Mobile Games Become Reality: I Build a Faction to Become the Strongest

The book is good, but there are a few problems. Let me talk about the first point first. It revolves too much around the protagonist. The story of the supporting characters is too short. If I want to change it later, it would be better to tell more about the supporting characters, the world of the protagonist, or personal background stories, story lines or sub-lines of the supporting characters. Let's talk about the second point. Just like the supporting characters mentioned above, there are too few stories, and the character creation is very average. You can say that they are outstanding, but the outstanding ones are not very good. After three or four or five or six films, what kind of opportunities will be gained by producing some stories with supporting characters outside. Let's talk about the third point. The world structure is not messy, but it is very confusing. There is only a small world view. It is better to supplement it with the side plots and branch plots of other supporting characters. For example, where is the main city or big city, and then there are several big countries. I am talking about the world in the game, and then it is divided into several domains. Just add it slowly. As long as these three points are done well, the lowest score will be 8.8 Without going too high. My personal evaluation is about 8.6.

Even if there is a returning guest in the rivers and seas today, in the future there will be people thousands of miles away in the sky.

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