Doctor, My Sister Is Drooling When She Sees Me. Is There Any Help?

Well, how should I put it? [Thinking] It's pretty good-looking, even though it's a harem. The author's writing is good and the characters are well portrayed, especially Anhui. I like this character very much; the plot is very attractive. The author keeps working hard and hopes you can write better and better. I'll give you a five-star review for how well you wrote Anhui. Finally, the author, I hope Wanwan has a good ending. After all, I came here after seeing the title of the book (please add a tag in the introduction to avoid some people thinking it is a single female protagonist, thank you🙏). In fact, I didn't read the harem or the one with multiple female protagonists. The fact that I stayed and continued reading shows that this book attracted me; of course, maybe it was just my last bit of luck.

So far, this novel is pretty good, and each heroine has a good character, but I feel like the sister might have a knife behind her, and the ex-girlfriend might cause trouble. Judging from the current performance of the male protagonist, he should have a harem, so let's look forward to it [Thinking]

The writing is very good, the language is rich, the story is relatively plain, mainly about daily life, and there is no sense of suspense. Whether it is Feng Wan, Su Qing, or Sherry, the heroines are all good, but I don't know what the ending will be. I guess it will be a single heroine. The harem is also good, but it is a bit difficult to write about the harem on this subject. Finally, I hope the author can keep writing.

It's an urban emotional novel. I haven't seen this style of writing for a long time. Each female character has her own characteristics, with urban warmth, but also a bit like a liar and a banana. This kind of orthopedic plot is similar to "Problem Sister Falling in Love with Me", and it's worth picking up.

The scoring mechanism is very strange. In terms of plot content and writing, an 8 is definitely a must. In short, it is very interesting. First of all, there are no poisonous points so far, and the rhythm is also good. There are just too many female protagonists. My sister wants it, Su Qing wants it even more, and the boss is also good. What I like the most is that the male protagonist directly admits his relationship with Su Qing without any delay. Other novels always get stuck in the ambiguity without confessing, and then the female protagonist appears. This is what I hate the most. Now there is a biggest problem. The author, your update speed is very slow. I advise you to use rat tail juice [cool]

I have been following this book for a while, and I try my best to read the updated chapters every day. It is not that there are many exciting and empty plots in the book that make my second brother dominate my brain, but that I feel a little sense of familiarity and satisfaction. The familiarity is because the setting of the love between two lives under the same roof reminds me of the story of Qin Ze and Qin Baobao. I am satisfied that other characters do not show off for the male protagonist for no reason, nor do they become lustful because of the beauty of the female protagonist. I was also surprised that the author was a newcomer, perhaps it was the author's mature conception that made the characters appear so vividly on the page. Even if there are ambiguous or secretly exciting plots in the article, I can still feel the core of the knife, just like the nameless identity of Qin Baobao who sold newspapers in 1967, Qin Ze's time boils the rain This is one of the few books I've seen on Tomato that I'm satisfied with and I like. Even if it's a knife, I'm willing to swallow it. Finally, I sincerely thank the author for his gift

The rating shouldn't be so low, right now it doesn't seem to have any bad points [thoughts] It's beautiful, I really like it [Send heartfelt message] (ps: I changed the review just to see how long I have been watching "With My Sister". It seems that the duration cannot be seen on the homepage [Chigua])

Xiao Wan's cute details make her aunt laugh. She's much more interesting than other characters. She has a look like a night raid on the quilt, fearing that she will be taken advantage of but hoping to get close to her brother. But it's too arrogant, and it's also because the protagonist's setting is too slow.

Current progress: around one hundred and ninety chapters The plot is still okay, I wouldn't say it's too toxic, it's a step-by-step process. From the beginning, I only wanted to take in Su Qing to just take in Su Qing, and later I took in all of them (including her sister). It's a relatively normal process. There won't be many common problems with harem stories. It's more daily, with a proper career line and daily life, which is still very good. I don't have to talk about the writing style. It's more literary and artistic, and it's average among Tomatoes. This kind of writing style is just right in line with the theme of harem novels. I won't say that there are many problems. Occasionally, there are some slight embarrassments in the language, which is acceptable. The characters are created very well, and each heroine has a very distinct personality. The younger sister is arrogant and cold on the outside, hot on the inside, the junior school girl is gentle and sweet, and Sherry is the type who gives silently, and they complement each other.

The innocent Su Qing, the sweet An Ruo, the jealous Xiao Wan, the charming Shen Man, and the lovely An Ning make up for the regrets of the 26-year-old female tenant. Xiao An makes me love and hate her sometimes. Sometimes I like it very much, but most of the time it is a bit unreasonable. She is more angry with the male protagonist and wrongly accuses the male protagonist. She often provokes conflicts between the male protagonist and Su and Yang, while Su Qing An Ruo, An Ning, and Shen Man are my favorites. I like Su Qing's gentleness and kindness, Shen Man's ambiguous teasing, An Ning's obedience, and An Ruo's silent dedication.

I feel a bit like the younger sister of a big boss who has questions about right and wrong, but the author's writing is very good. Although the style is a bit similar, I personally think it is better. Come on

The writing is so good, the writing style is very good, the emotions are also very delicate, and the daily writing is very easy. It is close to the top in Tomato [Like] I felt uncomfortable watching the 26-year-old female tenant before, but I felt so happy after reading this book [Adoration] I would like to make some suggestions 1. Currently, we have Su Yangchen and four younger sisters, which I think is quite enough. Just like a very beautiful woman in a temple [facepalm]. If there are too many female protagonists, I feel that the portrayal assigned to everyone will be reduced. 2. I feel that the boyfriend of the protagonist is not very qualified (it may also be that he has too many girlfriends and is really too busy) and cares too little about the life of the heroine, or there are too few people in the book. A few supporting characters can be added to add some plot. For example, I can occasionally take Su Qing to and from get off work, get to know some of her colleagues, and have a few interesting things happen. 3. You can try to add some relatively strong abilities to the protagonist. At present, I feel that the protagonist is just a handsome office worker, but he has four beautiful girlfriends, and he also picked up a stock that he will never worry about in his life. This makes ordinary people like me feel envious when I look at it, and it is indeed a bit outrageous. [Cover face] 4. The others are gone now. However, in order to ensure the quality of the book, I suggest the author send the manuscript to me privately for review.

For me, a bookworm with nearly 5,000 hours, this book is one of the best urban harems I have ever read. Each heroine in the book has her own characteristics, and the author's creation is perfect. I like Shen Man's sincere love the most, the quirky Xiao Wan, the tolerant Su Qing who is "for love", and the pure Yang Anruo. In the end, I still hope that Xiao Wan and the male protagonist can receive the certificate, because everyone agrees! Xiaowan is also the main palace in my heart!

The female protagonists I have seen so far are Su, Yang, and Sister. To be honest, I like the other two more than Su, because there is no contrast between Su and Yang. The only thing that is better than Yang is that she is the real girlfriend. Female CEO Yang is pretty and rich, which is full of contrast, which is very nice. The younger sister is the best in the world. The title of younger sister is already 100%, and the portrayal is also very powerful. The male protagonist is not a beast. He has not forgotten the brother and sister (although they are not close, but the relationship is real) for so many years (and if it is really a biological sister, it would be a bit nauseating). The decision was made after hesitating for a long time, and he knew how to distinguish the occasion, and knew who his real girlfriend was in front of Su. Overall, well written

It's such a rare, very good novel. It reminded me of another book called "After the Breakup, I Became the Female Anchor's Personal Assistant". The style is very similar. I recommend the author to read it. The current results of both books seem to be less than ideal, but they are really good to read. I feel like my sister is very real. I also have a sister, so I feel a little bit more immersed in her. Maybe it's because of the length of the article, but I still prefer my younger sister, she's very cute… I want some candy… The author needs to persevere, there are not many good novels nowadays, come on! I will keep following this book!

It just got 9 points. I came here to congratulate you. It is a harem novel about daily life and delicate emotions. I like it very much. I hope the author will keep up the good work. I think it can get 9.5 Points [Like]

It's so well written. In fact, now that I see it, my favorite is An Ruo, but I have to take them all. My sister and Su Qing are so good. In addition, Shen Man was also picked up quickly. It's so to my liking. I can't resist vixen girls. It's faster and faster. I like the author so much.

There is nothing to say about the writing style. The plot is also very suitable for my taste. It is orderly and very comfortable to read. I am an impatient person, but I can calm down and read it slowly. The characterization is also very rich, and the characteristics of each character are very clear (emphasis on Yang Shu [Shy]) Then, I clicked in just to see my sister. When the protagonist and Su Qing were together soon, I was still thinking about whether there would be a knife in the back. I really like Anhui and hope to reform it, not forgetting the original intention, and strive to become popular as soon as possible [shy]

The plot is okay, I still like it. The author handles the emotional lines of each heroine very well. It is more daily life and will not make people feel bored. It has a warm atmosphere. It's just that the story is too classic, I hope it's a bit innovative, please come on. Also, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, come and code [sneaky laugh]

The writing style, rhythm, and plot are very good. Each heroine in the novel is well portrayed, the description is very delicate, and the image is vivid. In my opinion, the male protagonist is indeed quite attractive. The author has relatively profound writing skills. In addition, I really like this author. He is often active in the comment area and chats with readers. I hope the author can continue to write in the future [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, the emotions are delicate, and the plot is good. I hope there will be multiple female protagonists in the end.

This book is almost finished. Let me share my thoughts. First of all, the characterization is very detailed and vivid. If you say there is no reality, I can only say no, it is the novel you read only if there is no reality. Secondly, in terms of plot structure, it is true that the plot was buried deeply in the early stage, but it has nothing to do with the middle stage. It was used in the later stage when Xiaowan was born. It may also be that the author wrote the ending for convenience later. You may be able to guess the plot, but after all, it is free, and it is quite satisfactory. Compared with a bunch of poisonous novels, it is considered to be fine grain.

How can I put it, the writing style is indeed very good, basically 80% of the articles on Gossamer 🍅, the characters are also vividly described and have their own characteristics (but for me, the role of sister is not very likable, only arrogant but not coquettish, and some of the behaviors often make people a little speechless. I feel that being a royal empress lacks a sense of stability and shrewdness. Of course, this is just a character. For me personally, I hope there will be a change in the later period). Another point is that I feel that the character of the protagonist has not been well developed. He has become a scumbag without much foreshadowing and experience in the early stage, and many things are cobbled together for the development of the plot. Problems that can be solved by direct communication and smooth communication are written in a lot of space, which makes people feel a bit boring. Overall, it's very, very worth watching. I hope you can stick with it and look forward to what kind of ending it can write [Blow kiss]

Today is the second day after reading this book. I have a strong sense of immersion. The portrayal of each heroine is really realistic, from appearance to psychological activities, from the stinky girl Su Qing Anruo to Shen Man An Ning. After reading it, I fell into a trance. I really envy Feng Chen for having them, and as they said, they were lucky to meet Feng Chen.

It's not toxic, the plot is smooth, the characters have distinct personalities and don't overlap, and the emotional lines are also very detailed. I feel that it is completely worthy of 9.5 Points or more. Compared with the pure dog food novels, the emotional lines that are developed slowly and slowly are more worthy of appreciation. Compared with the regret stories, it will not make people feel frustrated. It depends on how to deal with these emotional lines reasonably in urban novels. This is also the most critical thing in my opinion.

Just by looking at the length, you know that I must have finished reading it, and it's not a troll or malicious, so I hope this comment will prevent a small number of readers from missing it. I'm saving the extra to read later, because it's so well written that I couldn't bear to finish it. Maybe lacking feelings? It makes me think that if I go to the next level, it will be the urban version of Spring and Autumn. There is nothing to compare with this, because I don't want to be scolded. In short, it still makes me feel less, and the connection is good enough. I don't get tired of watching it, and I am always interested in watching it. I hope the author will keep up his good work and write the same thing... I'm afraid I won't like other genres... Anyway, keep going, I like this book very much

The writing is pretty good, but some of the plots are a bit toxic, but it's still acceptable. The male protagonist is a bit useless, and his morals are a bit unmatched. Some parts feel like they were written for the sake of the plot. For example, if someone scolds the male protagonist's sister, the male protagonist will hit him directly, but the male protagonist's sister is ridiculed while drinking, and the male protagonist is acting like a turtle. Overall, the writing is really good, and you can still read it. There are some toxic points in the plot logic, but it's still acceptable. I hope the author's books will get better and better [OK]

First of all, the author's writing style is really good! It is truly a breath of fresh air in the world of tomatoes now dominated by golden fingers. At present, it seems that there are not many poisonous points, and the pace is very good. What attracts me most about this book is that the relaxation of his daily life makes me feel very comfortable! There is also the view on the heroine, try to have a harem, but for the city without golden fingers, it is difficult to create a reason for the harem. I am looking forward to how the author will write it. In summary, a sweet story about lazy urban love. [Eat melon][eat melon]

Help the author to clean up. Anyway, we should be satisfied to see such multiple female protagonists on Tomato. We can't pick out the stains in the final pure land. There is no obvious thunder. Come on!

I have been reading it for a while, but it is finally finished. It is a good book that I am going to read again. Although it is daily oriented, it makes people want to read it. The characters are also very lovable and have no poisonous points. The plot development transition is very smooth. I hope to see the sequel and the next book soon. This should be the best harem novel I have seen in 🍅. Keep up the good work, author! [Blowing kiss]