As his life draws to a close, Chu Dongyang looks back on his years. He honored his parents and cared for his younger siblings. He joined the army at eighteen and fought his way through decades of gunfire and bloodshed, eventually rising to the rank of great general. By any measure, he had achieved success and made the most of his time in this world.
His greatest regret was losing his wife in his youth and his son in middle age. In his later years, the only one by his side was the grandson he had raised himself.
Qianye was the least conspicuous, yet most dazzling, of the Thousand-Leaf Clear-Heart Lotuses in the courtyard of Chu Dongyang, the “hidden master.” She had taken human form.
She was inconspicuous compared with treasures of heaven and earth like the Bodhi tree and Enlightenment tea.
She was the most dazzling because, among all the immortal flowers, spiritual plants, heavenly treasures, divine beasts, and auspicious creatures filling the courtyard, she alone had taken human form. She became Chu Dongyang’s Dao companion, accompanying him through wars in every direction and across countless cycles of reincarnation.
In their previous life, an accident caused Hua Qianye to disappear, leaving Chu Dongyang alone for decades. As Chu Dongyang lay on his deathbed, Hua Qianye promised to give him a chance to be reborn.
It looks great. Please update it. Can the age of the male protagonist's youngest sibling be changed to a teenager? Otherwise, the male protagonist's mother would give birth to a baby at the age of thirty-seven. The male protagonist's mother had given birth to several children before, and she had to do farm work when she didn't have enough to eat. It is more difficult to give birth to twins at an older age. The age of the male protagonist's youngest sibling was changed to ten or twelve or thirteen years old. The male protagonist's mother gave birth to twins in her thirties, but she was almost forty when she gave birth to twins.
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