Hp's Destiny Deviation

A very good first fanfic, a good reading experience. [Laughs] Many years ago, I read fanfics about SSPE, a pair of unpopular CPs, and there was more than one. Whether it was Petunia, a wizard with magic, or Petunia, a Muggle without magic, they all did the same thing - "let Severus have a less dark and twisted childhood." This shows how deep into the hearts of Ham fans the poor image of Sijiao at a young age was. [Cover face] Of course, Penny in this article also extended a helping hand to the young Sif. And Eileen's timely stop loss finally saved Sri Lanka's precarious childhood. The heroine of this article is really one of the few protagonists who chose to drop out of school in the fanfics I have read. In another book, the male protagonist dropped out of school in order to establish and consolidate his own power and for a better future development. By the way, he eventually became the third generation Dark Lord. [Laughing and crying] But this is not the case for the heroine of this article. She chose to leave because she longed for freedom. After completing all her seven-year studies ahead of schedule, she was unwilling to stay in the same place. Even if that place is Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, which countless people yearn for. In comparison, she prefers to feel the vast world and all natural things. It can be said responsibly that if Lao Fu didn't want to cause trouble for the heroine (of course, we also know the reason why he keeps staring at the heroine later in the article), she would not pay attention to him at all. I just said "goodbye mom, I'm going to sail away tonight". Another thing I like about the heroine of this article is that although she likes Sri Lanka, she also loves herself. She has her own hobbies and her own career. She can very well settle her parents who may be in danger, and she can also appear in time to save her little sister every time. She is a free individual who not only possesses powerful magic and the determination to protect her relatives and friends, but also has the abilities and means to match. There are many female protagonists in SS fanfiction, especially those who traveled to the child era after being familiar with the plot of the original novel. I really can't accept Sri Lanka's almost kneeling and licking approach to courtship. Girls, never forget, love yourself first! No one deserves to be humbled by you, even if the other person is God! Thank you all. [Laughing] Of course, this article still has some inevitable regrets. For example, the ending is too hasty. The author seemed to throw out the outline directly in the last few pages of the article, which caught me off guard, and it seemed like it started before the end. Fortunately, there are a few extra stories to comfort me. Let me tell myself that the author just changed the writing to a biographical style at the end. [Cover face]

The whole story is very good and interesting to watch. The setting at the beginning is very good, but in the middle there are several conflicts in the setting. For example, Snape knew that Voldemort was chasing Petunia but still admired him, as if Petunia was being hunted never happened. It was also clear that there was anti-disapparation in Hogwarts and Petunia could teleport, but when she fought with the Death Eaters in the forest at the back, she couldn't escape and was beaten hard. After a bit of digging, and later Peter betrayed and saw Snape at Petunia's house, the heroine only tied up Peter but didn't clear his memory so that he would be saved and hurt Snape. I don't really understand these plots, but maybe it is to advance the plot. It is still very awkward and there are a lot of typos, but there are no other problems. Overall, it is a very good article. Petunia is very strong and has a positive outlook.

Penny is really great! The author writes about the positive aspects of most people in the book.

This book is really good. It's the first time I read a novel where the main character is Lily's sister. My face turned red when I saw the professor's love story. I was really going crazy. Why didn't I come across this novel when it was finished? [Face covering][Face covering][Face covering]

Love to watch! ! ! A very perfect blend! Very! What a genius idea! It won't introduce too much about the past and anxiety about the future, and there is no arrogant and brainless Long Aotian plot. It is a very, very immersive cookie! We won't make rigid changes just to cater! ! ! I like it so much! Speed ​​updates! Love to see ah ah [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

So far, I have watched it all, and I can honestly say that he is really good-looking!

It's really super, super, super good-looking. The heroine is very strong and doesn't follow the conventional plot. She is a little hawk who pursues freedom. She has nothing to do with Penny in the original plot. In fact, it should be called "After Rebirth as Penny". It's really good-looking [Blow Kiss]

I just read over thirty chapters, one-fifth of the novel. It's very interesting, humorous and fast-paced. I don't understand why the rating is low? Is it because it doesn't suit the taste of male readers? Anyway, I highly recommend it. I'll review it later after reading it.

Very nice. The heroine is super powerful. Voldemort was solved in the parent generation and did not extend to the child era. Poor Harry did not have to become the savior of his parents at a young age. Snape and the heroine were childhood sweethearts. Because of the heroine's influence, Irene finally left that man and learned to love herself and her son. Snape also became a person who looked a little serious and difficult to get close to, but was no longer gloomy and lifeless. The only confusion is the title of the book. It's called Penny Reborn. I thought it was really Penny reborn, but it turns out it's not. It's time travel. So the name is more accurate, it should be "After Traveling to Become Penny" instead of "After Penny is Reborn"

I like the portrayal of the heroine very much. Xiaoying is strong, loves knowledge and loves money. I am looking forward to the unfolding of the subsequent plot. Regarding the foreshadowing of LV, is the checkmate due to a prophecy or some other reason? I feel that the protagonist will definitely face off against LV later. How to defeat it? As for him [Thinking] Another thing he likes about this book is the portrayal of the Marauders. The CP I read before was from Snape, and he was more or less a villain of the Marauders. This book does not have that feeling. Each character has its own strengths and weaknesses, and there is no exaggeration of the weaknesses or strengths. Anyway, this book is very good, I love reading it [Blowing Kisses]

Merlin! This book is great too! ! ! ! In the book, Petunia finally stops watching Lily go to Hogwarts. I really like it so much! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss] And Penny is really strong [adoration][adoration]! ! ! I like Petunia's life in the academy the most. Although Petunia is not in the same academy as Snape, I didn't quite understand it at first, but then I thought that Petunia chose Ravenclaw because the eagle represents freedom, and what the heroine lacked in her previous life was freedom [laughing]. I feel sorry for the heroine in the previous life [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying]

There are a lot of details and original details, and the timeline is also quite messy. It is necessary to create a new folder in the original memory to deal with these problems separately. Not friendly to pets, there are clips of Hagrid beating his teeth and the heroine still having no reaction after being cast apart by an owl. He had no respect for life at all, and it was impossible to imagine that Hagrid would become a teacher in the Care of Magical Creatures class.

The language is vivid and engaging, bringing people into the story. The characters in the article are vivid and the writing is solid, which makes people feel very comfortable. It is a very beautiful book. I hope the author can actively update it. I am very much looking forward to it [laughing].

Tweet! This book is really super good-looking, the flow is long, and the characters are very consistent with their personalities. The teacher's heart is slowly beating, and it's not OOC at all. It's just being serialized. Wow.

Not bad, the plot is novel and compact, full of imagination, the author's writing is fluent and logical, but there are a lot of typos. [OK] The emotional line is also a long-term one. From being friends at the beginning, the male protagonist is gradually impressed by the female protagonist's charm, strength, talent, and diligence. Both parties are secretly attracted to each other, and finally come together. Both of them are very rational, can think for themselves, have a good mouth, and are measured. They influence each other and grow together. [Learned] I personally prefer this. [Sending Hearts] It's not like falling in love at first sight at the beginning, and then immediately being ambiguous without any sense of proportion, that stupid feeling of being in love without caring about the life or death of others. [Like] Some of the heroine's actions will be foreshadowed and explained in the text! So those idiots who are shouting in the comment area that the heroine's combat power has declined every day, use your splendens-filled brains and think about the differences in the enemy's combat power that the heroine faces, or read the analysis. If you really want to see the brainless and cool article about the little brat slaying the world's invincible opponents, go to other channels. Your stupidity really irritates my eyes. [Laughing awkwardly][covering face][smiling] In short, this article is still very good, but it is not recommended for people who are used to not thinking about it [smile]

The writing is smooth, the plot is complete and characteristic, and the characters are described in multiple dimensions. A complete character, but there is still a little bit more and less. I will update the relationship four times a day. Please [send my heart][send my heart]

It's a very nice novel, with good writing, compact plot and smooth transition of emotional lines. The golden finger given to the heroine is quite strong and refreshing, but it doesn't make people feel awkward when reading it. I really like the heroine's ability to be friendly with animals and to communicate with magical creatures. Among them, the little owl Rhea and the manticore Manticore are very interesting and super interesting to get along with the heroine ( ´▽` ). It would be nice if the chapters about magical creatures could be longer and describe more types of magical creatures ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з, I hope the author can open another novel about the protagonist and various magical creatures [Blowing Kiss], the emotional line does not need to be there, but the various cute animals must have [Shy]

It's a very complete story line, but I hope the author can make more of their side stories. It's really fun to see no one leave and everyone to be happy. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ also wishes them happiness and happiness every day in another world😄

Super pretty! She is a relatively invincible heroine, the free Ravenclaw god of scrolls and the god of learning. The love line is very sweet, but the relationship is a little bit behind. There are also many deputy CPs: GGAD, Dog Wolf (only mentioned at the end) It made up for all the regrets, Harry was so chubby [laughing evilly]

It's a book I like very much. Severus also ushered in his happiness in this world. The author is very tolerant and gives a good ending to most people, except for Peter, Voldemort and some unknown wizards who died in the battle, but overall everyone lived a good life. Very nice. The author's writing is very good, and the ending is a little rushed, but it's reasonable and worth a read! Especially if you like Severus, I highly recommend it.

Nice! The writing is delicate and the story is compact, great! ! Just not enough! ! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! ! !

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Ahhhh, Penny is so awesome [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]! Super powerful heroine, super strong, talented and hard-working, the king of rolls! And if you don't accept it, just do it, it's really fun to watch. Professor Snape in this article lives a very happy life and is a perfect match for Petunia! There are so many sweets, so I love them [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] (and Sifu was so cute [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] when he was a child) The whole story is quite interesting, with a lot of funny dialogues and plots, and the ending is also good. I love little Harry so much [send heart][send heart][send heart], and Rayla and Rhea are also super cute! Take a few sacks and take them all away [adoration][adoration][adoration] All in all, a great book, five stars! ! !

It is true and objective, with clear structure and substantial content.

I have to say that this type of hp fandom really catches my heart. There is no unnecessary intrigue, no messy settings that I don't know where they come from, and there is not a lot of redundancy of things that we have already known countless times. It is simply told from the perspective of the heroine.

1. The author's writing style is very detailed, a little funny, and overall relaxed and enjoyable. 2. The rebirth of a genius magician fulfills Petunia's dream of going to the magical world with her sister, not to mention that Petunia is extremely powerful. 3. Saved many people who were in trouble. Sev was really saved. It was really good for Irene to take him away from Tobia. Rael is also alive. Harry, whose parents are both here, grew up happily. 4. Yunyue has never forgiven Yunlie for also poking at me. 5. It's really interesting and a good idea, but the ending is faster than I expected and even felt a bit rushed. I hope the author will produce more articles of this quality.

Wuhu! ! ! This short article is not bad~ Although it feels a little inconsistent with the title. After all, at first glance, I thought that Penny was really reborn, but in fact it belongs to the type of clothes... Then there is the lively campus life, the heroine is vivid and enthusiastic, she yearns for strength and freedom, a little bit of the protagonist's halo: super magic talents, including potions, magic, alchemy, are very powerful, and then there is her happy growth path... She is growing up in a wanton and public way, but in the process of growing up, she shines on others. The gloomy Xiao Si longs for and pursues her passionate move forward, a different mother, the Gryffindor silly lion who is mentally retarded and unable to get rid of him in daily fights, his unlucky friend Lily who is targeted by the silly lion, and Sunshine who voluntarily throws herself into his arms... His life is happy and beautiful... There is no clear career line, it is simply the growth and life of the young wizards, and some small twists and turns that were troublesome after being targeted by the old bald man but were quickly resolved~ In the end, Voldemort was killed and it ended quickly. The plot is complete and complete. After all, it has all the endings it should have. It is also a bit incomplete to say it is not complete. The ending ended too quickly! After a few swipes, I explained clearly what happened after Voldemort's death and then entered the extra chapter... That's it, it's okay, I can recommend it~

Overall, the text is well written. If the extra chapter were written a little more, it would be complete. (For example, the sweet daily life of Grindelwald and Dumbledore after drinking the magic rejuvenation potion)

Smooth and interesting, some CP fans are ecstatic. Of course, I don't follow any CP. The character of Penny is bold and distinct. Maybe it gets a bit boring in the middle part. Take a break and save some. It will be interesting to watch again.

Seeing that most of the writing is pretty good, the author's writing is not bad, but many of the private settings conflict with the original settings of HP, or are bugs. It is really uncomfortable for the review party [face covering] Also, don't be misled by the title. The heroine is not the reborn Penny, but another soul reborn into Penny [laughing]