The Sword of the East Sea Immortal

Since no one has read it, let me review it for myself🤦 I wrote this book very seriously, but I have to tell the truth. The first half is just so-so, and the second half is very interesting. Please come and read it! Do you want to see the heroine be powerful and the absolute center of various events, and then rely on her own efforts and wisdom to step by step change the world from a barbaric society of the jungle to a fair and harmonious society created by her? Do you want to see many flesh-and-blood characters with different personalities? Do you want to see mortals break free from the shackles of gods and run towards a new life of freedom? Then come and watch "The Sword of the East China Sea"! Once here, you can see the ever-improving protagonists and new authors, and enjoy the joy of "developing the system"!!! Please come and see! Review time: The problem with the first half of the book is that the writing is poor in the second half, and the pace is slow, especially the Tianxing Mansion volume. At that time, I had not thought about the general plot, so there were many flaws. I will revise it when I finish the whole book... But! But the later part is really good, give me a chance😢If you feel tired, you can skip to watch😢 Regarding the wrong version of the introduction: I originally wanted to write a collection of short stories about monsters, but I didn't expect that God's calculations are not good. I was still struggling to write short stories in the first half of the book, but as I was writing, I was drawn away by the main line. Later, the setting gradually expanded, and I felt that writing the main line was more enjoyable than writing small stories, so it became a story that uses something as a clue to lead the plot... Sure enough, it was the first time I wrote a book and I still had no experience, so I couldn't control the direction of the outline. All in all, although I still have a lot of things that I haven't done well, but! But this book can be read. Your reading is the greatest encouragement to me! I will continue to code every day, so please feel free to follow up! The belated closing remarks, I had no idea where to post them before, and because of the poor data, my mentality exploded, and I was very decadent. After two years, another reader finally finished reading my first book and wrote a lot of comments. I was very moved and finally opened the folder called "The Sword in the East China Sea" again. It turns out that words really have flesh and blood. When I look back at myself again, I am really filled with emotions. I only have one sentence to encourage myself—— "Just like a player who breaks through the upper limit in a running game, only when you try your best and use your peak level in every step, can you break through your upper limit - people who have always been in the comfort zone will never be able to improve." The complete list is as follows: After struggling for a week, I decided to end it like this. Anling's story may not be perfect, but at least, I still wrote the ending I had envisioned. There are naturally a lot of "forks in the road": countless times, the plot has gone to places I didn't expect, but I happily accepted such "derailments" because I have always believed that a good story is not "created" by the author, but that it originally happened in a certain world, and the author just "recorded" what happened in the world. I have always believed that the characters in the book have their own souls, and I need to respect those brilliant sparks that burst out in my mind. Fortunately, such a spark of inspiration was also based on the world itself, and I was able to achieve such "arrogance" later on, which was even better than the plot I originally imagined! This may be the resonance between the author and the character, a spiritual journey that spans time and space. I must admit that as a new author who writes a serial for the first time, or even writes an entire story for the first time, what I lack is far beyond my imagination. My writing power is not enough to support me in completing such a large book. At the end of the writing, there are actually many holes that have not been filled in, there are still many foreshadowings that have not been collected, and the final ending is also a mess. But please forgive me. Every time I write a chapter, I try my best to write. I try to improve my writing skills as much as possible. If they say I am bad at fighting, then I will learn from it. If my writing skills are not good, then I will practice again. Just like a player who breaks through the upper limit in a running game, only when you try your best and use your peak level in every step, can you break through your upper limit - people who have always been in the comfort zone will never be able to improve. Looking back at the chapters from a few months ago, it seems now that they are so young and immature, but also rare and precious. After thinking about it for a long time, I decided not to modify it, but to keep the process from clumsiness to familiarity. Maybe if you look at this process ten years later, it will be a jar of fine wine that has been aged for many years, warm and clear, like an elder telling you the story of the past in front of the stove in winter. ——Of course ten years later! Because as long as I don't die, I will keep writing. It doesn't matter if no one reads it in the first year. Then I will write for two, three, ten, or twenty years, until my hair is gray and my hands can no longer type on the keyboard or lift the pen. Every work is my child, and completing a work is more important than perfection. I am very pleased that I was able to complete this book despite many difficulties, and I am also very fortunate that I had Donghai by my side during the most important year of my life. In the process of writing An Ling's life, it was not only her who grew up, but also me. "Sword of the East China Sea", this is its real name, and it is also the only name I recognize. The tomato-colored name is just an alias I used to gain popularity in order to gain popularity. However, the results are obvious - the popularity has not fluctuated at all. From January 2024, the daily serialization was updated to September, and only 8 book friends were willing to follow my serialization. Although I don't know who the book friends are specifically, please allow me to thank you. If it weren't for your support, I'm afraid I would have chosen to give up this book because of too much disappointment. In the new year, I plan to finish writing the novels that I have put aside before to relieve my own mental pressure. The first 14 chapters of this book were written by me in 2023. I want to finish writing this story and I want to get to know Anling as a person.

When I first read this novel, the introduction was mainly interesting. However, there was a section in the middle that was a little too long and I almost gave up, so I just persisted. There are still a lot of holes left unfilled. Are you ready for a big one? I don't know, but I hope An Ling will still stick to her original intention in the end. Does the name of the heroine of this book, An Ling, have any meaning? Nothing is fine. The character needs to be polished, but after so much experience, the mentality will change. I don't know what it will be like to get along with people in the future. I just look forward to it. To sum up, although it is a bit long, it is not difficult to read it in one go. Regarding the author of Three Immortals of the East China Sea, how do you plan to describe it? Or can the three of them meet An Ling again? I can't think of anything after that. I'll comment later when I know more about it (maybe?

It's quite good to read, no CP, it feels like a martial arts novel. An Ling is really a very charming person, and the writing is very good, but the ending is a little hard to understand. It seems that Emperor Shitian and Asura died together? And then restart the world? But it's good that the heroine, master and uncle are still alive, but there is no extra story. I really want to see the follow-up.

The heroine is courageous, responsible, kind, upright, and has no double standards. She has a good personality and the author's writing is also very good! This is not traditional cultivation! But it looks great!!

An Ling, who is just starting out, has profound martial arts skills, and it is not easy to reach the peak without a master and various connections. The words ⺀Anling written in the book are pure Guangzhou dialect and are worthy of appreciation