Evil *********

I feel like the writing is okay. There are really few people who write about demons. I remember that demons were quite popular at that time, and Uncle Siba was quite famous. His popularity dropped later, probably mainly because he was suspected of insulting China. As a new author, I think the writing is pretty good. The wording and sentences are much better than many novels written by novices. I have read a lot of novels written by newbies before, and the writing is simply terrible. The sentences are unclear and the punctuation is misused. I especially like long and difficult sentences. I wish I could write a long paragraph with just one sentence. It gives me a headache just reading it. At least this novel does not have these problems. There is also this popularity, there is nothing you can do about it, the popularity of Moyou just doesn't work. Writing about Moyou fanfics is naturally less popular than other fans, but writing well will definitely pay off. After all, readers are not blind. Whoever writes seriously and whoever fools casually and treats readers as fools, everyone has a clear mind. Anyway, I hope the author writes better and better. At the very least, it feels comfortable to read. This is enough for me. There are many novels that use gorgeous words, show off their literary talents, and express sorrow for the sake of adding new words. This may not be as comfortable as this one.

It's a very interesting book. It's a Tomato book with multiple female protagonists. I actually like Mitsuki better.

It's really good to watch. Honestly speaking, this is the best demonic fanfic I've ever seen. The writing is very smooth and gives people a very comfortable feeling. The plot insertions are also very suitable for the original plot. The author is very good. Well, although there are multiple female protagonists, maybe that's why I like this series. I still hope that the jungler can be with his sister. After all, they only have each other. Let's keep up the good work. Five-star praise

The author has a very thorough understanding of the demon's power system and is very patient in polishing the story. This is relatively rare nowadays. I hope the author can keep his original intention and not worry about temporary gains and losses. At present, I feel that among the fanfics I have read, this one is the most suitable for my taste.

As long as the author doesn't like the original protagonist more than the protagonist he wrote, the novel is still okay. (Mainly because I have read some fan fictions, which blow the original protagonists of anime or novels to the sky and then turn the protagonists I wrote into dog-licking supporting characters. I have never read the original works of many fan fictions, so I can't understand the kind of dog-licking self-pleasure fan fiction at all.)

It's a pity that in the end it was forced to be taken off the shelves by unknown forces. It's a rare fanfic with a good concept on Tomato. The author's writing is good and the plot is well grasped. It's a pity that it was liquidated like this.

It is indeed the most beautiful Mo You fan I have ever seen. When I first watched the anime, I felt that Sayaka Mibu's change from liking the jungle to liking the swordsmanship department was too sudden and I couldn't adapt to it at all. But the girl is really pretty. Especially Miyuki, she really poked me. Hope to collect it in the future.

As a reader who has never read the original work, I can easily understand the plot. The writing is also good. The emotional scenes are clearly related to the main plot. It is a good novel. The only flaw is that there are too few descriptions of the fighting scenes, but it is enough to pass the time.

Very satisfied. This is the first time I saw it in Tomato. It's a book about demons. I didn't expect it to be so well written. But can the author also read Maya? [Shy][Shy][Shy] @Eating fried chicken in a hotpot restaurant

This is the first time I read a novel by Mo You, so I'll give it a five-star review. By the way, I hope the author can add some pictures of the characters that appear in the anime, otherwise it will be hard to imagine [rolls eyes]

It is a very good book among Tomatoes. The use of interjections and supplements is natural, the writing is good, and the characters are described in detail. You can read it, but few people have read it. I am afraid that the author will enter the palace. Don't be a eunuch. I am optimistic about you [Blow Kiss] [KISS] [Please update]

A very realistic ending, a very helpless ending, and a very common ending. It has brought us happiness and satisfaction for a period of time, but there are always people who want to destroy it. At least it existed. Good things always make people jealous and regretful.

So far, it's pretty smooth. Moyou is essentially Ao Tianwen, but the Chinese protagonist becomes a Japanese character while beating the world. The protagonists of the original work and other fan fiction are all set to be Japanese. It is fine within Japan, but once the world view expands and involves conflicts between various countries, the protagonist's position will be very awkward. This film designed the protagonist to be an undercover agent, which laid a good foundation for future plot development.

It's very good-looking. Big boost to the author. Don't lose it. There are too few fanfics about demons.

The harem is an invincible novel, it drives fast, the writing is logical and smooth, the parts that should be serious and funny should be well grasped, the characters are established well, the protagonist has all the highlights, and the supporting characters are also well-shaped. It is a good evil fanfic. Alas, what a pity.

Very good demonic fanfic

Good-looking, really good-looking. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people! Look at it slowly, taste it slowly, otherwise you may get confused by it.

The author's writing is very good. At least I, who have read the original work, don't feel any sense of fragmentation. It combines the content of the original work and the original work very well. As long as it is not cut in half, I will keep following it (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Can Miyuki take it away? I beg you. Can you take Miyuki away, please?

It's well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

Good guy, I was suddenly chopped off, [covering face] I was still thinking about how you were going to collect Miyuki, but it ended like this

An inferior student at a magic high school. I didn't expect anyone would be willing to write this work, which is ranked among the second-grade masterpieces, but the author's writing was unexpectedly good.

It's okay. I feel like the author is a local person who is developing a side business. If this is the case, you can rest assured to pursue the book.

There are still very few fanfics about bad students in magic high school. What you wrote is very good. The quality is good. The setting of the protagonist and the details are very well controlled. Excellent. Come on.

Interesting and interesting, the word count is too few. I order you to add more forcefully

Not bad, very good, come on, rush, rush, update the harem show, that's enough.

It's great. The plot is very reasonable. It's not like the original author just wrote everything. It's uncomfortable to watch. There are very few demonic fan stories. Come on.

Very well written, keep up the good work Why does the book appear to be under review when reading reviews? Don't send it [I'm about to cry]

The author tells me, who is the heroine? Is there deep snow?

It's a good Moyou fanfic. By the way, I'd like to ask if there are any other Moyou doujins you can recommend on any platform.