Beast Control Pet Shop: I Can Kill Monsters and Get Pet Eggs

The author's writing skills are still good, but the slow-burn style has high requirements on the plot. It is recommended that the author write an outline before starting to write (it will probably still look good if it is fattened up, but it is still short now, so I will give it 4 stars)

The new book has just been published, so far it's okay, it's okay if it's a little bit fun, the plot is old-fashioned, if it's well-written it's fine, please encourage me.

It's great so far, I hope it continues to be great! By the way, there is one more thing to say - as long as the author works hard, there will be no problem updating ten chapters a day [laughter]

So far it looks pretty good, worth a look

Five-star praise is given to you, try your best.

The author's writing style is very good, the ideas and plot control are clear and orderly, and the sequence is very good. Although the subject matter is a bit old-fashioned, the rhythm and orderly development are interesting. It can be cultivated. The description is in place, the plot is clear, and the nodes are clear.

It's still very good. I give five stars for encouragement. I hope to keep up the good work. You can dig some holes on the main line (*❛ั∀❛ั*)✧*.

I have finished reading this book, but the author's last chapter touched me very much. The misfortune you have experienced since childhood, and now you are freed from it. From the bullying at school to the debt owed to your father. When will the caged bird fly? How does a caged bird fly? I feel it makes sense. You are like a bird trapped in a cage that cannot fly. I didn't understand it when I heard this sentence before, but now I understand. Maybe this is your salvation. I salute you, but life is precious. In the next generation, be a happy little crow. Maybe this is the liberation of life. I thought it would get better and better in the future, but I didn't expect that the end of the article would be like a caged bird, when will it fly?

Okay, okay, it's a cool article, but it's better if there's no female protagonist.

Update soon, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The author will update soon. It seems pretty good so far. I don't know if it's cliche or not. I just know it's good-looking.

Nice. . It just feels a bit lacking [laughing] [crying with laughter]

I hope it will be longer

The writing is good, the pace is slow in the early stage, but picks up in the later stage. Although the descriptions of several female characters interspersed in the middle are a bit strange, it is okay and not particularly abrupt. In addition, this book is quite suitable for people like me. Is it a short or medium story? I think it is only about 1,300 pages, and the pace is not particularly fast. It is a direct speed run, and there is still a promotion process. In addition, the protagonist described by the author is not the kind of King of Wanfei or Long Aotian. However, when I read the commentary at the time, I found that the author had a purple sand tendency, which really shocked me [smile]. Nowadays, as long as people are good, I am also severely depressed. Now I am preparing for the college entrance examination, which is also very painful. I have been tortured by the university. Now I just think about living one day at a time. Although I also have this tendency, I will not really do it. After all, it seems that my life is very hasty. [Thinking] So, in other words, live as long as you can, survive others, and you will be the number one tomato author (bushi) [laughing]

I think it is better written and I hope the author can keep writing.

I just started reading it. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. When will Gold Coin Wings be available?

It looks good, but I feel that the plot is too fast and will it expand the world view?

Very well written, keep going

Personally I think it's very beautiful

That said, cheers for the author. I'm in high school now and can't catch up on updates in time, but I will always support it and hope the author doesn't give up. [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript]

I feel this book is highly recommended.

Not bad. Very pretty.

Damn, that's a pretty good novel about The Eunuch.

A very good book.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author.

The writing is sparkling, with constant highlights. Although it does not go off topic, it is a pity that it has ended. The author is extremely talented and deserves appreciation! 👍👍👍

It describes objectively and has hot topics. You can read this book and update it frequently.

Feels worse than blood-sucking mosquitoes

It feels pretty good. You can still watch it.

The content of the story is ups and downs, which can easily arouse readers' interest in reading. I recommend everyone to read it, except that the update is a bit slow. Author, I have to say that when you updated to chapter 108, I was still slow to urge you to update. I even posted a book shortage, but you ended it for me. If I hadn't read the previous comments, I wouldn't have known that you had finished it.