various online articles. My favorite is the story of Luo Suo forging a sword. It describes a difficult mortal immortal. That is, Luo Suo can reach the pinnacle of mortal ingenuity over a long period of time and create a long sword, a precious spiritual weapon that is also valued by immortals. However, due to the rules of the world, he cannot reshape his spiritual roots, and even the spiritual weapon will decay in the longer years. If we want to make further progress, it means that the world view is missing. It can be said that it has not been developed yet. I always feel that the world is still foggy and unclear. I hope that the protagonist's greatest strength can be clearly defined, that is, the shadow from the sky, otherwise it will feel cheap to just rely on this to solve the problem if something goes wrong. However, the story of this area has not yet been written, so there is no rush.

Good looking as of chapter 13. After reading more books, I realized that the dangers and exploration in the weak hours are the most exciting parts. It's like using a modifier to make a game invincible and then you no longer want to play it. Real exploration and slow upgrade. It is not a mindless upgrade or suppression, unlike the general treasure hunt where the main character will definitely take away all the treasures, but they will be taken away by others. The plot rhythm changed after more than 100 chapters when An An was kidnapped - it was as mindless as an ordinary novel, and the protagonist lost his determination to seek truth. I could give it 5 stars before, but I can't stand it anymore. "What makes him speechless the most is that you, the "son of destiny," have your own affairs, so why bother meddling in other people's affairs temporarily? You don't think that all the benefits belong to you, the "son of destiny," right?" The enemies you face are not gradually getting stronger like in the script, but you encounter the old monster of the Tribulation Yuanshen in the foundation building realm. If the treasure you get can attract the old monster, it is logical.

This is what I want to read, a novel with novel ideas After meeting that family of three, don't watch it until the plot of Pei with the Bracelet is over. The painting style has suddenly changed and it is no longer the same style.

It's really good. It has the same feeling as when I read Chen Dong's novels (i. E., The ancient puzzle flow), but it is different from Chen Dong's writing style. It adds more psychological descriptions of the supporting characters, and the language is more ordinary. I don't use Chen Dong's outrageous and seemingly lofty descriptions. I think this is an advantage. There are still shortcomings, that is, the division and use of realms are not very particular, the same problem as in the early stage of Chen Dong's book, but Chen Dong will use some super characters to replace the realms he has not yet thought of. From time to time, something from the true immortal realm appears, which makes this realm very low-level. All in all, I think the Tomato platform can push traffic.

The personality of the protagonist is interesting and full, and the stories of the supporting characters also have a wonderful chemical reaction with the protagonist. The article is slow-paced, and the description of combat power is not the biggest highlight. The protagonist's defeat and the grand world view described in the article are enjoyable. The solid writing style and amusing protagonist make this longevity article unique. I look forward to how Rosso will use the original Gu to survive in a desperate situation.

This book has many problems, including novices, poisonous points, and minefields, etc., But it has one greatest advantage, which is that it can be as free as you like. This is what keeps people watching.

What a unique word! The author uses objects to describe people, which not only contains the connotation of today's Internet literary world, but also reflects today's society to a certain extent, or interprets what ordinary life should be like. This is fate.

The writing is very realistic, as realistic novels should be. The only problem is that the levels are a bit overwhelming. Everything else is totally fine. If you don't mind the low combat power, I recommend watching it. It feels very realistic and is my favorite novel. Wait……

It's not a cool novel, but it's very interesting. The main character is very fw, like a person on the edge of various events, but because of the negative effects of his abilities, he has been involved in big events. He has the ability to listen to the wind, so he can also show the whole incident.

The protagonist is alive, and the plot is not particularly outstanding, but the portrayal of the protagonist is very interesting. This character cannot be evaluated purely in terms of good or bad.

Immortal style, I highly recommend this book. It is a divine book and a divine man. It is beyond imagination. It is wild and unconstrained, and it is full of humor. It is completely free of the conventions of ordinary novels. It is very enjoyable to read.

The old bookworm said that this is a very good immortality article. Most people don't have any bullshit. They can live for only a year and a half before dying. The only bad thing is that the time span is too fast. It can only be a thousand years. It embodies the loneliness and perseverance of immortality but makes people unable to enter it at all. Just like ordinary people can't see the difference between a few billion and five million, the former has no sense of substitution at all and the latter can have fantasy.

I have been reading novels since I was in junior high school. I have basically read all kinds of novels. I have read at least four to five hundred novels. However, this book by the author is still among the best among the novels I have read. The author's writing skills are very strong and very vivid. But now I am unlucky and no one recommends it for the time being. I am not known by others, but someone with such excellent writing style will definitely be discovered by others.

This writing is very unique, different from the same articles about cultivating immortals that are repeated thousands of times. But it was also very uncomfortable to watch. Every time I wanted to stop watching, I felt like I wanted to continue watching. A plot that is neither good nor bad. .