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It was good at first, the plot was very attractive, and the author's writing was good, but I couldn't stand it anymore. According to the introduction, Ye Yu and Li Yu were a couple, but why did Jiang Xiaobai directly steal Ye Yu's first kiss? You said it was because of the old Taoist priest's words, Jiang Xiaobai misunderstood, so it's understandable that Jiang Xiaobai and Ye Yu got close, but this really crossed the line, right? If the protagonist is really with Li Yu and Xiaobai and Lei are together later, then this can be regarded as a big poisonous point. . It is suggested that the author change the paragraph to show that Xiaobai accidentally pushed Ye Yu down, and at the same time emphasize the "wall" between Jiang Xiaobai and the protagonist. After all, Jiang Xiaobai feels "there is a thick wall" when he is close to the protagonist, so it can be seen that Jiang Xiaobai's closeness to the protagonist is just a There will be a misunderstanding, and then there will be some plot to bring the relationship between the protagonist and Li Yu, Xiaobai and Lei back on track👌(The author can change it according to his own ideas, otherwise it will look like a real estrangement, and this feeling of estrangement will even last until the end of the book [face covering]). I still hope that the author can adopt my opinion🙏🙏. I finally found one that suits my taste. I don't want the book I like to fall into the quagmire again due to various reasons. If the author really didn't see what I said, or if the author just wrote this book for fun and didn't think it was dispensable, just treat it as if I didn't say anything←_←

It's very well written, don't worry about the nascent words