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So sweet! Love it, love it

It's really good-looking, it's brain-burning, and the writing is okay. It shouldn't be read by so few people. I'll recommend it to the bookstore for you later and give it a try. As a reward, I'll update it four times a day.

Come on, the author's sweet novel is as suspenseful as it was written, and it made me dizzy [currently working on the manuscript]

At present, more than 50 chapters are in good condition. The rebirth sweet story is directly changed to suspense and science fiction. Even if it is outrageous, it can also have shocking and explosive plots and turning points and some explosive language from time to time. On the contrary, it is very difficult to get tired of watching. It is amazing if it does not collapse [smile] The author only likes to like five-star reviews [smile]

So far, it looks very good. Between the lines, there are the hazy emotions of my youth in high school, the beauty and sadness of secret love, and the confusion when I was confessed. I can see the shadow of the original [face covering] [face covering] in it. I read it in one night, but the volume is still a bit small. I can't read enough. So far, it's okay. The writing is good, and the jokes are quite natural. On Tomato, I can easily find books that resonate with me, so my rating is on the high side. Although I don't know why the rating is a bit low, the author keeps this idea. If there are no big problems in the later stage, it can basically be said to be an 8.5. This is my one-sided review, for future readers' reference only. I won't comment too much on the plot of the novel, but keep my expectations high. I'm also going to start reading books and will read them after I graduate from college [laughs][laughs]

Wow, I have been reading some other rebirth books recently, and I feel that this one is very well designed for the senior year of high school. It is very similar to the atmosphere of the college entrance examination. I feel that the character of Gu Yan is well designed from the low self-esteem at the beginning to the hard work. , To be honest, I still dislike Gu Yan a lot. I feel that Zhao Jianjia is also pretty good. I hope the emotional scenes don't go overboard [smirking] [face covering]. Zhao's artistic style is really impressive. This recording is really a genius. Maybe Zhao also has feelings for Chen Yuan? It was obvious that He Ting was a little disgusted by Gu Yan's words. I feel like the description of Xie has reopened a new line. I can't see anything now. Let's look at it later. I feel that the plot is interesting. There are not many writing methods that like this kind of step-by-step and then suddenly come to an exciting plot. Gu Yan's confession of the reborn person is really impressive. I hope to write more about daily life in the third year of high school without fast forwarding. When I got to college, I didn't have this feeling anymore. Bai Yueguang's creation is very good. , If there are two female protagonists, Gu and Zhao would be very vocal. It's really interesting. It's hard to guess the author's thinking [shy] Come on, don't write appendix like Shui Longyin [cover your face], I feel that your achievements will be very good, keep updating every day, the next Jiangnan will be you [Thinking]

The CPU is dry burning for me, but it's really good-looking and slow to heat up, which is very consistent with the psychology of ordinary boys in reality.

It's so beautiful that I can't stop watching it. I just can't understand it. It's too brain-burning. I don't understand many things, but I like Gu Yan better. I know the heroine is Gu Yan from the introduction, but I just don't know how the other heroines are going to solve it [face covering] [OK]

Young and old alike can watch it, and it fully satisfies their fantasies. It's very real, the writing is good, and the interweaving is natural. The plot has ups and downs without being boring or cerebral palsy. Unlike other romance novels, the plot of this one is not like a daily novel, but it is an everyday novel at the same time. It's exciting, but not too exciting. So, this is the author's real experience? The transformation of depravity. And the pursuit of girls. That... I'm pretty much the same. Beginning with confidence in my voice, I improved my grades by 300 points in the third year of junior high and entered a key high school. Then I started working hard because of a girl in high school. Then make progress. The perception of liking, the perception of being together. They are all transformed. In short, no matter how depraved you are, let yourself shine first. Be confident and get better. Not to mention your grades, at least you must learn to smile with your teeth showing and your head raised. If you practice your voice, at least others will have a good impression of it, and it will naturally get better the day after tomorrow. Be confident, brothers. You must be confident. No matter what your grades are, no matter how average you look. Except for rebirth, everything in this book is adapted from reality (it should be). As long as you are confident, you can transform.

It's very good-looking, but it's a bit mind-numbing. The characters all hit me perfectly, and Gu Yan is portrayed very well.

Beautiful, love watching. Sister Yan and Jianjia are both very good. To be honest, after reading novels for so long, this one has the deepest meaning. Maybe I have a diaosiyy. I am a high school student, and I feel the most deeply. I have more than ten days to take the college entrance examination. The descriptions in the book are very beautiful. I will experience it in the future. I am very similar to the protagonist. Except that he is not as handsome as he is talented. The sensitive and cowardly character is very similar. , So I yearn for Sister Yan even more. Jianjia is so dreamy, she is really like the white moon in the vast night sky. Sister Yan is the flame, which ignites the wall, changes the wall, and has the greatest impact on the wall. It is hard for me to imagine that there is such a girl in reality. She is as passionate as fire and loves deeply. The novel gave me the opportunity to imagine, and I was very touched by it. In the end, I like Yanbao the most! !

The early suspense and youthful love are really appealing, and the characterization is very good. Gu Yan's detachment and Jian Jia's coldness, but since Dao Yun clearly entered the scene, Bai Yueguang's main line has been strengthened and the character portrayal has become homogeneous. Especially from the end of the Erxianqiao plot, the deliberate literature and art gradually showed its shortcomings. I don't know whether the author wants to express the ignorance of the male protagonist's first love, or whether he wants to speed up the progress. The actual relationship between the characters is a mess, and the so-called growth is more like adding fuel to the fire. I have to say that the beginning really reminded me a lot, and it also brought out the emotions in several scenes, but the connection was rather blunt, making people feel that he/she had to do this, but it lost the flavor of the story.

It's quite interesting. It has the feel of a Japanese light novel, but it also has the author's own ideas, rather than following a formula. It can always surprise readers at some point and give them unexpected surprises. [Like] Like it, I hope the author will greatly maintain the quality and increase production. Compare one's heart [love]

I really fell in love with this book. It is not only suspenseful but also sweet. The author is really smart and the characters are very vivid. In short, I was involved in it. Ahem, but the author also knows that monogamy is popular in society now (I simply like single female protagonists [grieved]) I hope to be with Gu Yan, I really blame Chen Gu [crying] [crying]

The description and plot design of the novel are first-rate among Tomato novels. The novel is not very long, and it is difficult to comment on the overall story structure and logic. However, the description of emotions and atmosphere with beautiful writing style, combined with the fun-loving mentality and random Internet memes that appeared from time to time, formed a sense of separation that made me uncomfortable. It seemed that the prose seamlessly connected to the sketch cross talk, which made me feel a little embarrassed. But this is also a major feature of this novel. There is no definite taste in food, only those that taste good are treasures. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes and get satisfactory results.

Some concepts of the story are well stitched together. I personally like watching this kind of drama of the future saving the past. Although sometimes the deviations are not good, the overall outline is still good. Furthermore, the foreshadowing at certain climax points is really poor. There is very little foreshadowing, and the emotions are not fully erupted. As a result, every time I see some explosive points in the story, I feel almost uninterested. I have to work hard on my own to get the complete scene. Furthermore, there are some things that the author forgets after writing, and some things that have already been explained are forgotten after dozens of chapters. Overall, it is a qualified novel. It is much better than most of the incomplete ones on Tomato. The story is not delayed, and the plot is not delayed due to other factors. Three and a half stars, rounded up to 4 stars.

The charm of youth is always a bit wanton, and the dream of this book is still blooming. I hope that this situation will finally be good. What this book depicts is the ideal that young people can only hope to achieve. Highly recommend this book

The writing is good, and the plot reversal is a bonus, especially the multiple reversals of the true story of rebirth. The character portrayal is also good, and the author is very good at playing tricks. I hope that the ratings of the three female protagonists will increase in the future (I think). In short, it is very well written.

With emotion, this book focuses on a story of love and hate intertwined, suspenseful love. Using Chen Yuan's journey and changes in his mood as clues, it describes how several girls met, got to know each other, fell in love, and then failed to fall in love. Chen Yuan's indecisiveness caused him to have a bad relationship with the girls, but in the end they all ended in regret. However, judging from the results, they all got or had the youth they wanted. Whether it is Chen Yuan, Zhang Yu, Guo Cheng, Wei Ou, or Zhou Zhihao, they all have had their own love experiences. This book profoundly explains what love is and what true love is. There is a saying that goes well: We miss each other because we long to meet again

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! The plot is too twisted! During class, I was guessing about the experiences and words of Gu, Zhao, Xie and others (the more I thought about it, the more my brain burned...); And Xiaoyue, according to what she said, her grandfather must be ZY; plus the ending of Aunt Yan, I guess there may be parallel time and space, it is really exciting to think about it! But also, according to what He said later, they really fell in love with each other. In the end, she had sex with the male protagonist, not like Gu said that He cheated on the male protagonist, so now I am more curious about He's ending! ! ! (I haven't read it yet) I also wish the author good luck here. I believe the author will get better and better in the future!

It's really good to read, and I often bring myself into it. Sometimes I feel depressed while reading it. It's also a very good novel to relieve depression [shy]. My favorite after reading it is still Zhao. On the other hand, I don't feel anything about cigarettes. Maybe it's because I happened to feel the same way when I was in high school [I'm about to cry]

It's a good book, I won't say much, but it still feels a bit short. There are a lot of details that can be filled in. Also, it's a bit silly for girls to change their aspirations for the protagonist. I also felt a little uncomfortable when I saw Mirai Yuan's upper body later (maybe I'm the only one who felt that way [aggrieved]). It seemed that it deliberately created conflicts between the author and Gu Yan and others ([angry]. The protagonist worked so hard and managed to survive, but he lost his memory and had conflicts. Fortunately, he finally got back together. But doesn't the protagonist deserve a sweet love? Even though the senior year of high school is so important, he still doesn't hesitate to fall in love. As a result, there are very few descriptions of college love, and the ending is a bit rushed. But overall, [Marked] is still a very good novel. I will probably read it again. 5 Points represents my opinion. Come on, author. I look forward to your new novel [laughs]

The author's writing is very detailed, and it can be understood clearly while still leaving doubts. I think it is very interesting, but why do I feel that it will kill me? I haven't finished reading it yet. The author must not stab me. I can accept multiple female protagonists. I can also accept a single female protagonist. If everyone else is fine, I can accept it. Please don't stab me [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

The subject matter is quite new, and the descriptions are good. Secondly, the writing is very sweet. Reading it always makes me feel heartbroken as a single person. The more painful it is, the more I want to read on. Hahaha I hope it doesn't end badly [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, it opened my eyes... A large-scale sci-fi youth suspense romance... In short, it is very complicated. Some book friends jokingly call it a stock trading article. Cigarette stocks continue to rise. The author has written the psychology of Chen Yuan, a high school student very well. Erxianqiao is currently performing stably and will send away several characters in the future [sneaky laugh]

I have read all the novels, there are over 180 novels in various genres. But the plot and writing style of this novel really stood out to me. It is very unique. The various interleavings of the timeline, the description and processing of emotions, the vivid description of the characters, especially the clever use of the timeline, make it easier to accept multiple female protagonists. It is really easy to get confused at first glance, and it will be uncomfortable for those who don't read it carefully, but overall it is really great!

After reading it (so far), I just feel it's a bit strange, but it's quite attractive to me. The writing is good. If the plot is perfected with a beautiful ending, I think it should be around 8.7-9.3. I feel that it should be almost finished (self-feeling).

The plot is outstanding! The plot is outstanding! This is the most interesting book I have ever read. The setting is very interesting, and the author's writing style is also good. Rebirth-type books, or those with a timeline, usually have a lot of pitfalls. When I read the first hundred chapters of this book, I thought that there were so many pitfalls. Would this book be unfinished? , But in the end, this book is really good, and all the holes have been filled in. I personally prefer single female protagonists, but to be honest, I actually felt sorry for the others when I saw the end. However, the author did give them a good ending. When I saw the end, I felt a sense of enlightenment. The setting of the timeline was also very successful. Sometimes when I read it, I even went back to see the ideas to clarify my ideas. Finally, I wish the author a new height in writing skills. The novels I wrote earned me a lot of money [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

From the very beginning, I actually thought of a timeline and a female protagonist, but I still really want to read it. I don't know if I should comment on the sentence "The writing is really good." After all, I am just a stinky college student who has only read two books, but I really feel that this novel can touch me very much [crying] Came here from Douyin Round Table Animation, love it, love it [laughing evilly]

I personally think it's really beautiful! ! ! ! It's just that Dao Yun's scenes are too few. I like Gu Yan. It would be even better if the author could create a sweet side story between the male protagonist and Dao Yun in the future! ! And He Ting, I actually hope so too! Finally, author, I personally think your writing is really great! ! ! !