People Mess Around with Nie Li at the Beginning of Demon God

There are so many stories about the Demon God. Your writing style and story logic are considered to be T0 level in my mind. But is the protagonist's strength a little too high? If the author prefers happy writing in his heart, I won't say it. In short, if it is not finished in a hurry, it will be a good book in the future. Come on, [like][like][like]

Update faster, don't have too many heroines (ﾉД`) Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง

I had read a Naruto fanfic before, and it was written that it was difficult to function against a strong Susanoo like Otsutsuki, so I created a new form of Susanoo, compressing the Susanoo with pupil power. The appearance of the Susanoo remained the same, but it became more solid. In this form, the Susanoo has both strength, speed and defense. It is hundreds of times larger than the original one. It is called Susanoo Infinite Form. The disadvantage is that it consumes a lot of eye power. Also, adding thunder attribute chakra to Susanoo will produce another form called Susanoo Thunder God Form. The speed, power and defense of this form are more than ten times that of the infinite form (the appearance of this form can be referred to the Susanoo in Sasuke's End Valley) Author, please reply when you receive it. I think you can refer to this.

The book is not bad, at least the second creation of Demon God Chronicles that I saw on Tomato is good, and the characters are well created, such as Lu Piao and the protagonist, but some places are too wordy, and the actions are not very vivid, and the appearance description is slightly inferior to other second creations, but the problem is not big, there is no poisonous point at the moment, come on! ! By the way, typos need to be improved. Although it can be read, it really affects the reading experience. I have reported all the typos I saw, and the author can correct them after looking at them.

I've given you five stars, and you've given me a gift, and the rest is up to you, come on. If you have no inspiration or are blocked by thoughts, you can read more about the author of The Demon God. Then the protagonist's attack method is a bit single, you can look at Naruto more. Come on, the author is optimistic about you! Yours is the only book on Tomato about the Demon God. I read it very well. Come on! Don't give up. Then two updates a day is best. If not, updating on time can also be done. Come on, come on!

The words and writing are good, come on, don't break, let alone eunuch, there is the best author there, come on, this book is really good, worth reading, I hope the author will keep up the good work, there is an author, please come on, this book is really good, really good, I haven't read this kind of book for a long time, alas, this is fate, it's wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's quite consistent with the original work. It doesn't have any unnatural things right from the beginning, and the characters are pretty good [please take a closer look]

🛵…ᴅᴜᴅᴜ! There is a very cute person I am reading the words "The weather is nice, but I don't know if someone will fall off." I have a long, long story that will take me a lifetime to tell you slowly.

Don't give up. This is definitely the best one-step book about the Demon God that I have seen so far.

It's good to watch, but fans of Demon God Chronicles rarely hope that the author will continue to do so.

It's really good. Come on, do you guys have any recommendations for the Demon God Chronicles fanfic? I can't find such books at all.

The writing is very good, but one thing is that it should not be interrupted or become a eunuch. Okay? Okay? ? Okay? ? ? [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

There are no poisonous points in this book, so feel free to read it, and the characters are well drawn, and there is a sense of brotherhood. I like to read it. This is my personal opinion for the time being [full]. But can you hurry up enough to see it! . [Wrongful][Anger].

Very good, this is a tacit understanding of the duo with Nie Li, no distinction between strength and weakness, very good-looking, very exciting, much better than the kind of one that overpowers Nie Li and is invincible.

Author, you are one of the few good reviews I have, please keep updating, it's really good [smile][smile][smile] I have all the good reviews

I have written too little. There are not many novels about the Demon God. I hope the author will write more. This is the point! One chapter a day is not enough. [Eat melon]

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It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. But could the ending be changed? I really don't want to look at the knife. It's uncomfortable to look at the knife. Although I can bear it to a certain extent now, as long as it's not too much, my eyes won't turn red.

Among the Yaoshenji fanfics I read, I would like to call you the strongest It's all finished, I'll give it five stars.

Author: Come on, Tomato. There are very few fanfics like this one. Come on!

In my mind, Nie Li is an omniscient and omnipotent character. The protagonist doesn't understand anything when he comes, but this is a brother's secret and we won't get into it. He really made me cry to death (´;;`). There is also a small problem with the plot. All the settings from Nie Li's perspective were originally explained, but the perspective of the protagonist is omitted, which may be troublesome for friends who have not watched The Demon God (இдஇ; ), summary: I would rather be Nie Li's dog than Tang San's best friend.

The writing is pretty good, although I haven't watched much of Demon God Chronicles, and Naruto has only seen some clips. I guess one of them will turn into a yandere in the end, otherwise how could your protagonist have the attributes of a straight man? After winning the first heroine, someone introduced the second heroine, which is a bit easy to follow, but not much. There aren't many emotional lines, but there are some

I really like this style of writing, and I also really like watching the anime "Yao Shen Ji". In my heart, it is the No. 1 Chinese comic. It has not been updated before, and I thought it had no follow-up. So I have always wanted to find a fan fiction to read. Thanks to the author for fulfilling my fantasy.

I didn't expect someone to write The Legend of Demon God in Tomato, which is really good. The author asks for points.

Well... How should I put it? Good news: The author made an update. Bad news: It was finished hastily and unfinished. I have always found this book very interesting, but I feel helpless. Five stars is my final stubbornness. Thank you to the author. If you have written it elsewhere, please let me know in 🍅

It's okay. It's a very good novel about demons and gods. Just read it and cherish it. Whatever you ask for, come on, author

At present, the best fanfic of Demon God Chronicles. Come on, author, please update it soon [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's quite good. I finally found a novel that I like. The other novels have either been discontinued or the writing is not good. I hope the author won't discontinue the publication. It's very good to write like this. Come on!

It's the best movie I've ever seen, except for a lot of typos. The author asked me to change the rating, otherwise my life will be short.