Training in Another World: As Abyssal Overlord, More Children, More Blessings

The article is well written and the plot is handled well, but it has a bit of a flavor [sneaky laugh][snear laugh][snear laugh][snear laugh][snear laugh][sneaky laugh] Tentacles!!!! , 6 Turned over

The content is pretty good, the protagonist is strong, the girl is easy to pick up, and there are a lot of fun moments. The plot is also smooth. Although there are no details, it is overall good. I personally think that the biggest problem is the combat power system. The protagonist starts in the fourth realm, and then any member of the lowest-level Black Iron mercenary group has the strength of the fourth realm. When did the middle-level combat power become bad? Then when the protagonist advances to a higher level, the enemies will also advance to a higher level, which seems too deliberate. Overall it's pretty good

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Jingji waited for Wei Wumei for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk 500 years, Zi Wentuo has waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng has waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, and Bainiang has waited for 500 years. Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying on the bed, with unconcealed anticipation on his face. Zuiyu smiled slightly. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and his eyes sparkled with tears. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update... It's really a bit too short. If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. That's right. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It's the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body, which also makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother is hurt or not, what does it have to do with the sister? Hurry up and add more updates, brother It's good to read, but one chapter is added every week on average. Are you gone, author, or are you just hanging on?

The writing is quite good, but I don't think it's Tony's fault.

Although it is a system of many children and many blessings, the content is not brainless. Each harem has a certain story and emotional line, and the length is reasonable and not too long. From the current point of view, it is not a boring pure stallion, the plot is still very interesting, the main line is clear, and there are a lot of foreshadowings to constantly fill in the holes, which is very good.

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Short, the author's sister-in-law must be very dissatisfied, right?

I like this kind of article that doesn't seem to be a cool article, but it is a cool article. It's very interesting to watch.

Okay, okay, very interesting subject 👍

Well enough! I hope I can grasp it later and don't collapse~