From the Start, I Control the Reborn? I’m Invincible in the Apocalypse

I am also a newbie, so maybe there are some mistakes in the following comments. I hope you can comment and correct me: The author's writing is good, quite exciting, and quite rigorous. This book is not a rebirth style. It's quite novel to kill the rebirthers at the beginning. It's a good start. I would like to remind the author: First, if the harem is the direction, don't forget the major premise of the end of the world. Don't write too exaggeratedly, and don't write it like a horizontal tweet. Second, the overall direction should not become more biased as you write more, and don't be too outrageous. I once read a book in which the protagonist drove a RV around in the end of the world. In the end, the RV was upgraded to a spaceship and even went to save the astronauts on the space station... Third, as a reader, I would like to remind the author not to update constantly and work hard every day💪

I'm a new writer. I'd like to give you a good review first. There's nothing wrong with the content. I just added a little bit of plot about the sixth child next door [laughs] Come on, witness your progress!

Once upon a time, there was a brave man called Perfunctory. He wanted to defeat the demon dragon. But because he was too lazy, he was sneak attacked by the devil's men. Soon he became sluggish. I mean bigger, bigger, better. As long as the content gets better, 10,000 words per day is not a dream [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

I'm a newbie, old bookworms won't comment on your books, for fear that your heart will be broken.

There is nothing wrong with the overall content, it is indeed rigorous. Is the author being squeezed hard at work? This protagonist is the most model worker I have ever seen [laughing evilly]

It's not a big problem. Come on, author [Thinking]

The writing is very good, there are no obvious mistakes, please come on, author [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Although the protagonist is very stubborn, the plot is still relatively novel. Five-star praise. [Laughing]

Support new authors! It's really amazing that the suggestions will be changed and the supporting staff can be arranged! [Blowing kiss]

Very good, the author writes the content very rigorously. I'm a new author, but my writing skills are a bit poor, and my sense of immersion is a bit lacking. Not enough is not a big problem [laughs]