After Traveling Through the Sixties, I Chose to Run Away to Hong Kong City

So far I think the author's writing is pretty good. Although there are some big discrepancies, the plot is still very good. The main reason is that the continuity of the plot is not very good, which makes it easy for someone to check her previous things in the book to reveal that she is different. After entering Hong Kong, the contrast is so big. Not everyone is a fool. Let's not talk about the clothes. How can she compare with the mainland in terms of skin and temperament? It has only been a few days since she came to Hong Kong. She has changed so much. This is not good. Also for the male protagonist, the profile says that he is slightly predatory. I personally think it is not necessary. It is no longer an old saying. Male protagonists who are predatory are no longer popular. I think Zhou Yang is very good now, he is sweet in love, and he is single-minded in love. Don't do the kind of thing where I love you and I just want to snatch it away from you. It's too cliche. I gave it four points because the author's introduction said it was about taking things by force, and I didn't want to change the male protagonist. Another point is that the continuity of the plot is not good enough and needs to be improved. Other than that, I haven't found any bad points so far. If there are any, I will review it. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The Goldfinger Thief is a story about Hong Kong in the fictional era. The main focus of the female protagonist's career is to write novels. Currently, the male protagonist is a love-minded little naughty dog ​​with a good family background. What is missing is because it is estimated that this pair will be?

It's the type of movie I like to watch, and the heroine also gets away with her revenge very neatly.

@ Sunny is very good-looking. I guess Zhou Yang is the male protagonist. If it doesn't work, two male protagonists will be fine. Anyway, the wealthy families in Hong Kong are quite chaotic. Don't be cruel. Now Zhou Yang and the heroine are sweet.

I really like the heroine in the author's works

The writing is quite sweet. Can you develop your literary career more? Has the male protagonist already been decided? I feel like the female protagonist can talk more about it.

Very good looking, I really like this kind of heroine

Let's choose Zhou Yang as the male lead, sweet love isn't sweet [crying]

It's pretty good. The Disgusting Family is offline super fast. Regarding the choice of male protagonist: on the one hand, I feel that foreign romance is not good, and it is easy to be taken advantage of, but foreign treasures are very cute, so it is really difficult to choose.

It looks good. The robbery later will not be the male protagonist and his grandfather threatening the female protagonist with the bad things she did in mainland China. It's pretty good to watch Zhou Yang now.

Finally, I have a story about the period when I don't go to the countryside. I really like the heroine, she's lustful and selfish, and she's sober in the world.

Beautiful, the heroine has a lot of personality

When will I get pregnant [shy][shy][shy]

It's good. I like the selfishness of the heroine, and the system is also very cute [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Real user, whoever said it doesn't look good, I'll tell him. Of course, if you think it doesn't look good, you can come to me for help.

I hope the heroine will have a harem and let her men give birth to her children [shy]

I like it so much, the heroine is cute and knows how to enjoy it

Very good. I completely accept the refreshing and sweetness. I like this kind of selfish heroine. I enjoyed watching it. [Blowing kiss]

Come on, come on, the author is big

The heroine is emotionally clean and tidy

Give the author 5 stars, come on~

Very beautiful and special

Oops, I think Xiao Yu should be made pregnant, really. The heroine should not have taken the contraceptive pill and made the man pregnant and gave birth to a child.

I'm looking forward to seeing Yu Zhengming's pregnancy

I think it looks great without thinking about it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's well written, I don't understand why the rating is so low. Not enough to watch, please update

Just go home and finish it. It's great. I recommend it.

Okay, why didn't the author stop writing?