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After all, this is the author's first time writing a book, so it's acceptable, but I would like to make a small comment here. I just felt a little uncomfortable while reading the book. It felt like the author wanted to shape the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and then the others were very similar to the control group. Whether it was the program team or the other three groups of couples, they all felt that they wanted to be the protagonist. It looks like it will turn into a black and red route, but I think this kind of thing will definitely not happen in reality, unless it is forced. The overall look of this book is that the author's writing style is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and it deserves praise. However, in this book, the handling of emotions and the writing of the plot, I think it can still be strengthened. These are just my personal opinions and small suggestions for the author [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] No malice [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] If the author can improve some of these issues in the later period, I think this will be a good book

This must be the author's first time writing an online novel. The male and female protagonists are established well. The core of their personality really touches my point. The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. The interpretation of love is very unique. It is not the kind of funny and overbearing romance novels that are common in Tomato. There are many lyrical paragraphs, and in some places It's a bit cumbersome, which affects the overall fluency of the article. It doesn't feel like the style of an online article, and looks a bit like a novice's article (but it's not that the writing is poor, it may be a cohesion problem, which feels like a common problem for many novices) (the references in some places are not very clear, he She can sometimes make people's eyes blur, and I have also seen a situation where she is suspected of swallowing the subject), but overall it does not affect the viewing experience. After all, the author's in-depth exploration of the characters is really eye-catching. If you don't have high requirements for the smoothness of the writing, then my evaluation is very, very, very, very worth reading. Continuing from the last comment, after about chapter 60, the author's metaphors have obviously decreased, the whole text has become much smoother, and the plot line should be coming out soon (looking forward to it).ᐟ.ᐟ

The writing seems to be in a literary style, but it's a bit pretentious, but the characters and plot are good.

How can I put it, I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, but I may only be suitable for reading cool articles. I always feel very boring when reading this article, plus the shaping of other CPs. When I first read it, I really felt that other CPs were very annoying. This kind of writing may not be suitable for me. In short, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard [Sending Hearts]

The author actually uses a lot of metaphors, but the writing style is also beautiful, so I continued reading. There is a light feeling between the birds and the fishes. The most exciting scene I saw was when the egret returned home in the first part, and in the later part they felt like they were an old couple, hahaha. But it really feels like a huge blessing to those who used to be singers but can no longer sing. Everyone enters the circle for their dreams, but there are too many people who can't help themselves. Xiaoyu has become their carrier and continues to sing. However, in the end, I hope that the author can be direct and profound when writing about his feelings. Simple words and sentences can actually express profound emotions. I sometimes feel that the detailed description of the protagonist is quite cumbersome. For example, I found it difficult to watch the interview. Not only was the host's progress slow, but there were many detailed descriptions. The host's questions were actually very tit-for-tat, and the questions still seemed cumbersome, a bit like a The topic asked three people for their opinions, and then the guests chatted with each other. It can be seen that they wanted to narrate and change the psychological process of the guests, but there was no clear feeling in terms of perception. Sometimes they always had to stop and carefully taste what they meant. At the same time, the barrage did not complain about the point, which made me feel more fragmented. When I read the whole article, I actually felt like the breeze was blowing and the wind chimes were ringing, but it also gave me a feeling that it was difficult to read the words and sentences, and it was very laborious to read.

It's very interesting. Thank you for coming across such a thoughtful book. At first I thought it was a bland idea from the beginning. Maybe you will have a fight in the love show, or you may go crazy and ambiguous in the love show, and the audience will howl. The purpose of clicking in is to relax. But I didn't expect to encounter a high-scoring variety show that could be rated 9.0 In reality. Director Zhou really has a lot of humanistic feelings hahahaha. Later, the essence of love was gradually discerned in the author's words of constant self-questioning. When the author asked: before all the things and symbols describing "love" appeared, in the beginning, why did people want to "be together". Maybe it's just about supporting each other to survive. When the cost of survival decreases and people begin to pursue spiritual life, being with one person is also to fill their own spiritual vacancies. I really like the author's description of love: the love between two people is complicated, not just desire or sensory stimulation. The love of family, the love of friendship, and the love of romance are all descriptions of love. This is what I gained from reading this novel. I have a new understanding of love. Of course, the author wrote a lot of lyrical sentences at the beginning that were eager to describe the relationship between the two people, which was a bit difficult to interpret, and gave me a little sluggish feeling in my reading. However, because I tend to read the text in a hurry, the shortcomings are not concealed. The more I write, the more I feel that the author understands the characters in the novel more and more. The characters gradually develop their own flesh and blood, and naturally it becomes smoother and smoother.

4⭐, Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing is beautiful and romantic, with the delicate and warm feeling of Korean dramas. In the novel, the male protagonist is compared to a possessive but cautious mermaid, and the female protagonist is compared to a pair of emotionally timid but free-flying birds. This is a love between fish and bird. The lovers who go in both directions are wasted due to misunderstandings. The relationship is warm and frustrating, but the disadvantage is that the plot rhythm is too slow and the conflict is not exciting enough. Although the supporting roles are designed The author is ingenious, but the presentation skills are not enough, so it feels a bit awkward (I personally think that one of the other three pairs of CPs can be removed and put in the follow-up variety show. There are too many threads buried now, and their stories are too fragmented to tell. For example, the relationship between siblings and fake CPs, the team of the boss can be placed in the follow-up variety show). In addition, the description of the relationship is a bit tired of being repeated over and over again. In general, it is a sweet pet novel, and there are many books to read.

Super, super, super good-looking. The love story in this book is different from other books. There is no so-called female competition. Everyone has different purposes for participating, and the character of each person is well portrayed. After reading the article, I also found that love is complicated, and everyone's way and understanding of love are also different. , But our fish and birds really moved me. I really recommend it. It will be updated soon. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's okay. Until I read Chapter 52, I felt a little strange [facepalm]. I'd say it's a sweet story, but it's okay. If you say it's a cool story, it's not very satisfying. I even felt it was a bit suspenseful. There are many literary descriptions, which are a little wordy, but there are many golden sentences. It was a bit frustrating to read, maybe it's because I'm more suited to fast-paced, refreshing writing.

To be honest, the author's writing style is really good! Literary skills are very profound. I sometimes think about why there are novels that I can't read and words that I can't read. When I saw this novel, I vaguely understood that when we read the novel and read the full text, we are reading the author's three views and the author's emotional value flow. Through this book, I felt that the author, at least during the time of this book, was probably an emotional person, and even a highly sensitive person. The paintings are painted with many strong and intuitive emotional flows and dazzling sensory experiences. Much like infp(?) I stopped and slowed down several times in the middle of this novel. Because the emotional fluctuations in my character are not strong, I felt a lot of discomfort when encountering this text. I finished reading it after taking my time. It has the feeling of a micro-group portrait, depicting many kinds of love in different shapes. I also followed the text to witness the character background, growth and changes of each member of the protagonist group. There are many "I"s in the world. In other words, love can exist in any form, and so can "I".

Stop, stop! The sweet love is certainly endearing, and the pressing and pulling is the most gripping. The writing is definitely lacking, and the imagistic techniques are still too much, but it is not a feature. The setting is simple and simple, which is my favorite again. But! Is anyone paying attention to the plot background? It's more exciting! When the original heroine first appeared, I was a little confused. I was confused about her image setting, her obscure emotions, and her appearance. Such an appearance marked the rejection of all the content of the original book. It wasn't until the aquarium accident, a complete showdown, and a clear statement. What I saw later was a more powerful core, which was the junction between the original book and reality in this novel. The original heroine's personal flesh and blood was the sentence "I decided to destroy him." "Less than 10% sure." How to say it? I have just finished reading Chapter 107. That statement is also the beginning of the trial of the original book. This crusade is also a defense of individualism. Group portrait is the most beautiful setting, I will always support you! (This article is similar to a micro-group portrait) Really, really, really say it again! Group portraits are the most beautiful setting! Ye Yuchen and Duan Zhou, Chen Jingxue and Meng Xing, and all the girls who lend a helping hand, as well as a life full of public love and a family full of secret love... In addition to love, there are still thousands of thoughts in life!

This is my first time reading a romance novel, but she really attracted me. Lin Lu and Lu Qilin seemed to be a match made in heaven. In the extra story, after knowing the origin of their names, this idea became even stronger. They both like each other and go in both directions, but at the same time they are afraid of the other person leaving. When describing the part about what love is, Lu: Love is that the senses tremble for him, Lin: Love is cowardice and courage. Both cowards are expressing their deep love. I also like the two pairs of deputy CPs, Mu Yihan Duan Zhou in "Broken Wood", Fu Anyan Tangli in "Tangli Jianxue", and Meng Xing who returns home to inherit the family business. The characters are three-dimensional, with a lot of details and reversals, and the emotional expression is very powerful. I like it very much. My feelings at this moment cannot be expressed in words, I really like each of them (*^▽^*)

This book is really good. Forest egret, road habitat forest Mermaid and flying bird should be a couple The timid bird tried to escape, but the naughty siren carefully held her in his palm. They are childhood sweethearts, a natural love, and the accumulation of seven years of separation. Luqi, Luqi, he really became the habitat of birds during the coward period and gave her a harbor. Their feelings can withstand separation, indifference, and wind and rain

Support the new book [Send Heart]. It is a sweet pet novel. I read it for three or four days. Overall, it is very good. Although the beginning is not so fascinating, as you read later, you will find that it becomes more and more interesting. The author's writing style is also very good. It has a feeling of being like a spring breeze. I also like the settings of the male and female protagonists. The author is also very positive in updating it. Highly recommend! [Eating melon][KISS]

Every pair of CPs has their own experience, and each person has their own shining points. From the beginning to the extras, Migratory Birds, Broken Wood, Tangyan, including Chen Jingxue's transformation, the shining points cannot be described in detail. Every female character is described very delicately. I like Ms. Liu very much. She makes me feel very gentle and powerful. She has her own name and is not replaced by "Mrs. Lu" or "Mama Lu". She has a clear understanding of herself and the world, can be considerate of others, and will bring strength to Xiaolin. In short, I like her very, very much [Send my heart] Lin Lu has great personal charm, and her career has given her a stable perspective on the world. My understanding of her is that I think she is a calm and clear person, and she has self-awareness. The charm she revealed from her initial avoidance of Lu Qilin and herself to her courage, to her true understanding of herself and her complete reconciliation is unparalleled. There is a sentence in the article that describes it particularly well. She gives people the feeling of "smoothness and peace of mind, heavy and light" after experiencing the vast world and seeing the world. As Lu Qilin grew up, I could see that he was very enthusiastic. It's also a bit childish. From the moment he learned about the "plot", he didn't care at all, then when Xiaolin was injured, he started to worry, and then the sum of everyone's strength condensed together. He has matured and seems to be slowly filling in another perspective. This process is like Xiaolin said: "He becomes stronger in his feelings for them in the process of complementing his perspective, and she feels happy about it." They will live happily and lightly in places where I can't see them. I just peeked into a corner of their world through this book and saw their wonderful lives [Love]

The author's writing style is very good, but I still want to mention some personal thoughts (from readers). Emotional foreshadowing does not need to be used all the time. It will make people's eyes brighter if it is used in some more conflicting places. It will be a bit tiring to keep laying the groundwork, and there is no way to have a particularly big emotional comparison between before and after. [Blowing kiss]

The writing is okay, it has a bit of a clean feel, but I don't like this type. I don't like the dead director and the smoky comments in it, as well as the male and female protagonists who don't open their mouths. Maybe this is the step-by-step love between two cowards. Maybe I prefer sweet articles. I'm sorry, but the author has written very well, and the writing can stand out. Everyone has their own love, but I give you a five-star love for you ᰔᩚ

I like the author's writing very much, it's like the warm sunshine on a spring day. The plain text is full of sensibility, but the brushstrokes are full of rationality. There is no restraint on the outpouring of emotions, and no deliberate exaggeration of the theme. (I originally had a lot to say, but I think it's irrelevant to this book so I won't go into details. Finally: This is really my first time writing a book review, so don't dislike it) (It will definitely be a hit (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤) One thing to note: I commented after reading it (≧▽≦)

Why is the score so low? This book is very nice! Many of the psychological descriptions of the characters and their actions are well done. The author's writing style is really good, natural and beautiful! Although I haven't finished watching it yet, seeing that the rating is so low, I still can't help but give it a try to get a high score. At least now that I've seen it, it touches me. Not only the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but also the couple like Broken Wood, I also like it very much. Just that kind of subtle feeling, I can get it! I'll keep looking at it, keep looking at it, it's really beautiful. Okay, actually it's a bit bland, compared to those great articles. When it came to the end, I didn't want to continue reading. I also stopped for a while and found that I hadn't finished reading the book on the bookshelf. When I continued reading, I couldn't connect with it. I forgot everything I should have forgotten [face covering]. But this is also its characteristic. It is very delicate. You need to calm down and read it. Overall, it is a very good book.

The psychological description written by the author is very beautiful. He writes the male protagonist's inner stubbornness, fear and paranoid and helpless love for the female protagonist. I like it very much. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] It's very well written

This book's emotions, setting, characters, as well as the overall world framework and selected elements are all pretty good! But when you read it, you will feel like you are reading poetry. There are a lot of metaphors, the feeling of being lyrical for the sake of being lyrical! The writing style is very good, but for the world framework of the novel, the structure uses too many lyrical words that may not be suitable! And it's because too many lyrical expressions can feel like seeing flowers in the fog, it's just prosperous, but I can't grasp the key points! The setting is great. I would love to see more books with similar settings!

What can I say, the writing style is very delicate, but after reading it, it always gives me a dark feeling in my heart. It looks very boring. Maybe I will like it when I am older, but I can't accept it now. This article is still acceptable.

Very unique book I think this book is very meaningful, especially the interpretation of emotions. Each group has its own unique way of getting along and its own understanding of emotions. Everyone's self-interpretation in the book is also very interesting. It really dissects the depths of the soul, but it is too profound. There are some things that I need to experience more to understand. The author's writing style is also very special. I think it's very stream of consciousness? It is a very artistic expression, a spiritual connection and a spiritual connection. It's really interesting, a very special book The names of the male and female protagonists are also very interesting, um, but what I feel most about is CP Duanmu. Their experiences and encounters seem to be all wrong, but love is real and getting along is real... And Ding Yu. To be honest, her words are quite shocking, but she can express herself bravely and not limit herself, which is also very admirable. After reading this novel, my interest in photography has greatly increased, hh Oh, after watching the extra, I suddenly became very curious about the story of the heroine's mother. It feels like she has a very unique life. By the way, there is also a guest star (I forgot her full name, sorry). What she did in the extra episode shows that she is also a very brave person, and she is always looking for her own meaning. Ah, there is also Ji Heng mentioned in the author's thoughts at the end. The ending arranged for him at the end is also very good. Talent should not be wasted. The author's changes also let me see another person who truly has a soul. Abba Abba talked a lot and highly recommended this book, especially when you want to pursue peace of mind, you can read it, try to touch it, and talk to it, maybe you will gain something.

It is a very good book. It is unconventional and makes people feel the slowness and sincerity of emotions. The reason why I feel like my childhood sweethearts is the tacit understanding. Their tacit understanding has always existed. They have grown together and we have witnessed each other's growth. Family affection and love have become their stories. I am really interested in the character of Helu. He is a photographer. He is intoxicated and immersed in nature. It gives people a sense of slowness. He is a bird. He is not afraid of wind and waves. He is not afraid of peaks. His own strength is absolute. Let the baby grow up in the future🥺

The writing is really good and the characters are very detailed. I held my breath when I read it. Every sentence is indispensable. And some of the metaphors are really good. The female characters are also very good. The story of the little bird and the little fish is really awesome. Ms. Liu has also been very awake. I have read more than 90 chapters so far. I really can't put it down these days. Highly recommended, highly recommended. It finally made me feel healthy again @Looking forward to the big new article [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker]

Very nice, I like the author's writing. It's very beautiful, and sometimes it's also very misty, like a bubble that bursts when you poke it, or like a specious dream. There are many psychological descriptions in the article, which are very delicate, and the timid and avoidant characters of the secret love are well portrayed. Although it is related to romance drama, it is very different.

It's very interesting. The author's psychological description is superb. The two cowards walked towards each other cautiously. I like it very much. The characters of the heroine and the hero are also outstanding. Highly recommended.

I stumbled upon this book, it's really good! ! ! Can't stop at all! Under the big pen, I feel the delicate and hot love! I'm timid, but I know it's you, so I'm willing to take the brave step I'm so cautious because I'm afraid of losing you

It's very beautiful, it's a very gentle and flowing love, between birds and fish, our migratory bird cp is super sweet.

How can I put it, reading the whole book gave me an indescribable feeling, a feeling that really can't be described in words, but I also inexplicably liked this book. I can't tell you what I like specifically, but I fell in love with this book inexplicably. It's ridiculous, but it doesn't stop me from really liking it. The character's self-narration at the end really gave me a deep understanding of each character and a clearer understanding of the previous plot.