Game: Pretend to Be Someone Else

The ingredients are too complicated, the plot advances too quickly and is rough, and it is difficult to understand. The settings of the protagonist and other characters are not very clear, and the world background is not very clear. It feels like a running account. In fact, if the author really wants to write a novel, it is recommended to read other novels and learn from them. The writing of this book is really bad, but considering that it is the first time for the author to write, it is normal. In fact, the attractiveness of this book is enough to be perverted (mainly because I am a pervert and sometimes can't understand it.) You can actually give up on this one, it's really hard to read (if it weren't for the fact that there are fewer books with perverted appetites like mine, I probably wouldn't read it.) You can try to write an outline and the progression of the plot first. If you don't want to write an outline, you can go through the plot in your head. This one feels like just writing whatever comes to mind, and it looks super messy. That's it. If I update it in the future, I may follow up on it. Secondly, I'm talking about this because I actually like writing novels and have written hundreds of thousands of words, so when I see some newcomers, I want to say more (mainly, I really want to see a book with a similar setting and writing style that suits my taste.) That's it.

It looks good, but some places need to be changed, and the word order is different in some places.

There are some shortcomings, but after fixing them, I gave it 4 stars [laughing]

It's a very good book, although it's a bit messy (maybe because some parts were deleted?) But the ingredients are quite good. It makes me want to ask where the author usually lives. Vv right? Or thorn niao? I would like to have an in-depth exchange with the author in this regard. Transformation, possession, fusion, etc. Make me quite excited. I like this aspect more. It's a pity that I don't understand the plot very well. But being able to write these is already very impressive.

Very good, come on, author!

A very good book

Well, it's so ridiculous, NB

Very good, good luck to the author

Obviously, the author is a lolita fan, and lolita will get extra treatment

Well, it suits my taste very well, but some of the descriptions are not very detailed. Most of the time, what I read is foggy. If you can describe why? That should be a step up.

Beautiful, very creative

I hope you won't be banned [laughing evilly]

The ingredients are quite complex

Come more, we like to see it

I love you so much author Da Da

Come on, it looks pretty

The work is very good, keep up the good work

Nonsense but interesting haha ​​[shocked]

All I can say is invincible! [Learned][You taste carefully]